Bleach: The Disciplined Captain of Seireitei

I'm speechless. They are all reading novels, right? I always mention not to tear down the CP or plot of the original work, so why are you reading the novel? Just watch the original animation. The author writes a time-travel novel, not the original work. OK, support the author. Come on

If you watch a fanfic that doesn't include girls or change the plot, just remember the sentence "Err, eh, it's all eh"

If the protagonist does something like this and is noticed by Aizen, there are only two results. One will be killed by Aizen's plan, and the last one will be the same as Aizen training Ichigo to grow. The problem is that Ichigo grows up under Lan Qi's control, and the protagonist's ability is not within Lan Qi's control. Will Aizen kill you in advance and not give you time to grow? After all, scientists want to study your abilities.

Bleach fans are almost being written off! This book is considered to be the bigger one among the short ones, and it can be considered readable. Unlike the two books in the "Study of Medicine" and "New Heat" series, the main character is rubbish and has a very powerful Zanpakuto, and he can't even begin to explain it, so I can't even finish it!

This is enough for anyone to watch. It's pretty good, but there's a problem with Rangiku's emotional line. According to An Zhao, Rangju has always liked Gin. I hope there will be explanations later. I hope we can see the reasons for the changes in related characters.

🧐I've seen the latest chapter. According to this plot development, why does the store manager Yoruichi want to dismantle the cp? It doesn't matter if he dismantles Gin Rangiku. The development of Gin, the Avenger, is doomed to tragedy. Nanao and Shunsui have more of a relationship between elders and juniors, but the store manager and Yoruichi will not be able to bear it if they also dismantle it.

The most important thing about fan fiction is that the plot can be based on the original characters but not the characters. The plot is different. Kenpachi Zaraki should find people to kill each other or hire others to kill each other. He will get lost when he should get lost, just like what some writers wrote. Broken Bee is cute and playful. Sister Hua has become a good wife and mother and is ready to have a child. Can you continue watching? It doesn't have to be the same as the original work, you have to change it reasonably.       ，，？ I'm just annoying those people who, when others say it's unreasonable, just mention "This is a fan, this is a fan." Fan fiction is not self-pleasure. To use an analogy, writing about Marvel fans attracts traffic from Marvel fans. When I go in and take a look, Stark's words sound like Northeastern scum, and Black Widow has become an innocent and shy little woman. As soon as the comment is said to be unreasonable, some people will jump to "This is a fan." Isn't this pure wisdom? Having said that, why is it so difficult to write about Aizen, a Bleach fan, because the layout has been laid out for hundreds of years, and everything is well understood and planned. The protagonists either let nature take its course and do not interfere, or they confront Aizen in advance. Once the plot changes, many authors are unable to portray Aizen's charm. This is also one of the reasons why there are very few Bleach novels. After seeing everyone's discussion, I want to share my thoughts. I will read this book after posting the comments. But I saw in the comment section that Rangiku was okay and Gin went undercover because of his friends. . . . After changing the plot, don't you think you have the ability to create your own and stick to the original plot? ! Gin and Matsumoto depend on each other in Rukongai. They are childhood sweethearts. How can there be a friend worthy of Gin's undercover? How can the original novel not mention such a friend? If the author is willing to spend a lot of pen and ink describing a self-created character, it would be reasonable, but unless the character is given a lot of plot later, it will become a burden in the text.

It's over. I felt empty after watching it. I came in to watch it at first because I saw the demolition of Ranju CP, but gradually I found that the plot was getting better and better, and the settings and characters were not broken. The early plot was very good, and the confrontation with Aizen and the interaction with Mr. Shan were also very good. It's good to watch and interesting. I started to catch up with the plot after the middle. Although the timeline is not correct, it does not affect the viewing. Also, it is really great that Mr. Yamamoto is still alive. Although he is a bit stubborn after living for a thousand years, he is still a good person. But I thought you would write about infiltration Although it is unlikely based on the strength and character of the male protagonist, I somehow want to see them sneak into the high school, and then the group of high school students look at the male protagonist with jealous eyes (author, you should understand what I mean 😏) and the interaction of the female protagonist is also Less, even in the original work, there is daily life, but the Shura field is a bit missing here and it is not well reflected. As for the heroine, I think there can be a few more, such as Orihime, Nemu and Kongkaku, and Kiryu (only when she has lost weight after cooking) But when it comes to Kiryu, I thought you would teach her about the return of life and then accept it, but I didn't expect it to happen. There are also the two remaining knights (they should have accepted it). But I didn't expect that Orihime, the king of the Bleach series, would be confiscated by you. After all, you had even dismantled Rangiku, and if you took Orihime back, the three giants of the Bleach series would be complete (I don't need to tell you who the three giants of the Bleach series are) [fn=5 8]) But I hope that the next one will be collected. It would be better if there are more female protagonists than this one 😏😏 Also, I think the author can write a few extra stories if he has time in the future. If he doesn't know how to write about Shura Field, it would also be good to write about interactions or flirting.

The only flaw at the moment is that the lower-level nobles of Division 9 don't dare to mess with it, but it's ridiculous to look down on the protagonist, the heir to a big noble, and it made me unable to watch this part.

There are two problems. One is that the daily life between the characters is not enough, and it feels like it is always catching up with the plot. One is that the protagonist's combat power has collapsed, and then I feel that the protagonist's cheats have no sense of existence. They are just to improve the combat power. In this case, I think it is better to just set the protagonist to be an invincible genius. Overall, it's still okay. At least the story is clearly told, and the settings are more enjoyable. I think it is one of the better among the Bleach fanfics. (But there don't seem to be many Death God fanfics, huh~~) Then I ordered all of them and discovered that I was a disciple The author's next book seems to be about Death, I hope it will be better