Poison Repair

This is not called poisonous repair, this is called hanging repair. Basically, the protagonist 🌿 is so good that all the girls are subdued by the protagonist 🌿's ❤️

The character of the protagonist was too fragmented during the creation process. It was like the previous chapter was dark and steady, but the next chapter the protagonist became completely different The transformation process was inexplicable.

What I wrote in the early stage was actually pretty good, so I just subscribed to them all for convenience, but when I saw the later part, I really couldn't stand it, there were too many poisonous points. Several major poisonous points: 1. The contact person at Miaoyinfang was pushed out for no apparent reason, and he even worked out a secret technique without explaining it. 2. The protagonist has a serious aura, and the women fall in love with each other. You say it's okay to have special means, but after explaining it, there is nothing. 3. The most poisonous thing is that the protagonist's self-centered character suddenly changes completely when he suspects that Wan'er has been killed? If you want to run into the whirlpool, you won't be afraid of death. It's too unreasonable. Generally speaking, it's food and grass in the early stage and poisonous weeds in the back.

The Five Poison Sect is the sect that is best at using poison in the world. If you read my comment, you may have been poisoned by the author's poisonous skills. It is impossible to guard against it. The male protagonist, on the one hand, is bold and careful when doing things in the city, on the other hand, he is entangled and mentally retarded. He is smart and has high emotional intelligence at the moment. On the other hand, he has low intelligence and no moral bottom line. The family is inexplicable and the sect is also in a mess. Starting from the portrayal of the parents, the master's wife has been directly sublimated. There is no contact at ordinary times. The master's wife rides a crane to seduce the male protagonist and begins to lay the groundwork. She immediately pretends to be poisoned and uses her body as bait. What is caught is also inexplicable? Amazingly talented (will you die if you discover my fascinating talent?) Fishing? The 16-year-old handsome boy was just trying to catch a fish (he relied on his amazing theory of herbal medicine before getting started. For details, see: The top twenty-seven masters on the Tianban List and his wife said they had found a treasure). Then something happened and he was suddenly poisoned. After many years of entry into the Five Poison Sect, he took care of the spiritual herbs and the sister was shocked. The wife simply stopped pretending and directly opened the master's treasure house to let the male protagonist practice the master's "Four Secret Skills". Congratulations, this book becomes interesting.

If the author writes like this, he must arrange the plot well. The author writes the small plots very well, the language is simple and fast, and he appropriately uses some snacks on the big plots. The score of this book will not be too bad.

God must have an antidote within ten fucking steps. Whoever believes this is a fool.

I'm surprised that while the author is writing about the protagonist enjoying the benefits of the family, he is also writing about the protagonist wanting to break away from the family, especially since he would rather believe in the demonic sect than his blood relatives? The magical theory that giving birth to a child is like being a hostage to the family? Without family help, why should the protagonist go to the library to learn knowledge? Even if he actually goes to school, he still has to pay tuition. Why should the Five Poison Sect accept you if there is no family? You have written it yourself. The sect only allows you to serve the elders because of the guarantee of the family. The protagonist has his own efforts, but this effort is based on the family. What is the protagonist without a family? Maybe no one even wants to wash the clothes. After all, the village and family guarantee the protagonist's family's laundry. The protagonist enjoys the benefits of the family but wants to leave the family. Really 6

The subject matter is good, but I am really speechless about the idea of ​​the protagonist -_-||. Let's not talk about the setting. The protagonist is precocious, but if you don't show it, it seems low-key on the surface, but in fact it is arrogant. There are two situations when you enter a sect. Either you are strong and dare to fight, and naturally you can get what you want, or if you are not capable, you just be honest and worldly. You can get what you want by flattering the Master. Of course, if you say that you have strong connections and a deep background, then you can also get what you want. The protagonist is nothing. He has background but no background, ability but no ability. He can't even do basic human things. He is still here, hoping to get better treatment. Want to eat shit? Did you wake up from the dream? For a person like the protagonist, if this kind of thinking makes you successful, that is the greatest injustice in the world. As a co-author, I want certification or not, ability or connections, it doesn't matter, and I won't flatter anyone. I also want the company to give me a high salary, but the company is mentally ill. I feel very problematic about the idea of ​​being a complete protagonist, you know? I don't know if this is the author's idea. This is not directed at the author. I am simply speechless about the idea of ​​the protagonist -_-||. How could you have such an idea? It's really hard for me to understand. What kind of environment can create a person with such an idea?

It is a miracle that the golden-faced man can survive in the Demon Sect. He has no scheming at all. He is more awesome than the righteous people. He can use his own skills and his Taoist companions to play and practice as others want. He is even more scheming than a primary school student.

This setting is similar to the natal spirit beast. The problem is that it doesn't even have a spirit beast bag, and it is really stupid to carry it with you. Those who are in the sea can't go ashore 🤫. I guess those who are not very proficient in water on the shore can't go into the sea.

Very strange authors, some of them are obviously cool, some of them are serious and presentable

The setting of the five elements' mutual symbiosis is very poisonous: because the protagonist also joins the toad, which belongs to water, and metal is born with water. So golden poison has no effect on the protagonist. This kind of logic goes against all cognition. You said it's okay to eat metallic biological raw water. Poison is a biological means of attack. How can this be offset by attributes?

I feel like the author doesn't understand human nature at all. Ancient emperors, for the throne and power. Father and son can kill each other, brothers can kill each other. Similarly for immortal cultivators, the great road and eternal life are the goals they pursue. For the ultimate goal of the great road, what does family count? For the sake of a certain family or a certain wife, he would give up his career and work honestly for his family. Does such a person deserve to be called a monk? Can you attain Tao? That's nonsense.

After being taught by his mistress to ride a crane and act like a spoiled child, things changed. . . As soon as the self-made golden finger got started, Hua Feng went to talk about love, not knowing what to say. . .

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 26. There are too many comments. The author must be living a lonely life in reality!

When I saw the protagonist marrying a wife, I didn't want to watch it anymore

Chapter 32: The toad sticks out its tongue, which has been revised to: flapping its wings and flying. I admit that in this chapter I was driving so high that I kissed my wife and almost killed her in the sky. It was my fault! I have re-examined the character's personality and revised it. I hope that book lovers can give more good suggestions.

It can only be said that there is a reason for the entry limit exemption.

Who can be pushed by a thousand swords without a female protagonist? This is obviously a stud. Fortunately, the male protagonist got angry early and stopped the loss in time.

The protagonist's wife was stolen. Then the protagonist treats him well, even though the family is restraining him, he also treats the family members well, saying, "I will avenge you, don't touch me and I will teach you how to do things." You might as well ask your family to practice cultivation.

I really don't understand. In the last chapter, the woman who married the protagonist poisoned the protagonist with Crane Crown Red. The protagonist also poured the poison on the woman's face and poisoned the woman. In the next chapter, after the protagonist slept with this woman, the woman was no longer wanted by the protagonist, and the protagonist also wrote such a strange letter with all his heart and soul.

Poison is a false proposition. What others don't want or can't absorb, and what is harmful to oneself is considered poison. So is shit considered poison? You should forget about it. After all, yellow soup was a great weapon during sieges in ancient times. So what if you could absorb the poison at will and convert it into something useful, right? You could build a unified sewer in ancient times, and then collect the world's feces and urine to you. You are responsible for turning them into clean water and then draining them out. Wouldn't that be super powerful and have endless merits, haha

Shuidao's books have always been masterpieces in the early stages, and ham-fisted in the middle and late stages. Do you even wonder if this was written by a single person? And it's been like this for two books in a row.

The protagonist is originally a tool thrown into the sect by his family. He learns the skills from a narrow escape and earns all his own resources. The family first forced the mortal wife to ask for her bloodline, which caused her to miss out on her marriage later; and then forced her to share half of the contribution points for all tasks. The role of a cultivating genius is to make sacrifices when offering sacrifices? All tutoring classes for postgraduate entrance exams know that fees will be refunded if you go aboard, but this family doesn't even know how to cultivate geniuses? The protagonist is even more outrageous, and after it was put on the shelves, he was just a dog-licker. I had to give up the future I had worked so hard to build and go home, and I had to give half of the extra money to my family. If he can be regarded as the head disciple within the sect, who will he be considered as the elder when he returns home? He is a marginalized person to begin with, not to mention that the family is already short of resources and there are so many uncles and uncles lined up in front of him. Will it be his turn to do good things? Even if he has potential, what development can he have? From The Wild Boar to the new book, I have been reading it. The author is really getting worse and worse, and the new book is not as good as this one. The most important thing is that I think the plot is too poisonous, and it needs both. Don't make the protagonist look like he has a split personality. He's cold and heartless before it's released, and becomes a bitch after it's released. That new book also has the same virtue. Before it goes on the shelf, I say every day that it has nothing to do with me and I want to enjoy it. After it goes on the shelf, I rush to do the dirty work. It is still full of disgusting routines from novice writers, and there is a lot of water injection. Finally, let's remember the Legend of the Wild Boar. Who doesn't want to read a good book in its entirety? Who has nothing to do but come to the comment section to complain if it's really disgusting? If you write well, I will have no problem booking all of them. If you write like this again, all I can say is that we have a long way to go, and we will see you again.

Although the writing by other authors is not as creative, at least the narrative dialogue is very sophisticated. What the hell are you writing about? The words and deeds of the protagonist and supporting characters are childish, and you can tell at a glance that it was written by a kid who doesn't understand anything.

The beginning of this book is actually pretty good. It has nothing to do with creating your own realm. The key is that it has a hint of Gu Yue Fang Yuan. On the contrary, the protagonist became bored after going to the upper world, and became a mortal cultivating immortality, which was completely out of touch with the beginning. Especially the protagonist's family is written in a relatively delicate way, which is more authentic than many novels with family stories. Are there any similar novels?

The author is also rare in reality. It is both important and necessary to read this book.

I didn't understand that the person who didn't want children before felt like a burden. Later, after the master died and returned to the family, he said that he wanted to have children naturally. He also slept with a girl he had just met inexplicably, and then hypnotized her to become a sex partner. Within a few chapters, she became pregnant and wanted to have a baby.

The author's level is too different from the previous Wild Boar. There is no care in dialogue, design, and all aspects.

The writing is quite good, but you have to understand the logic and plot to understand it. The writing is actually very good, and the core reveals the way of nature and humanity, but the writing is too straightforward, and I want others to understand it too much. It is not necessary. Those who understand can understand, and those who do not understand cannot understand.