Become the Ultimate Creature Starting from the Black Robe

Thoughts after reading: The writing method in the early stage is not a big problem. The most important thing is that after coming out of the third world, I can completely understand why the protagonist has been hiding behind the scenes because he is not as powerful as the people of the motherland. But you shouldn't be like this after you come out of the third world. Why are you still doing behind-the-scenes gossip? It's a god, but you're not. This feeling is as frustrating as when a woman says I'm here to be my aunt. If you need some fantasy, you don't have to go through the plot. You can directly take over Ultra. You can change it as you like and you'll get a lot of fantasy value. I'm not saying that it's better to be brainless, but it's just practical. Li, why don't you come out? As of now, only Billy, Maeve, and Uncle Fried Chicken know the true identity of the protagonist. The people of the motherland are like fools. They have seen your six hearts and looked at you with a laser before, but they can't guess it. You write very well, even if you feel aggrieved, you just skip over the parts where you feel a sense of relief. When you feel aggrieved, you write all kinds of descriptions. After a tiring day, I really just want to relax. It is that kind of situation now. I have seen this coming, and my strength is about to be surpassed. Every chapter is looking forward to a strong suppression, but every chapter is disappointing. I feel frustrated when I read it, and I want to give up but can't let it go. To be honest, you really should Think about it carefully and listen to readers' suggestions. If I am the only one like this, then you should take my words as nonsense. If your grades drop inexplicably, you should really think about it. After all, there are not so many people on the Internet who take it seriously. After all, if you don't like watching it, just leave.

After reading three chapters, I no longer want to read anymore. I can accept that Gold Finger requires certain conditions to trigger analysis. However, after the analysis, one of them needs to be fused, and the second one cannot be analyzed until the fusion is completed. It's really disgusting to see you simply forcefully suppress the protagonist's combat power. I'm here to see a cool article, not to see you suppressing your combat power.

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Demon Slayer is not a good anime, and the energy level of the world is not high. I don't know why so many people want to write about it.

The protagonist's current talent for transformation, I think we can first copy the ability of the invisible man, and use transformation to solve the problem of clothes (personal suggestion, it depends on the author's writing). Except for the top capable people from the motherland, no one else can be seen, which is in line with the protagonist's style of making a fortune in silence. Don't copy Starlight's ability, it will be useless. The only effect after copying is to suppress the protagonist's combat power. Also, the theme of our writing is superpowers and biological mutation, right? I think your main world is a black-robed picket, and the first world is a parasitic beast. So, author, please don't write that the protagonist goes to the world of Death, Naruto and Pirates. It's so bad that it makes me vomit. And this is totally irrelevant! There is also fate. Many authors have to go there and don't know where to go. As long as the main character has some biological mutations, superpowers, or even Resident Evil, just don't talk about animations like Sea of ​​Fire, it will be fun to watch. A little suggestion, I hope the author's novel will be a hit.

The only novel about black robes that I have read so far

Why do we need to upgrade the level of the main world to travel through it? Why? To make the enemy stronger? What the hell. Then you should make it clear. It is easy for people to be confused and think that the black robe world is constantly upgrading.

There are too few, let me summarize the current abilities, Swordsmanship talent, transformation, transfer, radio induction, ultimate control, carbon super, self-healing enhancement (can be combined with adaptive self-healing), Cyclops (blue), gluttony enhancement, adaptive self-healing, heart engine, blood control, blazing wings, extreme speed, telekinesis, By the way: there are a lot of abilities, the author may be taking his time to analyze the ancestors so far. The ability of Chinese people is only one super physique, and other abilities can be analyzed together when analyzing Storm Girl's autograph session. I may not have thought about it, but why not analyze the remaining members of the group of seven while I have the ability to analyze. Black and Maeve's abilities are not weak. It is not good to analyze all the characters who already know the plot and then lay out to meet the analysis requirements. Of course, these are secondary and the most important thing. Hurry up and update it, the updates now are completely inadequate. 😭

This kind of book, which is considered as straw at best, can be popular. It's true that there are no heroes in American comics recently, which made Zhuzi famous. Killing the parasitic beast completed the task and gave him the ability, but not completely. He still had to contact the parasitic beast to slowly gain the power. After the ability was fully gained, it was said that it was too energy-consuming. After a few times, he had no stamina.

The dungeon world feels not very popular 😏, you can consider arranging some highly popular dungeons (except Jin Yong's martial arts 💀)

This garbage Demon Slayer is not over yet. Author, didn't you realize that all your subscriptions were lost after you wrote Demon Slayer?

It's too watery, especially ghost killing. It takes two or three chapters to fight a monster, and it takes two or three chapters to fight Wu Ke. There are a few pages of beeping, a few pages of environmental description, a few pages of psychological description, and a few pages of watching the opponent pretend to beep. After finishing one chapter, I found that I only used two or three moves.

A typical behind-the-scenes person writes himself to pieces, with fewer and fewer people watching, and his grades getting worse and worse, creating a negative cycle.

As with every world, some people love it and some people hate it. I can understand this. If the author points out that the pace is too slow, the author will speed up the pace, but he will never finish a copy hastily. I hope you can understand, I'm really sorry.

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Now that the protagonist has taken over, can those few little bastards who investigate superpowers and blackmail be killed? Is it interesting to keep doing things somewhere? I also write a few chapters of plot for these little minions from time to time. I am speechless. If I have the energy to write more copies, Also, are there any good people in this world? Don't wash it somewhere, there is no good person in the world of the motherland, it doesn't matter if you kill them all, Just like that Starlight, doesn't the author want to arrange a love affair between her and the protagonist? Anyone who has read the original work will feel sick and want to vomit. Don't wash it anywhere. For the sake of popularity and money, she can't do anything disgusting. Don't tell me that she was coerced by others. When she first entered the company and was manipulated by someone's words, she directly helped others. How can such a dirty woman be clean?

There is a problem with the order of the world. After the parasitic beast, you can go to the ghoul, and then the demon slayer. The power level and destructive power gradually increase. You've almost finished Black Robe, why are you still a ghoul? Are you just pretending to be cool just to participate in a plot?

This is a good book to read, come on, keep it up. Don't write about martial arts. Since it is the ultimate creature, then write about biology.

This book has an extremely flexible moral bottom line. If it was not deliberately designed by the author, it probably reflects the author's own moral values. In the world of the Black Robe Lord, the protagonist's moral values ​​obviously do not have much of a view of good and evil. He is a proper egoist. If it were not for the purpose of expanding the readership, the author's protagonist's behavior would be even worse than that of the people of the motherland. In an environment where the moral bottom line is not high, the protagonist has no morals, but in other worlds, the protagonist's moral values ​​are obviously higher. So readers who are not used to the dark, chaotic and evil style should know this in advance, so as not to feel uncomfortable after reading it.

You can't even figure out who the audience for your novel is. What else are you going to write about, author? Being happy or unhappy is the biggest joke I've ever seen.

The rhythm is very well controlled, and this alone feels like getting lost.

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The writing is also terrible, it's a waste of time. . .

I don't see what's so good about it, the main character is Virgin Mary. The writing of Parasitic Beast is so disgusting. . .

This book is quite interesting. I'm going to order all of it. If you write it as fast as you can, I'll give you all the monthly tickets! Come on author

It's soul piercing again, always bringing up the original body

So, apart from adding an extra protagonist, what else is there to the plot? After reading more than 200 chapters, when it comes to Soldier Man, almost 97% are original content, and some garbage water-injection content was added along the way, such as world travel. In the past, we still followed the original work step by step. So why don't readers who come to read the novel directly read the original work? Go watch a movie commentary? And come to see you? Readers who read fanfics are all here for the if, different process, and different second-created endings. You not only copied the original work, but also imposed a bunch of garbage settings. I don't know how much money you paid to brag about you in the comment section. You also said that the black robe fanfic is the best. To be honest, I don't even want to lose face.

The setting of Goldfinger is really unpleasant. Goldfinger also talks about gradual progress. Ha, do you need to teleport piece by piece during time travel?

Why do you write to show off in front of high school students? Just to let the protagonist use the system to defeat the people in the kendo club and then let the author have an intracranial orgasm?

Seeing that analysis requires conditions and that fusion also requires conditions after analysis, I just ran away. The author really did everything possible to suppress the protagonist's strength.