Another World: I Loaded a Career Panel

The Japanese are really crazy. Except for Bone King, Shen Yong, Slime, and Shadow, the other protagonists of the isekai anime I have watched are persecuted every day and even lick dogs. Note, I'm talking about the episode I've watched, don't talk about my map cannon or anything like that.

Do you know what it means to swing a sword 100,000 times a day? Just over 80,000 seconds in a day

The most common quarrel is the premise of 100,000 times a day. They are all fighting for not enough time and the body can't bear it. Let's just say, doesn't the introduction say that there are multiple professions? You can't awaken other professions and then awaken this one? Do you have to be the first to awaken?

Go away, others can call you a waste, but you can't think of yourself as a waste. You're not lovable from the beginning, so why bother...😥

The pace is too slow, even for light novels. There are too many settings and it's boring. I feel like each article spends a lot of space writing about boring settings and skills. The character description is too cliché, what kind of ancient characters... Am I reading a light novel from ten years ago? The ones from ten years ago were more advanced than this. The Douban score is 1. I estimate that the final score may not be as good as the previous one.

I don't know how to complain. Starting from 104, I copied and pasted to add and change the plot. Moreover, the span from the Japanese adventure Western fantasy to the Xiuxian plus system was too big, and the plot was seriously fragmented. If you don't understand what the author is thinking, just change the book and cut it. Why do you use the shell to sell dog meat? Talking about whether to change the result or copy a bunch of previous plots, it feels like feeding Ollie to 😒 Goodbye

There is nothing wrong with the idea of ​​the book, but if you want to write a high-quality book or even write it well, I suggest you overhaul it. There is no future for this book at the moment, and there is no actual content even in the 200 chapters. There are too many poisonous points! Let me take stock of it for you 1: Indigenization of thinking The biggest difference between a time traveler and an indigenous person is in thinking, but they have been assimilated. So, is this time traveler identity just to explain the existence of your plug-in? This directly affects the upper limit, or even lowers the upper limit 2: Multi-career planning Normally speaking, the setting is okay, because the passive existence of the profession removes a big poisonous point to a certain extent. You should never ignore the only nanny profession in this world for fear of becoming a woman! The existence of combat animal husbandry is a self-contained system, especially in this dangerous world. Being able to recover yourself is equivalent to one more life. Before surviving, you first consider whether JJ can be saved. This is really explosive. If it is really dangerous, do you believe in yourself or your teammates? If your teammates are held back, you cannot wait to die 3: Mana consumption problem This cannot be said to be a poisonous point, it can only be said that the setting is incomplete. If the skills are not proficient, the actual combat significance of your mana consumption has been greatly reduced. You have to understand that other people do not have multiple professions, and the early skill consumption is so explosive. Do you really think that one skill can turn the tide? I am too lazy to talk about the rest for a while... You can read everything in the book world, but if you really want to write well, you should collect more opinions and organize your thoughts I have also written novels myself, and it is true that it is not just a matter of skill. Reality does not require logic, but writing a book without logic is really not possible

King of ideas, but the plot writing is shit

I have finished this book, and the last few chapters have nothing to do with this book, they are copied and pasted from other places.

I really don't want to curse, so I can't bear to post it once. The plot is messy and it gives me a headache. If you don't want to write it, you don't have to write it. It's the first time I find an excuse to say I don't have time. How many times can I be disgusted?