The Immortal Path of Immortality: Start by Going Down the Mountain to Raise Cranes

The author's writing is too brain-burning. This is not how Shuangwen writes it. It would be nice to just kill the city lord. You go about it, and although you are very rigorous, the readers will already run away. No one reads this kind of rigorous traditional writing nowadays.

The character is too soft, has no personality, is not decisive in killing, and is bullied by an ordinary city lord. It's boring.

It doesn't describe the appearance of cultivating immortals at all. Mortals are not afraid at all, and they dare to attack and threaten you.

Generally speaking, the author's protagonist is very uncomfortable to watch.

I really don't feel anything when I write it. It seems too frustrating and not interesting at all.

Has anyone read this book? If so, leave a comment in the comment area and let me know.

Is anyone reading this book? How is it written? Is it worth following?

The contract has been sent to the duck, and the second update will be resumed.

If you find it interesting and want to read it, please give me a few words to encourage me.

The plot of the novel is about obtaining opportunities, which seems awkward and weird.

The writing is very good, please comment, brother.

I am a reader-turned-author, and I don't make a living by writing books. However, I have been receiving unwarranted abuse recently, which makes me very confused. I can't afford to offend and hide, so I set a fan value of 1 to speak. I forgot to read the book sincerely. I apologize to all readers who really read the book.

It won't be updated anymore. Can you give me a message?

Seize the body, why are you so brainless? I use your body as the author to live. Let's think about it in the future. The author has...

Some people always say that the protagonist has no blood. I want to ask the protagonist how a sixth-level Qi practitioner who raises spiritual beasts can kill the wife of the city lord who is an eighth-level Qi practitioner. And she is also a monster. Isn't she looking for death? It's really uncultured to criticize someone before you finish reading it, and you can leave without reading a book written by another author, and you still scold someone in a book review.

The latest chapter cannot be posted. It has been under review. I posted it last night and found out this morning. I changed it.

I need an interview today, updated at 9pm

The update is so slow😭

Tudou is very generous and his opinions are very pertinent. Readers' opinions are very important. Sometimes I may think readers know or understand it, but in fact many things still need to be explained in detail.