Super Storm

This book is extremely toxic. The storyline in the novice village in the early stage is too long, and I won the Champions League as soon as I played a game. I was also drunk. In the middle stage, the national team World Youth Championship came out. Before meeting the protagonist, everyone in the national team was a waste. Once they met the protagonist, they turned into geniuses instantly. , He was so awesome without even trying hard, and the main character is not that bad, and the main character worked very hard to achieve that level of strength. Furthermore, the emotional scenes were so embarrassing that I got goosebumps. I didn't watch the later part, and the national team directly persuaded me to quit.

Every time I see the heroine, I don't want to read it anymore. It's all about scenes from ten years ago. It's so embarrassing to watch. Every time I ponder it for a long time and then read a few chapters. When I encounter the heroine, I'm so disgusted that I don't want to read it. Then I continue to ponder it. The key is that the author often writes in large lengths. Oh, it's so confusing.

Except for a few descriptions of the protagonist, everything else feels too relaxed😠😠

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The author is a poisonous American, and every book criticizes Barcelona, ​​which is enough. Ps: Although I am not a Real Madrid fan, I can't stand Barcelona either.

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This may be because I haven't read the updates online every day and haven't read the book. Let's talk about this book. In the end, the system actually has no role in it. However, the protagonist Yang Yang's only regret when he went from player to coach was that he did not win the World Cup as a player. The ending felt a bit rushed. Maybe it was because I wanted to see more detailed reactions when he won the championship. It was finished in the end 🌹 and continue to support the author's new book 🤝🌹

There is nothing wrong with the training aspect, but I would like to offer some thoughts on the protagonist's character and psychological activities: 1. According to what was said at the beginning, the protagonist has been ridiculed for a year but has not given up. His character should be stubborn and tenacious. There is no reason to get angry when the opponent says "trash" for the first time! This is obviously a conflict. A stubborn person who wants to prove himself to others will usually hold back and wait for the day of proof to roar (understood as venting, as for the method, I will not describe it), not to mention it is a sentence that is tired of hearing, and most of the time the first reaction is to clench his fists and ignore it, right? Instead of looking like an irritable old man (if there is no system reminder, I would probably jump in) 2. After successfully stealing the ball for the first time, the protagonist's reaction was also very strange. What the hell is that "cold smile"? This is more of a trick to pretend to be a pig! Isn't the protagonist's first reaction a self-affirmation of confidence such as "I succeeded, I can do it"? At this time, there is no reason to pay attention to the other party's provocation or talk! Isn't it more about actually proving yourself? And so on, I feel that in terms of personality and psychological state, the description of the protagonist is a bit awkward when getting along with people, but on the contrary, it feels more harmonious when getting along with the system. Personally, I feel like this is a common mistake in system-driven novels. They don't pay much attention to the transition of the protagonist's personality. In other words, after acquiring the system, they relax their attention on this aspect and focus on other aspects. But sometimes this small difference will make people feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's character, and there will be some sensory deviations. The above is my personal experience. Don't blame~

As a bookworm who has been reading for N years, I just want to express my feelings. I read this book by the author after reading the recommendation of "The Strongest Demon Frontier", and then when I saw Chapter 4, I came in to make some random comments. First of all, I looked at the author's book list. Among the author's books, I have read "Super Coach" before. I remember that in the middle, there was an inexplicable sudden change from the author. Go buy Google stocks, and go back to China and buy a house in Xiamen? , And some other issues, I didn't pursue them anymore. Then "The Green Godfather" and "Superman" were all due to other reasons (toxic points?), So I didn't pursue them. After reading novels for so many years, I have an impression of competitive sports. The earliest basketball novel seems to be called "Fat Kid Ball King". That book I tend to be passionate, and the ones I came to ask for later were some books written by the author of "The Golden Age", and then some books by Tucao. It's about football. It was an early one. The main character's English name was Tiger. It was supposed to be popular in the system, and there wasn't much of a poisonous point about it. There is also a protagonist named Tony. Twain's, then "I am Jose", and "Champion Coach" which is endless every day, these two books are the whole process. After reading non-toxic, I have read competitive books for so many years, although I have never watched football or basketball games. Here are my personal opinions: 1. First of all, no matter whether it is a competitive or urban book about specific industries, the most interesting thing is some industry-related content, because reading this You can learn some relevant things, go out to chat with people, brag, etc., Without being totally confused and confused; 2. The frame design of the overall book. For most pseudo-fans who don't understand, there is no difference between competitive books and fantasy books. Fantasy books are very early. There is a relatively mature leveling system. Basically, each level has an advantage over the same level, or it can leapfrog. But the difference from the fantasy type is that, after all, it is It's based on the real world, and I really can't bear the thoughtless pretense and slap in the face, because most people in the real world have normal IQs; 3. Moderate exaggeration and improvement on the basis of the real world. I have read too many books. At present, I like to be more reasonable. System assistance is available, but don't exaggerate. Just like playing red and white console games. During the game, you keep putting skills to level A, and then the defender activates skills and slaps O'Neal away. It feels like you are reading a game book, and then a coaching book. There are 3 books in the five major leagues. You don't lose a game, and then the coaching class. The most unbearable thing for me is that others are severely disabled and can be solved with just one cure. I remember that one game started with Tracy McGrady having a back injury for two years, and major hospitals in the United States were unable to do anything. The protagonist went over and said, "I'll help you," and then slapped you on the back, and it was OK. If I were Tracy McGrady, I would directly contact the FBI to arrest you and slice you up. If you use a rune talent similar to LOL, it would be better to speed up the recovery rate by a few percent, and it is already a big advantage. 4. Female protagonists and harems. Most authors are not good at writing these kinds of characters. They can just mention them in one stroke. They can only be said to be embellishments. In short, I personally feel that the current competitive writing is to focus on the core competitive-related things, control the scope of other content, and then focus on reasonable directions and avoid very low poisonous points.