Bone King: Conquest of Another World Starting from the Great Tomb

The world view of the novel will look very big, and many characters will appear in the novel. At present, it seems that the content is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable. The language in each chapter is relatively fluent, the writing is relaxed, natural and free, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work.

If you like this book, please support it or share it. I have failed my application twice in a row because I don't meet the standards. Even though I meet the word count, there are really few people who have read it, and those who have collected it have only collected it and haven't finished it.

Alas, the idea is good, and the author also read the original work carefully. However, there are many private goods, the progress is slow, and the ideas are not clear. It's weird to write Japanese words between the lines and curse Japanese people at the same time.

This is the first time I saw the author of Chapter 10,000 Can Code. I haven't logged in to read the novel. This time I logged in just to comment. It's really 🐔 and it's going to be left on my bookshelf to eat dust. 😋😋😋

So pretty! I finally came across a fan novel with the Bone King as the protagonist, and I really like it if it goes the original route! Come on!

Invested, optimistic about this

Will other Supreme Beings appear?

Author: Sir, will the eldest lady Arshe die?

I'm already satisfied with Goblin Slayer and Slime, not to mention the fact that I can't shoot a knife.

👍👍

Nice! 😍

Looking forward to the group fight Valkyrie Ragnarok in the author's novel

The writing is really good, but the updates are intermittent...🔨

It's 190,000 words, not bad, not bad

Original body? It's not a modern person who traveled through time.

I would like to make a few suggestions and opinions. Suggestions: Take it one step at a time. The most important thing to avoid when writing a book is to rush for success. However, the introduction is too cumbersome, and the worldviews in it are different. The outline, branch story lines and timelines should be strictly controlled to avoid conflicts. Opinion: Let's go back to the introduction. Don't tell readers about your future branch plots and approximate titles at the beginning. Readers' tastes vary; novice authors are most likely to make loopholes if they don't have enough writing skills, which creates a poisonous point! There are some bad people who deliberately take advantage of those loopholes, exaggerate and use rhythm to ruin your mentality!

I also like the character of Bone King, but the fanfics are too sparse.

Write a book, take your time, come on!

Come on, author, please update soon.

I don't know why, maybe it's not the writing, but the wording that always makes me feel weird when I read it.

Ask the author, will the ending of the four counselors change, will the ending of desperate death change?

Have Bone King and Big Tomb been strengthened?

I really dare to write about the portraits of the indigenous people and the group. The writing style is incredible. Writing this stuff is just for fun, right?