Infinite Worlds: Beginning with Chinese Martial Arts in Tianjin

It's saying that I couldn't bear it any longer and saw that the author chose a demon in the late Ming Dynasty for his second world. . . . Not vomiting, not happy. First of all, I don't want to say anything about Stitch Monster now. The opening chapter was written well, so it's okay to copy it, as long as they agree. But the question is, why do you copy everything??? People write that the White Lotus Sect is a saint, and that the saint's brother is the leader. In fact, this is a failure. You copied even the bad work without correcting it. I don't even know what you mean by writing this. Especially the role of Saint Brother, is it really necessary in your novel?? Secondly, there are so many stories that can be written in the late Qing Dynasty, can't you have some ideas and innovations of your own? All the plots are copied from others. The history of the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China was so tragic and majestic that just participating in the historical process is enough for you to write about. What's even more speechless is that you also set up a system, and the system task is to find Dragon Scale. I am really convinced. A failure among failures. . The most fucked thing to me is that the author chose the demons of the late Ming Dynasty as the second world. Why did the Qing Shi Ke you copied collapse? It was because the book started high and went low. The second volume was written in such nonsense that it was just for fun. The force value has completely collapsed, and the plot has no plot at all. The system of the demon world has changed, and there is no sense of progression. Add the pseudo-system flow, and the historical weight of the first volume is simply gone. If you ask me, I would also choose history for the second volume, so as to keep the weight of history, and honestly go from Qi training to climbing up the force system. Martial arts training is not the center of the novel, the center should be the plot. The majesty and weight of history cannot be compared with martial arts novels. . That's all, let the author think about it carefully. Moreover, I couldn't understand the first volume and I was speechless.

To be honest, the author's educational level is really not high. He should know that poppies should not be lit even if he has been to junior high school.

There were some brilliant pictures at the beginning, in the style of Gu Huoniao. After killing Cixi, it immediately turned into an ordinary white text. The fierceness of the enemy and the clear-minded thoughts were all gone.

It's wonderful. Nowadays, few people write about the national martial arts of the Republic of China. They all write about the infinite worlds and all kinds of nonsense.

Copying here and there, in just a dozen chapters, I saw the shadow of the bird and the guest in green shirt. The writing is not bad, I can only say this

Many people ask, what is the black dragon? Let me explain in unison, the black dragon is a totem! This book is indeed an imitation of the Guhuo Bird. The big brother made the Yanfu, and I made the totem! The black dragon is a totem, the protagonist walks with a totem, and his totem is the black dragon! The writing style of this book is similar to that of Gu Huoniao, but the content is definitely different. Secondly, I am definitely not as good at writing as the big brother. There is no doubt about this, Zhuyu comes first. I can only say that in the first copy, I tried my best to write the martial arts in my heart! The following dungeons are also as mentioned in the introduction, there will be monsters, mechas, etc., Etc. I cannot guarantee anything else, but the quality will definitely not be worse than the current content of the first dungeon! To be honest, if I plan to write an original copy in Zhutian Infinity, this decision is very difficult! After all, Zhutian still belongs to the same fan category, so it is quite difficult to be original. In addition, this title is not popular, and I didn't pass the first round of testing, which is quite helpless. When I tested the water, there were no new books in the library, resulting in a poor foundation and making promotion a luxury! But, I still want to keep writing! So, I hope that brothers and friends who think this book is not bad, parents who live in food and clothing, try not to keep books! After all, writing a book is definitely a hobby, but if you want to talk about it, you also have to eat, right? Please read more and read the latest chapters, please! You see, I write, cooperation will benefit both sides, right? I still hope that everyone will support me. After all, as a street fighter, I also want to try to see if I can make a living by writing books. I work full time, so the cost of trial and error is quite high. I won't let you down, I hope that all the parents who live in daily life can also give me a little hope! Thank you!

Bad news, stitch monster, bad news, a mess of stitches

The writing is good, although there are many traces of routines that can be seen. Several households have the same direction.

I'll go -_-||It's popular now to renovate old novels?

I just came back from the reward to speak, and I always feel as if I have seen it before. Did it come out and rewrite it after it was cut before?