Under One Person: at the Beginning, the Mother's Womb Cultivates Double Pupils

To tell the truth, it's not interesting for a person to lick Bilian.

Brother, can you put quotation marks? It's so uncomfortable to watch your conversation 😭

Well written, but no punctuation. It looks uncomfortable. Abandoned😰😰😰

What about keeping a running account? The writing level of primary school students has been abandoned.

Change the punctuation. The few sentences you read are connected together without punctuation.

Author, put "" in quotation marks, otherwise it will be too hard to read sometimes. The content is pretty good, keep it up!

Um, this is the first time I've seen one without punctuation. It's awesome.

Even if the content is well written, it can be considered innovative, but can't the punctuation be used well? We can understand that you have made one or two mistakes, but it is not appropriate for you to use it casually or even not use it, relying entirely on fate. Punctuation has developed from the Qin and Han Dynasties to the Sui and Tang Dynasties, and has been basically perfected, and now, it has been developed for thousands of years. Can't we use it properly? Could more punctuation kill you? Moreover, when there is no punctuation, the conversation is not divided into segments, and you have to rely solely on the sense of language to tell who is speaking. Do you know how tiring it is? I don't remember that readers and I have any grudges against you, right? Why is it so torturous?

This is the first time I've seen one without punctuation marks. Are you a primary school student?

Nb, your punctuation and typesetting

What's the significance of these two opening paragraphs?,,,,,,

Can you bring the punctuation marks? It looks so awkward

The dialogue here makes my brain hurt.

This novel left me speechless. I can't say enough about the author's poor writing. First of all, I want to ask the author, do you know what double pupil is? Do you know what the legendary double pupil means? This is only twice as qualified as Zhang Chulan. You are just kidding me here. I just read Chapter 6 and I feel like I can't read it. Your writing style and plot setting are not good. Can't the protagonist follow his own path? Instead of letting the protagonist take someone else as his disciple, shouldn't he be able to let someone else take the initiative to become a disciple?

There are punctuation marks at the end, but why are they not used correctly?

Ask a question. What do you guys think of having double pupils? I read in many comment sections that there are two pupils in one eye. It is said that one eye has a small pupil inside a large pupil. Personally, I prefer a larger one with a smaller one inside. After all, it is mostly a color difference between the inside and outside of the pupil. But having two pupils in one eye looks weird.

Update soon, isn't he a eunuch?

It's okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to see

I haven't finished the first chapter yet, it's only two pages. What about your punctuation? What do you think? Not to mention other things, you can give me a colon just for the content of this conversation. Otherwise, it's not clear what he's talking about.

The topic outline idea is okay, but the punctuation marks are not good for reading, and this can dissuade a large number of people.

Brother, your conversation is really painful to watch.

The book is poorly written, and the punctuation marks are either missing or marked, okay? The subject matter makes my brain hurt when I read it, and I squeezed several people's conversations together into a really awesome review.