The Underworld Sequence

Honestly, if a person becomes a ghost and is still this weak, what's the point of becoming a ghost? If the protagonist doesn't have a well-designed path to level up, then it's just like a detective novel from beginning to end—finding the door, destroying it, the ghost disappears. That's a detective novel, who has that kind of time to grind?

Does procedural injustice lead to a just outcome? It's like a fishbone stuck in my throat. The organizations that are arresting people on the street seem to be trying to whitewash their image (or maybe they were always legitimate). I just like to grab people on the street, take them back, lock them up, and do experiments to turn them into ghosts. If you die, I'll even give your family ten million.

A mysterious organization that directly arrests people on the street... 10 Million for every death... 40-50 People in a group, even if half die, the compensation for the entire group is over 200 million... What kind of money-giving organization is this? This organization is really abstract.

This book is good; I hope you can get past the 404 error!

This book was supposed to be good, but it's riddled with flaws. Even I, someone who reads without thinking, am speechless. The scene where they discover the children are ghosts at the amusement park and then proceed to explain so much to the ordinary people, without any attempt at tact or discretion, is truly rubbish.

The writing is terrible. The main and supporting characters' words and actions are completely out of place with their environment. It's full of clichéd plot points, and the storyline is somewhat illogical. Overall, it's just mediocre. The only thing that made me want to check it out was the premise.

It's not good. It's nothing special compared to those Mysterious Resurrection fanfics. The author just borrowed some settings from Mysterious Resurrection and added the setting of mysterious power-ups, but it's still not good, you could even say it's garbage. Even ghosts have to level up, which I find disgusting. The beginning hypes up the protagonist's ghost sequence to be so powerful, requiring 20 awakenings to fully transform, but in reality, in actual combat, his strength is still trash.

The concept is good, but there are some minor flaws, such as arresting people in the street and swapping skins with ordinary people. Putting aside the question of whether it's reasonable or not, you yourself bear the risks of skin swapping. What reason would you have to choose an ordinary person and abandon the official version?

Tang San thought you were very brave, and then reported you.

The descriptions of strength levels are too vague. The various levels seem almost identical; there's not much difference or improvement between levels like "Encoffining Level" and "Coffin Level." The key issue is the immense danger and cost of advancement, coupled with only a minor increase in strength – it feels mismatched. The specific strength of each character is described very vaguely.