Net King: Starting from Li Hai's Substitute

Author, come on, work hard to update💪

I just can't understand what the author wants to do. I feel like there's something wrong with the outline.

Sure enough, the eunuch was released. Before it was released, the protagonist had just interacted with readers before he transferred to school. At that time, he had a premonition that he would not be able to go far. It has not been updated for six days now. Sure enough 🙂

The author's writing is very good, and his sentences are fluent and logical. He is rare among online writers, especially among fan authors. He only officially became a substitute in Chapter 37. The pace is a bit slow, the system is not turned on, and it is not refreshing enough. I hope the pace can be accelerated later. It can be seen that the author wants to write a protagonist with a clear growth curve. Come on, a monthly ticket will encourage you 🙂

It was the right thing to leave Tatekai, otherwise we would be invincible. But what do you mean by transferring directly to another school like this? You should at least write that your parents moved because of their job promotion. This makes him look like a villain who will do anything for points.

It's completely too rigid, what's Kanto level, Kanto level second rate, third rate, first rate, national level, fools all know that third rate can't beat second rate, Kanto level first rate can't beat national level no matter how hard it is, and national level is also divided into first, second and third rate, so the level score is so detailed and it's still a gross competition, just look at the level, it's still a gross thing

With Nanjiro Echizen's strength, even Seigaku cannot win the national championship. At this stage, any teammate can win against Tatekai University?

Shouldn't we become stronger, challenge Yukimura Sanada, and then rise to the top on our own?

To be honest, among the entire Prince of Tennis, apart from U17, the most powerful one is Yukimura Seiichi. Tezuka Kunimitsu is a little bit behind, but almost the same. Fuji, Sanada and Atobe are in the same team. Ryoma can beat Yukimura Seiichi because of the protagonist's halo.

It was a pity that I suddenly decided to leave Rikkai University after writing a very good book.

Author, I feel like you are going to kill yourself. Let me give you a suggestion. If you let Yukimura's illness follow the original, wouldn't there be no captain in the second year? Do you think it makes sense?

What can the author say? It feels like the outline is not well planned. If you are not going to write a web article that is invincible, you have to write it interestingly. And the author's plug-ins are very useless and unattractive. There is no intuitive feeling, and I still don't know what skills the protagonist knows. A common problem among fan authors is that they suppress the protagonist at the beginning, and the rhythm is too slow. If you only enter the main text after it is published, the audience does not have that much patience to wait. The other one joins Yamabuki, and there is an additional protagonist. Your teammates have all improved, but under your arrangement, your opponents have also improved by leaps and bounds. How can you win the championship in this way?

The current problem is that the transition is too abrupt. The reason why I stayed well is because I went to another school to achieve a higher position. Winning the championship system will improve my strength faster. This gives the protagonist an inexplicable feeling. After all, your first year has passed. If you transfer to another school, you will never win three consecutive championships in junior high school. And the protagonist's own strength is relatively weak. Even if he gets admitted to another school, what about the minister? That school may not even be able to pass the regional competition. As for strong teams, most of their managers are at the national level, and you may not be able to make it. The most important thing is that as soon as you come up with this idea, all the previous friendship parts of Mr. Rikkai are basically invalid. After all, the reason you transferred to another school was to become stronger. But the problem is that your own club is not even in the top three. To put it bluntly, if you don't want to write the plot of Li Hai Da. You can definitely start from other aspects, such as parents getting promoted. For things like changing schools, it would be more comfortable to not let the protagonist take the initiative and put him in a passive position to watch. And I personally recommend that you delete some of the previous conversations with the Li Hai team members, otherwise it will become more awkward as you watch it. It took you so long to write something, but you, who thought about transferring to another school, wrote it all in vain

It would be great if the starting point of this book is to win the championship with the team and activate the system. How many readers can be left if the protagonist is suppressed all the time?

So far it's okay, I can watch it. The move names should not be as abstract as the Osiris Sky Dragon Akaiou Fist next door.

The pace is fast. Have you read the comments? If you are so easily distracted, stop reading comments and focus on writing a book.

In the original work, Tachikai Yama and Makinofuji were two consecutive hegemons, and now the protagonists have changed schools and they are two consecutive hegemons. There's no point in following someone else's old path.

Which school is better to go to? Aogaku, Hyotei, Yamabuki, Fudoho, and Tentenhoji. If you want to compete with Rikkai University in the next two years, you must have team members with the qualifications to realize their strength. Remove Seigaku, Hyotei, Tentenhoji captains, and Yukimura. The labels are too heavy, and only Yamabuki and Fudoho are left. I don't deny that Tachibana Yoshihei's captain label is also very heavy, but it is only in the early stage, and he has a little drama with U17

Let me give you some useful information to break the brainwashing bag. Strength ranking of junior high school students after the national competition (prologue). T0 Tenki Ryoma T0.5 Destroy the Five Senses Yukimura T1 Six Ouija Sanada, Two Phantoms Tezuka T2 Six Anti-Fuji (Look down on Fuji? People The fifth chapter of the solid prologue) T3 The real protagonist Kintaro (practice for several months, pure cheating) T4 One Chitose, unlimited ball blasting Lion King Tachibana, Phantom Nioh, Shiraishi. (Friendly reminder, Shiraishi's golden wristband is an additional patch after the start of u17.) T5 Ice World Trail Club T6 Muhou, Yanagi T7 other non-national players In the Ice World Trail Club National Competition, he was defeated by Ryoma who only had the basic selfless state + semi-disabled domain + no open any hangups. Obviously, he could not beat the Plus version of Open One Door + Full Domain Tezuka. The one-field Tezuka is the unit of measurement for the national competition, and the Ice Boundary Club < One-field Tezuka. The comics directly show people who are greater than Ichitezuka: Ryoma, Fuji, Yukimura, Sanada, Nioh, Chitose. The comics indirectly show people who are greater than Ichitose Tezuka: Kogane [Chitose considers himself inferior] The comics indirectly show people who are on par with Ichitose Tezuka: Tachibana Yoshihei [Chitose said that if Tachibana hits his blind spot with a blast ball, he will lose], Shiraishi [Tezuka thinks Shiraishi is more difficult to deal with than Chitose]

NetKing's U17 World Cup chapter is a joke! The previous work was too awesome, but in the end, when it came to the World Cup chapter, it had to return to normal! It's all a joke that the light ball hits another dimension! (The anime has already been released. To be honest, a rating of 2.0 Is too high. Not only is it bad, but the plot is also rubbish.) I suggest the author make magical changes!