I Become Superhuman by Investing Points

After reading a few chapters, the poisonous points are dense. 1. Her parents died and she was living alone. She was already suspicious, so she asked someone to teach her fighting skills without saying a few words to the policewoman, and the policewoman agreed. 2. After teaching fighting skills, within a few chapters, he didn't say a few words and asked the police station to help sell his gold. 3. My parents died only two days ago, and I didn't know the policewoman very well. Suddenly I was able to flirt with the policewoman with a smooth tongue. Goodbye.

Two chapters persuade me to quit, 6. There are blood stains on the protagonist and traces of treatment. Are forensic doctors just doing it for a living? Is traceology a display? Once you enter the police station, the focus is not on investigating the case, but on teaching fighting. Your writing style is obviously not good enough, and your narrative method is also wrong. I thought the protagonist was deliberately too young, but I didn't expect it to be the author's problem. Normally, the criminal police enter the scene, and soon the protagonist will be questioned about why the blood stains need to be dealt with, etc.

3 In two sentences, you can teach you fighting skills by saying "sister". Normally, if your parents are dead, you have to pretend even if there is no family relationship.

The whole family started to pick up girls after paying homage to heaven. Shouldn't the average person go to a fighting gym or martial arts gym to learn about fighting? The first police officer is not related to you, and the second policeman has just had a murder case and took over your family's case. Can he take time off from work and solve the case to teach you? Third, find a female police officer to learn how to fight (on the bed). It is clearly said that if you are afraid of death, you need to learn some self-defense. Shouldn't normal people find a professional and have time to learn? Similar to martial arts gyms, fighting gyms, etc., Payment is arranged immediately, and can be adjusted according to your schedule. Even if it is not possible, you should find a policeman who looks more powerful. After all, you have no sense of security, shouldn't you find someone with a stronger sense of security? A good guy comes to find a good-looking girl. Are you afraid of death or not? Is it cool to die under the peony flower and be a ghost?

The author, who writes this kind of story at the beginning, should learn more about detective science, psychology, and have a basic understanding of criminal cases, otherwise it will be embarrassing!

At the beginning, I wanted to rob the Li family's secret martial arts, and beat him to death. He just put on a pair of trousers in an instant. It's really poisonous.

Three chapters to persuade me to quit. It's rare to come across such a book that is even more novice than a novice. 😂

I sincerely recommend that the author read more realistic criminal investigation novels before writing a book. What the hell are you writing in the first few chapters? Why are you blaming the readers for being so brainless? Why don't you check whether what you wrote has any brains? There are many reasons why you didn't die, but you insist on trying to explain why you created an alibi? Fortunately, you are the author. Once the halo of intelligence is turned on, not a single professional criminal policeman goes to the scene of the murder, but only outsiders...

To be honest, this book is a bit of a no-brainer. The supporting characters are just like Jiang Zhi, and the protagonist is too low-key. The fighting scenes can't convey that feeling. This has something to do with the author's education, experience, and education level.

The author is probably a novice, and his writing style is a bit immature. It is recommended that the author can make the protagonist not speak as much as possible. I feel that the protagonist talks a bit like a primary school student.