Douluo: Reborn Huo Yuhao, I Am Really Not a Succubus

Recently, I really want to read Douluo Fans. After seeing the author's new book, I read this one again because I didn't have enough. To be honest, I like Huo Yuhao's rebirth or getting plug-ins, rather than the time travel to Huo Yuhao. I think Yuhao can understand the disgustingness of 🍬Umbrella like readers, but I also hope it's him. After all, Douluo 2 is what I read when I was a child. At that time, I couldn't understand the disgusting plot of Umbrella Spoon. When I saw Yu Hao hurt himself to save Dong'er, Qiu'er sacrificed, Orange and Yuhao were separated forever, Poseidon fate, so many regrets, I just felt good when I saw a story about Huo Yuhao who was not even an ordinary person and how he grew up step by step So I still like to make Yuhao better, after all, there is a more newborn 🍬 Umbrella, just push the bad things to him This book is well written, but the shortcoming is that in the later period, there is too much affection for the daughter. What's the foreshadowing? Also, the strength increased too fast in the end. In fact, the dragon bloodline is very different from the original work. But it's okay to have a daughter. The last little open ending allowed me to make up for it. The author also said that they are just lustful (), which can be regarded as giving them a home (). After all, Yu Hao has done a good job. It would be a pity not to have a harem In the next book, I feel that the emotional line should be more detailed now, I hope it can be maintained. , This book can create the God Realm. It would be better to close the next book and wait for the creation of the God Realm to connect all the good relationships and write extras. The extras can also ignore the continuity of the main text and let more love stories happen in the God Realm. In Douluo Continent, it can be ambiguous or the relationship has not been confirmed, so as to better shape several female protagonists. Moreover, the extras can also be like a simulator to shape the feelings of different people step by step, giving a more sense of substitution.

After reading it, in general, the author's writing is pretty good. Most of the plots are relatively "close to the original". Although the writing is a bit poor, the handling and development of the plot and some original plots are very distinctive. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Does the author have a large size? The plot and emotional scenes are both good. 👏 There is nothing poisonous about it. At present, the level of fan fiction is already at a high level. As of now, the emotional scenes are still playing steadily together with the plot. Unlike some novels, the emotional scenes in the early stage are OK, but the heroine in the later stage is completely a pendant.

The book written by the author is great 🤓 The writing is very smooth, and the character creation is relatively natural. There is no big poisonous point, and the imagination is very big. Come on, the supervisor will definitely be able to make some achievements It is also very exciting​ (◠pel◠)

It suits my taste very well. It has been added to the bookshelf. Don't let it down.

Seeking to join the group

Thanks to the support of book friends, as a new author, I am very satisfied with the results of this book. It may not be worth mentioning in the eyes of the big guys, but as my first book, the writing is poor. I am very happy that so many people can read it. I would like to sincerely thank you all! Back to the topic, regarding some personal understandings of Huo Gua's character, I have only watched two Douluo Dalu, the first and second parts. I have heard a little about the third and fourth parts, but have not read them. As a result, I need to look up the original works when I write some opportunities. The protagonist of the second part, Huo Yuhao, is the most difficult part in my heart. He was portrayed as a tough, kind-hearted, reciprocal, and extremely affectionate person. However, the final ending did not satisfy me at all. The treatment of good people in reality is miserable enough. I hope that Yuhao in the story can have a good ending, so I started writing this book. The Huo Yuhao in this book is not a modern person. Yue is just a man who has been suppressed by the Tang Shenwang in the divine world for many years. When Huo Zai discovers that his rebirth can change everything, I think it is more reasonable for Huo Zai to return to the sunshine and full of hope. After all, even after experiencing so much, he will not be malicious to others. In the end, it is a story of meeting more people on the journey and reaching perfection with his companions (of course, Tang Shenwang still has to die). I think that Huo Yuhao in the original work got such a great opportunity. In addition to his luck, his personality is also a big factor. The Ice Emperor and Tianmeng kept their spiritual origins and did not merge at the beginning. Why did they merge again later? Because they saw that Huo Yuhao was a trustworthy person, why would Yi Lao burn the fragments of his consciousness in exchange for Huo Yuhao's life? Because of Yuhao's true feelings for Mu En, this is the story of Huo Yuhao that I want to write. Because of his kindness and because he will fight tooth and nail for his friends, he gains more friends on the journey and goes with him all the way. Maybe this character is not as lovable as the current popular egoism, but in my eyes, he is not a killer. He will not kill people on sight, but he will also be angered by the behavior of his enemies. He is just a person who was bullied by the duchess when he was a child, but still shows kindness to the world when he grows up. This article only represents my personal opinion, please give me some compliments 🌹 Finally, thank you again for your support!

Huo Gua's new image reference after blood transfusion (only female pictures were found, sorry) The first picture refers to the eyes, the second picture refers to the hair 🙂

I can't understand, why are you accepting Xiao Wu? I feel like Xiao Wu is really not that good.

Snow Emperor

There is a saying that it is really disgusting to change your surname when you go to the God Realm to recognize your ancestors and return to your clan. You have no backbone at all. You can't just break off the engagement like Xiao Yan. It's okay for me to be Huo Yuhao as the son-in-law. Also, my name is Huo Yuhao, not Dai Yuhao. All my strength is given by Tianmeng, Ice Emperor, Electrolux, Moon, Xuan Ziwen, Snow Emperor, Poison to Death, Qiu'er, Evil Emperor. It was not given by your Dai family. Your Dai family only gave me a pair of hatred. It was only childhood discrimination, beatings, abuse, and humiliation. I was beaten black and blue by Dai Huabin. My mother was beaten to death by Dai Huabin. I can't forget that day. If this happened to Tang San, he would have slaughtered everyone. He still wants me to forgive. Even if my mother asked me to change, I would not change. Even if I am hated by my mother, I will not change my surname. Otherwise, I will not be able to afford myself. If my mother does not agree, she insists on letting me change my surname. I can only cut off the flesh and bones like Nezha to repay my mother. If I am forgiven, my revenge is a joke.

Gu Yuena

This book should be called Douluo Succubus Huo Yuhao.

I started reading Douluo in elementary school, both comics and novels. To be honest, after reading a lot of fanfics from different periods, I feel that Tang San actually doesn't have any big problems, and it may be more because of the author. Looking at Dou Yi (I haven't read the other ones less), Tang San really didn't have any problems with his own people. He didn't reveal his secret knowledge to the Tang Sect, committed suicide and apologized, leaving behind the Buddha's Wrath of Fire Lotus. Against old Jack, he did not hesitate to expose his hidden weapon to the concierge, and after becoming a god, he and the Holy Soul Village gained respect. To the master, he helped him prove his lifelong ideal, allowed him to break through level 30, reunited the golden iron triangle, and also allowed him to untie the knot with Bibi Dong. For Flender, let Shrek become the top academy and reunite the Golden Triangle. To the Shrek Seven Monsters, he gave spiritual grass and hidden weapons, grew up with them, brought the master over to make them better, and saved them many times. Without Tang San, it would be a problem for them to become gods. Ma Hongjun relied on the fairy grass and inner elixir to evolve his martial soul. Others also benefited from Tang San's Poseidon Jiukao. Take revenge on the Great Ming and the Second Ming, take revenge on Bibi Dong and Wuhun Palace, and let them ascend to the God Realm. For Tang Hao and Ah Yin, let them reunite, let Tang Hao wash away his shame, and take revenge on Wuhun Palace. As for the Haotian Sect and the Qibao Glazed Sect, they would definitely not be able to survive under the Wuhun Palace. Without Tang Sancheng to defeat the Wuhun Palace, they would have died. For Tang Chen and Bo Saixi, save the Haotian Sect and let him regain his consciousness to reunite with Bo Saixi. At the same time, it seems that they all survived in the end. To Poison Douluo, let him and his granddaughter survive. Against Sword Bone Douluo, protect the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. That's the main thing. I think Tang San doesn't talk about repaying others, but at least they all have the ending they want. If you insist on saying that these are not enough, then I have nothing to say. After all, as long as you are happy, I really don't understand why so many fanfics have to write about a person who is several times more disgusting than Tang San to disgust Tang San. I am right This is really hard to accept, and the master sacrificed himself for his apprentice, and still prevented the concierge from bullying others without understanding Tang San's talent. From this point of view, I feel that he is not as disgusting as some fan fiction writes. I have almost forgotten about the emotional issues, but I think the emotional issues still exist now, and it is really not a crime worthy of death. Nowadays, many people look at these things with extreme tinted glasses. They feel that he has evil intentions from the beginning, so any good deeds he does have impure intentions.

I hope the protagonist will not accept Ye Xishui and Fengling, especially the Light of Death created by Ye Xishui. How many innocent people have been killed. The ending of the original novel can still give her a clean slate. It's disgusting. Ye Xishui is a green tea bitch. He also alienated Long Xiaoyao and Mu En. He tied Long Xiaoyao to death. She also said that she liked Long Xiaoyao. In the end, she married her master and gave birth to a son. She did this on her own initiative. It's not like Bibi Dong was raped. This kind of person is so disgusting.

The skill was directly changed. What's the use of mental shock? It was directly replaced with simulation. What's the point of wearing a white soul ring and being looked down upon by others?

Bo Saixi

The current few chapters are just for Huo Yuhao to get to know Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong and others. He will soon leave Shrek Academy and get to know more people. I expressed this in the volume title: respective paths. Please read it patiently.

Write less frills and push more plot You can include as many heroines as you like, but Hu Liena starts to floss every chapter, which feels like the word count is too low. I still want to see Huo Gua upgrade and become stronger. Can the edges be slightly less polished?

There is a saying that if Huo Yuhao had not been interfered by Tang San, he would have been the son of the Douluo World. Maybe the story at the beginning would be the story of the protagonist Huo Yuhao and the heroine Rui Beast teaming up with the Douluo soul masters and soul beasts to rebel against the temple.

Wang Qiuer

Huo Yuhao

Don't write about Tang San Yu Xiaogang if you are a fan of Douluo. Neither of these two people are good. A way to die at every turn. One even plagiarizes theories and likes to pretend. Both Bibi Dong and Liu Erlong felt it was a tragedy when they encountered it. It's been quite miserable. Tang Shenwang did not establish a new organization after destroying the Wuhun Palace. In the end, no one awakened the martial spirit. It has always been an era when nobles enslaved common people. There are too many evil spirit masters. The three countries are still at war. There was simply no way for civilians to survive. He also turned Douluo into the Tang Family Continent. What kind of long-term plan is there? I don't know how many people died.

A lightning protection book: The Legend of the Dragon King: Tang Wulin's bloodline is extracted at the beginning, and if you copy the original book's questions, you will delete the comments and permanently ban them. It's disgusting.

Little Huo Niang

There are a lot more minor points than the next book, and the improvement is quite obvious.

Both the monthly ticket and the book stamp have been voted in, please add more 😭 This is really the best Yuhao fanfic I have ever read.

If you are interested, you can publish your own designed soul beast here. It can be a protagonist or a supporting role. If appropriate, it will be adopted. (The author of the stupid comment wants to burn out QMQ because of his skill brain)

He is really two extremes from the original Huo Yuhao. One is innocent, and the other is promiscuous in the harem. It's not that the harem is bad, it's just that it's written in a clichéd way and doesn't feel streamlined. The author and the protagonist have no own aesthetic standards, just like a machine AI that purely accepts emotions.

I've tried the poison, and overall it's okay. The reason I didn't order it is because the deer's soul bone is attached to the outside, and Huo Gu is simply written as a man's wife. I feel like vomiting when I see a gay man🤮