
The Immortal Path of Immortality: Starting from County Officials
长生仙道:从县吏开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 94k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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42Chapters
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The last post mentioned a few areas where my personal senses were average, but they were really minor issues or not even a problem. I want to post a separate post to praise this book. This book is worth it! First of all, the description of the heroine is very good. It is the first description from a third perspective, and the temperament of Guzhi Aoxue comes out at once (it is still a small complaint, the eighth-level character is really empty). The plot is also very smooth and compact. Moreover, the solution is unexpected enough, but it is very consistent with the protagonist's Goldfinger setting, because Goldfinger is very violent in solving crimes, and can win without thinking, including some small foreshadowings and enough details. For example, the protagonist will say "I have seen two strange people as of today" in the previous article, and the following article will write that the protagonist has sent people to follow her and observe her after seeing the strange people. It's really smooth and detailed. There is also the setting, which is very old-fashioned and non-trivial. The world of Mohist civilization is institutions, knights and craftsmen, so the paths are also these three types. I can only say that the specific names are very nice, but I will leave it open and you can go and see it for yourself. You are worthy of it! ! ! Regardless of the setting of each realm, the name of each path realm is different, and the public usage is also different, but they are all catchy and innovative. Summary, just read it! ! !
Shennong can be read
I feel okay after reading Chapter 27. The heroine is not a problem, and changing her name to a male with one click is not out of the ordinary. There is no lengthy description of the female appearance in the video, and there is no "smart and lively" or 80,000-word-per-minute mental journey. She is just a main character who solves cases and does not escalate them. She will not close a case to comment on it. The design of the case is average. If you don't think about it carefully, it can be roughly explained. If you think about it carefully, it can explain everything extraordinary, but there is nothing new. If you don't save good designs for later, I personally recommend downplaying the proportion. The plot has a tight rhythm, no water injection at all, super praise! Personally, I feel that the setting of Di Renjie's group shell is not handled well. This kind of character has its own characteristics and does not need to be specially shaped, but it will have an inherent impression. The literary changes are relatively large, and the perspective is always advancing with the heroine. There is little background explanation, which makes it feel awkward. For example, Di Renjie's Thirty County Magistrate appeared. When I was listening to the book, I was confused for several seconds. I turned back and read it again before I understood the characters. Di Renjie should be labeled as a late bloomer. The image of an old man in movies and TV dramas is also relatively strong. Being demoted as a county magistrate is also a matter of old age. He suddenly became famous at a young age (and the demotion attracted the cult to recruit him at all costs). He should always explain his experience. Otherwise, a person who seems to be familiar but not familiar interrupts the flow of reading. What will happen from then on, the attention will unconsciously drift to who this person is and why this person is so and so.
Why are there no male protagonists among girls? This is a double standard
Another victim had his wife and children confiscated, and his family property was defrauded. He sought revenge from his enemy, and you stabbed him out afterwards... Female Conan?
Why do so many female videos include male videos? Why?
It's so frustrating to watch! The protagonist is too weak! That Mo family shouldn't exist, it's best if they all die!
When I read the book titled Di Renjie's Empress, I thought it was Wu Mingkong, but it turned out not to be the case, and I was a little disappointed.