Immortality Begins with Growing Medicine in an Immortal Estate

Goldfinger is too powerful and will probably collapse later. The three functions you introduced are ripening elixirs, repairing magic weapons, and evolving techniques. You only need to keep one, there is no need to use both. Otherwise, the protagonist will become a waste, or the subsequent content cannot be arranged, and it will easily conflict with Goldfinger. Especially doing dungeons for missions and the like. In addition, the author failed to catch the reader's attention at first and introduced too much content, so I gave up several times. I persisted in reading because I like farming articles. Why did the author start introducing spiritual roots? This is available in other books. You just need to learn from it and just go through it in one stroke. You mainly want to introduce your golden fingers, especially if you yourself are not clear about the introduction. I don't even understand how you use your golden finger. I only know that it has a ripening function. The layout of the opening chapter is unreasonable, too bland, there is no conflict at the beginning, and it cannot catch the readers' attention at all. Don't follow the big theology experts, they have a readership base. At the beginning, there is either conflict, or it makes people feel that the curtain of cultivating immortality has begun, or it just directly points to the topic. For example, at the beginning, it was written that the protagonist was farming, and others laughed at him for being stupid and too serious. When the protagonist came to the world, people laughed at me for being too crazy, and I laughed at you for not having a golden finger. Or maybe two masters compete in martial arts, and both ends up losing. Others say it's a grudge, but the protagonist says it's a brain twitch because he has a golden finger. In short, you can't be too bland, you have to catch the eye! Also, if you don't consider the buying point of this book, and it is too similar to other people's books, it will be difficult to stand out. What is the buying point of this book? It's a golden finger, which means you have to write everything around this setting, instead of going to other novels like downloading copies, auctions, and the like. It's not even more serious than Yongdoujun. You have to write something that is different between you and others. Otherwise, why not read the master's book and read yours? Anyway, everyone is almost the same. There is also a problem with prices. If I really want to write something exciting, I still need to change it. A talisman has one hundred and twenty spiritual stones, and a quarterly salary of ninety-six. Your spending power is too advanced. There are also eight hundred spiritual stones. If you buy one hundred spiritual stones and iron, you still have to attend the auction? The problem is that I have to pay a hundred spiritual stones for a non-refundable ticket? With the six or seven hundred spirit stones in his pocket, how stupid would the protagonist be to think that the money in his pocket can buy the items he needs at the auction? Forcibly add plot. Moreover, three hundred miles away from the sect, he actually dared to be robbed. Would anyone go to such a market and sect? There may be theft, there may be fraud, and even robbery, if it happens just once, no one will dare to do business. Who would want money at the expense of their lives? Especially among the immortal nobles, everyone is immortal, and they are not desperate to die.

As the picture says, it's very important.

What is the operation? Who buys the elixir? Why not buy groceries in Hualian today? You can't go to Wanjia tomorrow. What's the reason?

Why don't you write entertainment articles about divorced ex-wives and ex-girlfriends?