I Become Superhuman by Investing Points

After reading a few chapters, I found numerous flaws. 1. His parents are dead, and he is already suspicious. He only talked to the policewoman for a few words before asking her to teach him martial arts, and she agreed. 2. After teaching him fighting techniques, he didn't say much more than a few chapters before asking the police to help him sell his family's gold.

Two chapters turned me off, 6. The protagonist's bloodstains and the traces of treatment—is the forensic pathologist just a figurehead? Is trace evidence just for show? The focus upon entering the police station isn't on investigating the case, but immediately on teaching hand-to-hand combat. Your writing is clearly lacking, and your narrative method is wrong.

3. With just a few words and a voice, Sister Sheng can teach you martial arts. Normally, even if your parents are dead and there's no family affection left, you'd still have to pretend, right?

The whole family is being sacrificed to the heavens before starting to chase girls. Shouldn't a normal person learn basic combat skills by going to a combat gym or martial arts school? First, the police are no relation to you. Second, they just had a murder case and took your family's case; do you think they'd have time to take time off work to teach you?

Authors who write story beginnings like this should really learn more about detective work and psychology, and have a basic understanding of criminal cases, otherwise it'll be so awkward!

At first, they fought tooth and nail to seize the Li family's secret martial arts, but suddenly they're inseparable. How ruthless!

Three chapters and I'm giving up. It's rare to come across a book that's even more simplistic than a complete novice. 😂

I sincerely suggest the author read a few realistic crime novels before writing this book. What kind of garbage were those first few chapters? And then they blame the readers for mindless criticism. Don't they even consider whether their writing is even thoughtless? There are many reasons why they didn't die, but why did they have to try to explain why they created an alibi?

To be honest, this book is a bit simplistic. The supporting characters seem almost stupid, and the protagonist is overly modest. The fight scenes don't quite capture the feeling of the story. This is related to the author's education, experience, and cultural level.

The author seems to be a novice, as the writing style is somewhat immature. It would be helpful if the author could keep the protagonist from speaking, as the protagonist's speech sounds rather childish, like that of a primary school student.