Hell Sequence

Very good. After watching it, I feel that I am worthy of being a ghost. It is something that no one should have.

It feels like it is written like a sequel to Mysterious Resurrection. Many things in it have a sense of what happened after Mysterious Resurrection, such as the gates of hell or people becoming ghosts, or the place names and ghost-killing settings in Mysterious Resurrection. They are very similar, but it feels more like what happened after the Mysterious Resurrection. It is very worth watching.

To be honest, if a person is still so good after becoming a ghost, then what is the point of becoming a ghost? If the protagonist does not have a designed path to upgrade, then it will be like a detective novel from beginning to end. He finds the door, then destroys it, and the ghost disappears. Then this is a damn detective novel. Who has such skills? There are detectives in Thriller Park, and they are also capable. There is a problem with this setting. Even if you become a ghost, you are still a noob. What is the meaning of becoming a ghost?

Does the result of unfair procedures make sense? It's like a stick in the throat Organizations that arrest people on the street seem to have a tendency to whitewash their names (maybe they are originally innocent) I just like to arrest people on the street, take them back and lock them up, and do experiments to make you become a ghost. If you die, I will give you 10 million to your family. Although inhumane, I am a good organization... No one said this in the comments. Just looking at this operation, it is hard for me to believe that this thing is a good organization that can "turn yourself into a ghost", "destroy the gates of hell" and "protect the world" Just like in reality, active sacrifice and passive sacrifice are completely different things How does this kind of organization that accepts new people ensure that the new people will not rebel? (Can this be one heart?) (Or is it moral brainwashing or high-pressure rule?) After reading Chapter 15, this poisonous point is really hard to swallow (for me)

A mysterious organization that directly arrests people on the street... If you die, you will be given 10 million... A group of forty or fifty people, half of them are dead, and you will get a pension of more than 200 million for a group of people... What kind of money-splitting boy. This organization is really abstract

This book is good, I hope you can pass 404!

A good book, with poisonous points everywhere. As a brainless reader, I was speechless. I found out that the child was a ghost in the amusement park, and I still explained so many things to ordinary people without any taboos. It is really rubbish.

The writing is so rubbish. What the protagonist and supporting characters say and do does not match the environment at all. There are old jokes mixed in from time to time. The plot is also a little unreasonable. The writing is average, so I will take a look at this setting.

Tang San thought you were very brave and reported you conveniently

The creativity is good, but there are constant little tricks, such as arresting people on the street, asking ordinary people to change their skins, etc. Let's not mention whether it is reasonable or not. You have to bear the risk when you change your skin. What is the reason for you to choose ordinary people instead of official ones? Don't talk about experience. It is highly likely that an ordinary person has never done a full-body skin change, and it is even more impossible to change a tree's bark. The official and the base have all kinds of ghost formulas, and there is a high probability that people have experience in similar things. Even if they have zero experience, if there is any accident during the skin change process, professional people will know how to deal with it. Overall, it's nice to watch, but there are a few logic issues here and there, so just skip it quickly.

It's not good-looking. It's nothing special with that kind of mysterious resurgence fanfic. It's just that the author just borrowed part of the settings of mysterious resurgence and added the setting of mysterious strength improvement. But it's still not good-looking. It can even be said to be rubbish. Ghosts have to be upgraded. I feel disgusted. The ghost sequence of the protagonist was so awesome in the past. It takes 20 awakenings to complete the transformation. In fact, in actual combat, the strength is still rubbish.

The description of the strength level is very vague. The strength of various levels feels similar. There is not much improvement or difference between the burial level and the coffin level. The key is that the danger and cost of promotion are so great, and the improvement brought by it is very average and feels unmatched The description of the specific strength of each character is also very vague. For the Sequencers that have appeared now, I still can't figure out their strength level. I feel that they are all about the same. The background characters and plots of this novel are good, but the actual level is really too vague and stretched, leaving readers without a clear feeling about the strength level of the Sequencers. Previously, when I watched the mysterious recovery, there was only a ghost controller and a ghost master. The two ghost controllers are really different. Only the two ghost controllers are different from the three ghost controllers. It is obvious that the level of strength is completely different, but there is no such feeling in this novel. Anyway, I feel that the strength level of the serializer is too unclear. The protagonist works so hard to be promoted, but the improvement in strength is not obvious at all. The author also wrote that each promotion costs a lot, and what does such a big price get in exchange for it? Look at the protagonist who was promoted to the coffin level and caused so much cost and loss to the consumptive ghost. Do you think what he got when he was promoted to the coffin level? Sharing vision with the paper man? Make the paper man more like yourself? That's it? Before I changed my skin and bones, I thought that maybe the protagonist's strength would be greatly improved. After all, he had to endure so much hardship, but the result was just a small improvement, and that's it? I feel that the main character relies on his eyeballs and the curse of the white cloth to deal with ghosts. The paper man sequence is of little use. However, when the protagonist took the ghost sequence formula at the beginning, it was said that only the protagonist matched that cornerstone. The subsequent protagonist also experienced it several times more than the others, maybe nineteen or twenty times. They all said that his sequence was very powerful and described his sequence as extremely powerful. However, judging from the subsequent performance, the paper man sequence was not very powerful and was just average. It did not match the suffering that the protagonist suffered when taking the formula before. In short, I just feel that the strength level of sequencers in this novel cannot be carefully considered. There are many things that do not make sense.

I have read all your updates. Generally speaking, they are good, but the time you arranged is too problematic. The coincidence was good once or twice, but then turned sour. The first time the old girl was in danger, the second time he visited his friend's family. It's too frequent to encounter this kind of thing twice. Keep one thing in mind. Don't run crazy through the plot. Leave time for the development of the protagonist, and meet new organizations and learn new knowledge. If you run through the plot frequently and your strength cannot keep up, readers will definitely be unhappy. The same goes for your drops from monsters. Get what you need. It's too deliberate to just drop it. Among all the ghosts and monsters you mentioned, you just found what you want. It's too direct. You might as well go to those messy organizations and ask them if they have similar things to exchange with them, or get clues and slowly search for them. You got what you want, and the atmosphere is directly reduced by more than half. It's too deliberate

How did the author come up with such an outrageous idea? In peacetime, you arrest people on the street, lock them up, and torture them all the time. Why do you want them to join your organization? And this kind of large number of people are missing, and most of them are young and middle-aged people. They are working for the government and they let people go back. Under normal circumstances, I don't believe that no one calls the police Is it possible that your organization has an official background? Aren't you a pure evil force?

I've read chapters 30 and 40, but I still don't understand what his core idea is. He has turned into a ghost, and he is afraid of the ghost on the other side. And he has no special characteristics, so what's the point of becoming a ghost?

There is a small problem. The villain organization is called Yincaojifu, and the personnel of the official organization are called Yincai. It always feels like they are reversed 😥

The setting of this book is actually okay, but it lacks a sense of heaviness when reading it, and it feels like the story is floating on the water. It feels like there are too many dialogues, and secondly, the characters are too thin.

Is this book finished when you finish talking about it? Such a good subject 😡, hey, what a pity

Grandma, after raising her for more than half a year, she was just about to undergo surgery. It's gone.

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Ah ah ah, I finally found you, but the result is gone

The author is writing a new novel using this theme. I really like this novel. Why is it gone?

It's better to work behind the scenes, you're good at this

What a pity. The longer I read the book, the more I pick it up It's quite difficult to find one I like In recent years, people who write about this subject get 404's. It's really pitiful.

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Well, I even said that I would keep it for a while, but it was gone. . . Your previous books were all finished with this few words. If I had known this, why would I have read it. .

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