Douluo: the Peerless Eternal Divine Kingdom

Why do you, the author, always like to include private information? When writing Douluo, you should at least write the original heroine? What does it mean to like self-creation?

There are too many private things, and it is obvious that the author wrote based on the information checked by several previous fans. He did not read the history again, and could only fill in a lot of secondary settings. Because nothing happened to the protagonist's family, all the useful female characters are related to the protagonist's family. Ye Guyi is from the protagonist's affiliated family, and the Snow Emperor has been transformed in advance. In Tianhun Really Wants an Angel, it is obvious that it is more reasonable for Yu Mengdi, who appears at Zhengtian College of the Tianhun Empire, to appear in the protagonist's family, rather than Ye Guyi. Su Tong, the Ice and Snow Girl, is more reasonable than Xue Zhao (Snow Emperor), because the original work did not mention it, and what the hell is the Ice and Snow Girl running in front of the title after she transforms. Even Xiao Wu knew to hide in the countryside at the beginning, but the protagonist obviously collects information to awaken the martial spirit but does not hide. And what is Weiwei? It's just a joke. Tomorrow Eternal Heaven will hit the door. If you don't have this technical ability, it will be original.

The little poisons are constant. The author has too many secondary designs, and many of them are unreasonable and illogical. For example, the protagonist's family and the Snow Emperor's character. The soul beast transformed into a soul saint. The author directly arranged a soul ring for the Snow Emperor that is more than two hundred years old.

I have read all three books, and it's okay to get some ideas about the settings, but not when it comes to the plot and combat power. The author always has a habit of wanting to add some private goods. Those messy private settings can produce several fanfics, but each time they squeeze into one book. This is not to say that the protagonist's combat power cannot be expanded. How can a fandom be cheating, but it cannot be used to inflate the worldview's combat power from the beginning because of cheating, some of which are even inexplicable. There is also the issue of the heroine. The character design is quite different, even Fengyue AI is not so biased.

2 Is very outrageous. There are more than a dozen people in Guangtian Soul Empire who are above level 95. Then Shrek can't have more than 30 people? The author also likes to be tough-talking

Why didn't the author reply? How to deal with Dai Yuhao? Suppress, ignore or babysit? Can you tell me something first?

First of all, the combat power of the Heavenly Soul Empire has been seriously enhanced, and it is almost like a little Shrek. There are also some common sense problems that are very serious. For example, after the soul beast is rebuilt, it cannot absorb the soul ring that it condenses in front of the Soul Emperor. Moreover, the character of the Snow Emperor is really poisonous. Are you writing about Xiao Wu or the Snow Emperor? Even Wang Dong has a more stable character than these two idiots.

The setting of The Heaven-defying Demon Dragon Emperor is good. I really wanted to read it, but there are too many second settings. It is too different from the one of Jingtian Douluo. Not to mention the other ones, I created my own heroine, Snow Emperor Demon, and I was persuaded to quit. It is 80% different from the original work. Except for Han Ruoruo, most of the Shrek members in the Soul Fighting Competition are second set. I have never heard of it, and Han Ruoruo's level is also made up in the Soul Saint City.

Awakening the martial spirit also comes with an instruction manual, and there is also a chapter dedicated to explaining how to use the martial spirit. After reading it, I realized that this martial spirit can take off even if it is used by a pavilion.

Just go straight to Wei Na. It would be outrageous for you to create a princess.

(The following are all personal opinions) Poisonous points: 1. The harem is larger than 3 2. There are too many hang-ups at the beginning Doubtful points: 1. Dou Er is characterized by too many details and branches, and it is easy to make bugs if you are not careful. Judging from the current settings of the author, there are no clues to deal with Tang San, and this is precisely the most critical issue 2. In terms of combat power setting, I don't know if the author has conceived a more detailed (or quantitative) standard. Take the plot I saw recently as an example. If a level 79 genius soul saint fights three (genius or ordinary) soul emperors, in my personal opinion, he should be crushed without any suspense, unless the level 79 soul saint has a fatal weakness, or the three soul emperors on the opposite side are vulnerable (such as super advanced soul guides, or (or martial soul fusion skills), but there is obviously no such thing in the setting of this book I think if a fanfic can put a reasonable patch on the chaotic combat power system of the original work, or even create a reasonable combat power system, it will undoubtedly make a huge contribution.

It's not on the shelves yet, but the character list lists 4 female protagonists. Please read it carefully and see if you have any questions. Anyway, I don't have any because I don't want to read it.

Did the protagonist, the ultimate dark and heaven-defying demon Dragon Soul Emperor, beat the two soul kings to a draw with their martial soul fusion skill, Red Dust Love? Also consumed too much.

Author, does the heroine have Tang Ya? Animation modeling is a replica of Xiao Wu. If the heroine is not accepted as a harem beauty, it would be great too😋

Does the heroine have an imperial beast?

It's private stuff, there's nothing interesting to see anyway.

The first two books are almost all ordered. I just stopped reading this book when I saw Bengsan characters in the character list. It's better not to mess with it when writing fan works. Of course, if Bengsan's character doesn't just have the same name, it wouldn't be acceptable. The original supporting role is just a supporting role. Forget it, the original heroine. Her surname is Wei. Couldn't she be the princess of Tianhun Royal Family? There is a ready-made original work, so you don't have to create an original one?

It seems that the protagonist wants to collect 72 pillars and rely on the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths God-Destroying Formation to kill the Five-Dimensional God King.

I'm not against having more women, just two or three will be enough, otherwise the main plot will drag on too much. Many people can't understand two of them. Goodfellas had four before it was released. To be honest, the heroine setting is a mess. Can you understand so many women?

The Heaven-defying Demonic Dragon Martial Soul takes over the God of Destruction, and the Heart Martial Spirit takes over the God of Life. You can consider the fusion of God's Gods - the highest God of creation/good fortune.

QQ Reading, why not?

When you advance the plot, if you talk nonsense again, it will look confusing. Why don't you just give me a template? If you know someone who knows someone else, you will know it at a glance. What do you need to say? It's like reading a book. Why don't you read the book directly? I'm also reading these novels of yours. Listening to them makes me sleepy, and my eyes hurt when I read them. There are a lot of messy words, but the plot doesn't advance at all 😴

After reading the introduction, I don't want to watch anymore. People are just people. Add some animal blood I can't stand it. I mind being protected from lightning.

Not bad, not bad, author, you are finally back to write Battle II.

Damn it, more than twenty chapters are definitely not free for QQ members! !

The protagonist's soul power is a bit slow to improve and there are few opportunities 🙂

I don't understand why you have to add a royal as the heroine

Chun, the clown, is simply Lu Bu falling in love with Dong Zhuo, Zhao Yunqi falling in love with Zhao Zilong

The heroine of the author, is there an emperor's auspicious beast?

Brothers, please read it! Don't keep books, reading them is really important to the author! Please read!