Dark Rampage

Night and Snow, Left and Right x, Don't Play with People, Two Big Pineapples, Back in the Jianghu, Not Xu Xian, Righteous Di, The Old Witch Doctor is all an old eunuch. I quite like their novels, but unfortunately they're going further and further down the path of eunuchs.

Putting aside his own naive and absurd assumption that no one would discover he had killed more than a dozen people, he clearly lacked common sense. Even adding stat points is a serious problem. The human body is not a game character; it is a dynamic balance system. It would be a miracle if you didn't die suddenly from extreme stat point allocation.

This is a studio-written article; it's toxic, so please read it carefully.

Hello author, I've copied this book onto other platforms, and the reader feedback has been quite positive, it's very popular, and I've received a considerable amount of donations. I plan to buy a new car in early July, so I hope you can update a few more chapters to avoid affecting my earnings and to prevent my readers from getting impatient. I hope you won't be ungrateful.

Well, this book is generally considered passable, not particularly good but not bad either. However, the author always seems to add some toxic elements, making it quite unpleasant to read. At the beginning, the protagonist experiences visual and auditory hallucinations and undergoes a checkup, where a shadow is found on his brain, which he initially suspects is a brain tumor.

I read more than ten chapters and felt very disappointed. Many details were incomplete and there were quite a few flaws. It felt like the protagonist was playing a video game and didn't have the caution that a normal person should have.

To be honest, the subject matter is good; the writing isn't particularly outstanding, but the plot unfolds normally without any major issues. After reading a dozen chapters, the plot has too many flaws. I don't know if the author is too young or what. It seems completely driven by plot progression, lacking any common sense.

I specifically ordered a chapter to comment on this, and after reading over ten pages it was alright, but author, could you please make the protagonist's IQ even a little bit higher? He feels like an idiot. He's already improved so much in terms of physical abilities, yet he's still asking for medical treatment and worrying about his mental trauma.

The early concepts of superpowers and life clusters (combat organs) in this book were particularly interesting, and I was quite looking forward to the sparks flying when various superpowers clashed. However, the moment the Void Field, which every C-rank character possessed, appeared, the story took a sharp turn for the worse!

To be honest, the two novels, *Yakuza: Master of the Extreme Fist* (written in 2018) and *Dark Strike* (written in 2024), are practically identical. Aside from the combat progression parts, they both love writing brainless supporting characters. The clichéd, pretentious plot from 2018 is still being copied in 2024; they haven't improved at all.