Prince of Tennis: Starting as a Rikkai Dai Substitute

I just can't understand what the author wants to do. I feel like there's something wrong with the outline.

Sure enough, the eunuch was released. Before it was released, the protagonist had just interacted with readers before he transferred to school. At that time, he had a premonition that he would not be able to go far. It has not been updated for six days now. Sure enough 🙂

The author's writing is very good, and his sentences are fluent and logical. He is rare among online writers, especially among fan authors. He only officially became a substitute in Chapter 37. The pace is a bit slow, the system is not turned on, and it is not refreshing enough. I hope the pace can be accelerated later. It can be seen that the author wants to write a protagonist with a clear growth curve. Come on, a monthly ticket will encourage you 🙂

It was the right thing to leave Tatekai, otherwise we would be invincible. But what do you mean by transferring directly to another school like this? You should at least write that your parents moved because of their job promotion. This makes him look like a villain who will do anything for points.

It's completely too rigid, what's Kanto level, Kanto level second rate, third rate, first rate, national level, fools all know that third rate can't beat second rate, Kanto level first rate can't beat national level no matter how hard it is, and national level is also divided into first, second and third rate, so the level score is so detailed and it's still a gross competition, just look at the level, it's still a gross thing

With Nanjiro Echizen's strength, even Seigaku cannot win the national championship. At this stage, any teammate can win against Tatekai University?

Shouldn't we become stronger, challenge Yukimura Sanada, and then rise to the top on our own?

To be honest, among the entire Prince of Tennis, apart from U17, the most powerful one is Yukimura Seiichi. Tezuka Kunimitsu is a little bit behind, but almost the same. Fuji, Sanada and Atobe are in the same team. Ryoma can beat Yukimura Seiichi because of the protagonist's halo.

What can the author say? It feels like the outline is not well planned. If you are not going to write a web article that is invincible, you have to write it interestingly. And the author's plug-ins are very useless and unattractive. There is no intuitive feeling, and I still don't know what skills the protagonist knows. A common problem among fan authors is that they suppress the protagonist at the beginning, and the rhythm is too slow. If you only enter the main text after it is published, the audience does not have that much patience to wait. The other one joins Yamabuki, and there is an additional protagonist. Your teammates have all improved, but under your arrangement, your opponents have also improved by leaps and bounds. How can you win the championship in this way?

Author, I feel like you are going to kill yourself. Let me give you a suggestion. If you let Yukimura's illness follow the original, wouldn't there be no captain in the second year? Do you think it makes sense?