Cultivation of Demons Starts with a Carp

Let's not talk about the training system, let's just talk about the plot of arriving in the prison of the fairy world. Two Bai Ze were imprisoned for an unknown length of time, and one of them had to have his essence and blood extracted. He was imprisoned and had his essence and blood extracted and was about to die. How could he still be innocent? Lao Baize was even more ridiculous. He calculated that he had vomited blood and fed poison to the protagonist. The character of the protagonist is hard to get along with in real life! If you don't have the strength and still act like a monster, there is a way to die, but this is a cool article, it doesn't matter if it's cool, it's over as long as it's cool

What is a demon? When spiritual wisdom is first awakened, it can automatically absorb the essence of the sun and the moon, and speak in and out. The demon written here seems to be unable to practice without the inheritance of skills. Yes, how can you let those grass, trees, and stones transform into shapes? They can't even do the instinctive cultivation at the beginning. How dare you call them demons?

The classic national curse at the beginning is really... Shameful and out of this world.

What is this written about? The author should find a place to put screws! Across Beethoven's Symphony of Destiny? Anyway, the state is to fall a little, rise a little, fall a little, rise a little!

The pace is fast and chaotic, the feelings about the old carp are very vague, the personality is particularly carefree, and the plot of Mo Bufan is abrupt and blunt.

This is human society dressed in demon skin! If the protagonist is a high-level demon clan, he may be invaded by human culture. You, a low-level demon clan, don't have a full head, and you end up doing neither fish nor fowl!

The plot is very cliché, but I'm thinking do I have to turn into a dragon? Even lobsters have to turn into dragons. Will all the creatures in the ocean turn into dragons? Not creative enough.

It's been 6 days now. What a waste 🙂

It's not easy for the author, it took a lot of sewing

Just send six pictures in a row, why are you really a cultivator? 😰

Old Carp: Is the breakthrough innate? Lu Fan: Such as Xian Old Carp: Is there any Xiantian? Lu Fan: As before

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He stabbed me in the back😆😆😆

The author is good and there is a lot of room for improvement. Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง