Douluo Peerless: Lord of the Dragon Court

To awaken the martial spirit at the age of ten, does it have to be at the same level as Huo Yuhao? This setting is really stressful

Author, there is no need to bring Huo Yuhao. This thing is pure fw in the original work

Why Huo Yuhao? Let him die.

When I saw the copywriting of the martial soul power dragon Rainbow Dragon, I jumped into the pit, and then looked at the catalog and I slipped away 😰 To be honest, these two legendary dragon species can even touch the great power at the upper limit of dnd and are born as legends (I don't know much about rainbow dragons, but the power dragon is definitely enough), there is no need to put them together, it is superfluous. There is no relationship between the two, and the whole martial soul fusion skill is speechless. Shuangwen Shuangwen is either a solo intracranial orgasm or a cool novel. I want to write that the protagonist is invincible but I have to worry about the setting. The background is casually added to make it cool, but Shuangshuang is really cliche. I hope that one day I can read a good book that combines DND and Douluo. The writing style and the plot are indispensable. If the emotional line is not well written, it is really better to just have no CP. As for this one, the overly taken-for-granted plot made me almost see the ending of this book. 😴

Douluo fandom has a huge fan base, and it's easy to gain tens of thousands of fans. Your idea is great, but how could you write it like this? In what age are you still writing articles about selflessly giving your business power? The protagonist of the Qidian novel must be "alone" in order to meet the reader's expectations. It is really difficult to criticize him for posting his own cheats when seeing others. I really can't stand a good idea being written like this

What is the significance of awakening the martial soul at the age of ten?

Fafafa, it's not Huo Xiaozi, right?

In fact, with such a big skill, there is no need to bring the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect with me.

When I saw Huo Yuhao, I decided not to look at him. He couldn't carry this thing. With the resources, he might as well take someone else with him.

It seems that the performance of the two legendary dragon species in dnd is very high. However, both the first level and the subsequent ability performance are not satisfactory. They are not as good as the white dragon at the beginning, and the performance of the legendary dragon species is not as good as the shame of the dragon clan.

If you ask me to put it bluntly, let Huo write it as a woman. If she writes it well, there will be no shortage of people to read it. She beats the Buddha of the Tang Dynasty and watches the filial piety of a loving father and a daughter.

If the author were a girl named Huo Gua, there wouldn't be so many people calling her dead in the comment section.

It obviously has nothing to do with you, why do you want to participate in the competition? Do you want to write more water plots?

Two legendary dragon souls (although I don't see the feeling of legendary dragons at all), a warehouse of props, and what can adding other forces bring to the protagonist? Maybe you want to say that the protagonist needs development and a protector in the early stage, but are you giving too many benefits? Give everything, and just ask others to make a verbal promise? As long as you have the ability to make others accept gifts, they will never be betrayed. I don't want to say anything. You, the protagonist, are just acting as a nanny.

Not a buddy, what kind of faith do you need when you already have such a martial spirit? Either one of these two dragons is invincible in Douluo Continent, right?

Why does Huo Yuhao write so much? I skipped through the paid chapters later, but the names of the protagonists didn't even appear in the chapters I saw. Although it's not considered a nanny story (at least the gold of life was not given to Huo Yuhao), it still feels a bit uncomfortable for you to write about two male protagonists.

Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King

This book is very well written, but there is also another book that is still good to read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator