Dark Rampage

Night and snow, left and right sex, don't play tricks on others, two big pineapples, when they enter the world again, Xu Xian, Zhengyi Di, and the old witch doctor are all old eunuchs. I quite like their novels, but it's a pity that I'm getting further and further down the road of eunuchs. 1. Night and Snow: I have changed several vests since "The Tyrant of the Ultimate Fist", but I stopped writing them after writing dozens of chapters. 2. Left and right x: I am also an old eunuch after "Dark Super God". Now I am writing "Martial Arts Mad Song". The results are not bad. I wonder if I will have the chance to finish it. 3. Don't play with others: After the end of "Era of Dawn", there was no movement after the eunuch in "Gou Zai Shen Wei World" (it seems because something happened). 4. Two Big Pineapples: This is the author. Both "Ji Dao Fist King" and "Hong Tui Martial Arts" are quite a pity. The plots have reached the later stages, and they are just eunuchs. In the later stages of the book, they have been eunuchs. 5. Re-entering the world: His books have always been mindless and refreshing. After finishing four or five books, he frequently read them, and now he is writing one. 6. It's really not Xu Xian: Since the first book was finished, I have written several more eunuch books, and now I have also opened a new book. 7. Zhengyi Di: I like to write about the end of the world. In the later stages of writing "I was born in hell", there was no movement. I don't know what happened. 8. Old Witch Doctor: I have written a book since "I Just Want to Practice Horizontally" and "Start by Breaking the Limits of the Human Body", and now I have written a new book "Born as a Human, Eat Alive as a God". The results are not very satisfactory. I don't know if I can persist until it is finished.

Not to mention his own common-sense naivety in assuming that no one would notice that he had killed more than a dozen people. Even adding points is a serious problem. The human body is not a game character, it is a dynamic balance system. It is a miracle that extreme points are added without sudden death. Always focus on power, but have forgotten how power is exerted? Defense determines physical strength. There is something called reaction force. If you punch a thousand pounds, the reaction force will also act on your fist. Speed ​​is also related to reaction force, and reaction force is related to instantaneous explosive power. Many attributes do not exist alone, but are characteristics expressed by the strength of the body structure.

Studio article, it's toxic, you can withdraw it

Hello author, I have copied this book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, the popularity is also very high, and there are a lot of donations. I plan to pick up a new car at the beginning of July. I hope you can add a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious. I hope you will not be ignorant.

How can I put it this way? This book is roughly in the category of food. It's not particularly good but not bad either. The author always likes to put poison in it, which makes people very uncomfortable. At the beginning, the protagonist had visual and auditory hallucinations. After a check-up, he found that there were shadows on his brain. He thought it was a brain tumor. When he got out of the hospital, Golden Finger woke up and found that there was a switch in his mind to travel through the world. He had already traveled through it several times. Times, he still insisted that he had a brain tumor, and his self-healing ability was enhanced. He actually thought that he would be cured faster after the operation; He had a conflict with a gang, and was blocked by the gang behind him. He beat more than a dozen people to death in one go. He also chased him to his lair and beat the gang boss to death. He actually thought that what he did was perfect. There was no surveillance on the road, and the police couldn't find him without leaving fingerprints! Doesn't the author know that there is something called an interview survey? It was a pity that I didn't have a gun when I killed the living corpses. I killed the living corpses every day to collect some gold and silver jewelry to buy money. I sold them for three to five thousand each time. After killing the black boss, he left directly. He didn't want any money from the gangs and the gun in the black boss's hand. The protagonist had to bear with nausea and touch the corpse even if there was a gold earring on the living corpse. The real gangster's lair didn't even look for anything valuable. I just can't complain anymore

I have read more than a dozen chapters and I feel very disappointed. Many details are imperfect and there are many poisonous points. It feels like the protagonist is playing a game without the caution that a normal person should have.

To be honest, the subject matter is good. Not to mention the writing is very good, and the plot unfolds normally. There is no problem. After reading more than a dozen chapters, the plot points are a bit too much. I don't know if the author is too young or something. It's all just to promote the plot. There is no common sense in life. In places where knives are controlled, gangsters use guns to shoot. There is a big fuss. Ordinary people are not allowed to have them. So what's wrong, gangsters are also given special privileges. If you don't want to give the protagonist a gun, just write that the money is not enough. In order to forcefully create a conflict between the protagonist and the gang, a shared house and a room. I have to move two or three times. I am afraid that I won't see the gang blocking the door. I keep saying that it is difficult to bring a knife and a 2-meter spear. Who can see it under the quilt? Just ask if there is a clothes drying pole. All the way, you are forcing me to renaissance? 😅

I specially ordered a chapter to speak. I have read more than ten pictures and it is good. But author, can you write the protagonist's IQ a little higher? I feel like an idiot. After improving so much physical fitness, I am still there to treat diseases. I am struggling with my own brain shadow. I can travel around the world. I still don't understand that it is caused by changes? It really feels like a drama. I want to give the protagonist two big mouths.

The early setting of the superpowers and life clusters (combat organs) of this book are very interesting, and I am looking forward to the sparks of the collision of various superpowers. But as soon as the C-class manpower's nihilistic stance came out, it immediately turned upside down! The Void Stance is too comprehensive. It can attack and defend and ignore all abilities. The abilities and life clusters in the early stage have become a roadside. If you can't break the Void Stance, any ability will be useless. Later in the battle, it will be a purely numerical competition. Hey, my Void Stance has 100,000 tons and your Void Airport has 9.90,000 Tons. You just can't beat me. I turned the early blooming of a hundred flowers into a dominant force in the later stage. The author who has been writing books for so many years can write such a setting is a talent!

To be honest, there is no difference between the two novels: Yakuza Fist King, written in 2018, and Dark Assault, written in 24. Except for the battle escalation part, I always like to write mindless supporting characters. The vulgar and pretentious plot written in 2018 is still copied in 24, but there is no progress at all.