The Last King

This pen name, this opening, Brother, why not write an article about the club president?

Let's get a little more grounded. How about a faster tempo? How about we cut it and rewrite it? Put the protagonist in an amateur middle school student competition and pretend to slap an amateur PE teacher in the face. I've been waiting for you for so long, but we really can't stand it.

The pace is too slow. The author doesn't think anyone wants to watch the protagonist pretend to be a slap in the face in high school football, right? Let's not talk about the opening and go straight into the game. At least we have to have something to do with professional football, right?

The starting point of the protagonist is too low. I don't know how many chapters there are until he plays in the five major leagues. There is also the conflict with the head coach. There is no need to write it. I wrote it just to deliberately show off and slap in the face. This is 2023, and it is not the previous taste.

I support the author in writing about the national football team. The national team career is originally a part of a player's career. It just has good and bad moments. Players just have to do their best. It is said that there are national football teams that are not watched. If it turns out that in reality there is a player who is really good and joins another country, then there will be another violent attack.

If you don't believe it, you have to touch the national football team. Then you have some backbone and don't cut it, okay?

Let's break up, don't look at it, a junior high school student runs 100 meters in 0.7 Seconds, and he also plays a hammer football. In junior high school, he has to be selected by the country to practice sprinting.

Writing about the national football team will definitely be extremely beneficial to the male protagonist of the football novel. It does not talk about patriotism, but only about interests. The male protagonist does not need to win the World Cup, even if he is qualified in the group, or even plays well in the group stage, the male protagonist can gain both fame and fortune, and become a big brother in the domestic sports industry, counting money until he is weak. And the domestic public opinion environment is too favorable. If he plays well, it is the credit of the male protagonist. If he does not play well, it is his teammates who are holding him back. Teammate CBA. With such a good public opinion environment, why not play in the national football team? Definitely kicking. Who doesn't want to be the savior? And the savior does not need to win the World Cup, that is the ultimate goal. No one will have such high demands on the male protagonist. The male protagonist only needs to play with style and be admired by children. If more people like to play football, this is a great contribution to football.

Wouldn't the author's idea be to use high school football to find a few original characters to study abroad together so that they can become the protagonist's future teammates? Otherwise, I really can't find a reason to write such a long list of high school football... I still don't understand why the author wants to criticize the national football team. It's obvious that the previous articles about players were skipped for random reasons...

I had been saving up for a few days to watch it, but I didn't expect to cut it. I also saved up a few monthly passes

Does Lao Chen want to learn from Lin Hai's book? 😂That model can't produce results without a fan base!

The first impression of sports is always that of passion and youth. What are you writing about? The pace is slow, the characters have no personality, are you a football fanatic?

Why does it feel like the protagonist is working hard for Real Madrid at the beginning 😂!

I hope you will write some plots about young models, parties, nightclubs, scandals, and private lives off the field. After all, no matter how good a football novel is, it is just boring text. If you don't write some off-field elements, the novel will be very boring. As time goes by, you will at least lose a lot of subscriptions, which will be a loss of your money 🤔 Don't think that many people who read novels are very moral. Who of the decent people would read such fake things as novels? ! This is your third book. I hope this book is not just about football, but also has many off-field or other stories. Men should have a manly romance. Impotent book friends think that alcohol and the opposite sex will affect the state of sports, because they just He's a piece of trash with no muscles. Messi has an Argentinian barbeque gang and has given birth to several children through mating. Is he in bad shape?😤😤😤😤😤

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. The male protagonist doesn't even have a girlfriend. I wrote a story about a supporting character who has a crush on a girl. That girl is so beautiful. I wrote it several times. Author, can you write a book? Strengthening the emotional drama of the male protagonist, downplaying the emotional drama of the supporting characters, or even not writing the emotional dramas of the supporting characters at all, is the correct way to write emotional dramas. How do you get the excitement of online writing? Compare it! The male protagonist used to be a beggar and is now a billionaire. This is a comparison of the male protagonist's life before and after, which will be refreshing. The male protagonist's fiancée and girlfriend are as beautiful as heavenly beings, while the supporting character's girlfriend is just average, or maybe she's big and round but is a tank. This is the contrast between the male protagonist and the supporting character, which can also bring excitement. How did you write it? The male protagonist comes from a poor background, and the supporting character is a second-generation rich man with a fortune of one billion. This is not a cool thing. He was crushed, but it is just a mention, and it is not a poisonous point. After all, the male protagonist will also be rich in the future, and he is a rich generation, so hard work brings happiness. But the male protagonist doesn't have a girlfriend, and the rich second-generation supporting character's girlfriend is as beautiful as a fairy. She mentioned it several times. Does this make people happy? This makes people feel frustrated, so it is a poisonous point. Contrast produces exciting points and poisonous points, which is the basic logic of web articles.

Chen Aiting seems like an old author in the sports area? Did he also play eunuch?

The author has great ideas, and it is very courageous to be patient enough to write like this in the current environment. But it is difficult for readers to calm down and read slowly. So either increase the amount of updates, or save up first. Are you reading after 500,000 words?

Don't the Chinese even have the confidence to enter the World Cup? I just don't understand. Reality criticizes the national football team, the Internet criticizes the national football team, and even novels criticize the national football team? Is it too much of a myth to help the national football team enter the World Cup with a system? You guys are kidding me, do you know what a myth is? Is this too much of a myth? Isn't it normal for someone to help the national football team enter the World Cup? What's more, it comes with a system.

I think the pace of this book is very good. There are too many fast-paced books. I like this one. And like this book, the author mainly exports his understanding and knowledge of football. It is not a pure fast-food article. The only problem is that it is not enough to read.

Alas, it's really beautiful, it's really a pity

Keep writing, I watched Messi play recently, and I feel like the Chinese team might really be able to enter the World Cup if there is a soccer champion.

If it is cut, people will worry about whether it will grow back in the future.