Douluo: Traveling Through Huo Yuhao, Starting with Yao Lao

The first part is okay, it's fun to watch, but the second part is either a competition or a forging or some unimportant things. The protagonist is timid and makes no progress at all even though he has the strength. It's really frustrating to watch. I gave up, gave up.

It feels like the most enjoyable fanfic I have ever seen. The author's writing style is very good. The most important thing is the concept and setting, which is not limited to the original work. 🙂 Of course, charging for 19 chapters is a bit awkward, but it's really cool to see what happens next. You can support the author, after all, he is a full-time writer. 😁

The writing before 160 was very good, but the further it goes, the more rubbish it gets. First of all, the cultivation level does not increase after fusion with the alien fire. The cultivation level has increased a lot after the fusion of Yan Emperor's Fallen Heart Flame, Three Thousand Flame Flame and Pure Lotus Demon Fire. Secondly, there is the art of refining medicine. I have been learning it for a while. I have never practiced medicine refining in seclusion, and I have never practiced taking medicine. I basically just refining medicine with Yao Lao. Even though I have three strange fires, I have never mentioned the art of refining medicine. Then there is Xuanzi. You really regard Xuanzi as a Holy Spirit Douluo. After Mu En died, he directly became an evil soul master. In the original work, he was just very unreliable, but you were totally screwed. Then there's procrastination. I am a book reader, and when he said he would change the map immediately, it turned out that it was Poseidon Fate, Star Dou Forest, and finally being chased by Xuanzi. I listened to it all afternoon without changing the map, and it was full of water. There is also the issue of the killer in the previous life. You, a killer, actually talked about the consequences after killing people. It made me laugh. The same happened when Zhou Yi assassinated. You can control everyone, so you can't fake the wound so that she and Dai die together? You're a killer, can't you arrange a scene and fake wounds? There are many villains who can be killed but don't, leaving Zhou Yi and Xuanzi to make themselves sick in waves. Finally, there is the issue of level. Dou Po Douzong can step into the void, but Douluo seems to be able to do so only at level 95, right? Dou Zun can control the power of space, and only Extreme Douluo can touch a trace of space power. It is absolutely fine for Dou Zong to match the standard title, but it is outrageous that your soul sect is equal to Dou Wang and can turn fighting energy into wings. There is also Fen Jue, unless there is something to drive it, it is absolutely It doesn't work. I can understand that the cultivation level is not very long in the early stage. I understand it in the later stage. The cultivation level is still not long. It has never been said that the level is broken through the practice of exercises (I have only read more than 300 chapters). The cultivation level is all obtained by sacrifices and taking drugs (still practiced by Yao Lao). To be honest, with this indecision, Tang Buddha in the original book can easily train you into a dog, and he doesn't even need to use his own daughter as bait.

Why can't I listen even though I've bought a membership?

The cover has been changed. This anime version of Huo Yuhao makes me burst into tears!

Here's a little suggestion: Shrek is the most unsuitable place for Huo Gua's development, and there are traps set by Tang Shenwang. It's recommended to stay away. Noumenon Sect and Sun Moon Empire are both good. Don't have a harem, two or three are fine, but I personally can't accept more (follow the author, personal feelings)

When I saw the title of Chapter 24, I had no intention of reading on. Really, what happened between the two of them was disgusting to begin with. It was already settled if they didn't stop and rob each other. The author still found ways to stay together. It was already disgusting to join Shrek, but the author still did this.

It was fine in the front, but the Douluo was forced to play in the back, weakening the Douluo. What kind of combat power does Douluo have? Hidden weapons have killed gods once or twice. In Chapter 488 of Douluo 5, a god cannot dodge the Zhuge Divine Crossbow within ten meters. Why on earth is the author bragging about Douluo?

This killer setting is really poisonous. In reality, as long as you have some skills, you will not do this job To put it bluntly, you are just a big tool man. Do you think you are very powerful? If something happens, just wait for death, no one will come to save you You might as well be mercenaries. Although they are all tool men and beaten to death by the regular army, at least they have a decent organization, and a lot of people sign up for the mission.

I know you were a killer in your previous life, but you don't need to talk about killers. Have you ever thought about what would happen if you failed to write? You know, if you make your character in the previous life so awesome and then do some stupid things, the protagonist will look like a fool when comparing the two sides? It's better to be an ordinary person than a killer. Ordinary people still have room for growth. The error tolerance rate is a little higher. If you make some mistakes, you won't make people want to complain.

I don't want to watch it when I see how to practice Burning Jue. I really don't have much to say. If there is no strange fire, how can you upgrade? Just practice a local level skill. If you don't want to kill people randomly, you have to do some Burning Jue.

What about disgusting people? Just a follower, Fen Juebu Yihuo is nothing, it's like the Yao Lao he made has no other skills.

I don't know if the author wants to read the comment section. The current trend is becoming more and more confusing. Can you explain why the protagonist and Shrek parted ways at the beginning, but now he is forced to help Shrek win the championship and become a disciple of Mu En, and he still does all kinds of actions with Shrek, swinging back and forth to make money? And now the plot is all kinds of watery

Doesn't the author not know how to write without Shrek? He still stays here despite clearly looking down on him. And the reason is to force Shrek to stay. Can't he learn from the sun and moon next door🤮

Huo Yuhao: "I want to ask, how strong are you now?" Dai Yuhao: (Master of the Poseidon Pavilion, Level 99 Extreme Douluo, unprecedented three soul cores, God of Emotions, 12 Great God Kings in the Great God Circle) Huo Yuhao: "Why are you silent, are you very weak?" Dai Yuhao: "You are the strongest titled Douluo." Huo Yuhao: "Since you are already so strong. Have you successfully avenged your mother?" Dai Yuhao: …………

The author is crazy! Chapter 437 begins with the confession story and then. It feels like I'm just venting the author's emotions all the time, and there are a lot of long articles that are useless.

No, if you enroll in Shrek, you won't be able to get out. It's no different from betrayal. Even if you don't want anything from them, will anyone believe it? Moreover, it is very bad for your reputation and character to change forces at will. What's more, there is a Tang Dashan who is watching, and you can't get out.

Flame God Eyes will be available in more than ten chapters. A running story produced by Duotuo Studio

Almost every chapter and sentence of the top killer in his previous life made me feel embarrassed when I read it. I thought I was reading a novel from more than ten years ago 😥

What the hell did I write in the later period? There was no intention at all in the early stages. Not only were the ideas substandard, but the writing was also rubbish.

It's a little bit poisonous to have to go through Shrek's plot with so many more hooks. Not to mention all the original hooks, what's the point of starting with the killer? A lifetime of experience, as well as all kinds of fighting skill points; I also need to be familiar with the plots of Douluo 1 to 4; in the end, it is not enough, I have to add a Yao Lao, the author is not too bad, at least the form of the ring grandfather is not discovered by Munn; Don't say that you can't find it. You have experience as a killer and have so many tricks on you. It's enough to walk to Tianhun, show off your martial arts, and go straight in. Don't say so much.

It is obvious that the author is no longer alive and is starting to act awkwardly. If this trend continues, the novel will most likely be unfinished. Now that the Tang family is beginning to gain wisdom, I don't even dare to think about what I will write next. Like other Douluo fans, the author of this book also did not think about how to write the later plot, and just wrote wherever he thought. It is simply impossible to write a new ending based on the background of the original story. The original plot setting itself is a mess, and no matter how small modifications and changes are made to it, it is still a mess.

There is a saying that it is really disgusting to change your surname when you go to the God Realm to recognize your ancestors and return to your clan. You have no backbone at all. You can't just break off the engagement like Xiao Yan. It's okay for me to be Huo Yuhao as the son-in-law. Also, my name is Huo Yuhao, not Dai Yuhao. All my strength is given by Tianmeng, Ice Emperor, Electrolux, Moon, Xuan Ziwen, Snow Emperor, Poison to Death, Qiu'er, Evil Emperor. It was not given by your Dai family. Your Dai family only gave me a pair of hatred. It was only childhood discrimination, beatings, abuse, and humiliation. I was beaten black and blue by Dai Huabin. My mother was beaten to death by Dai Huabin. I can't forget that day. If this happened to Tang San, he would have slaughtered everyone. He still wants me to forgive. Even if my mother asked me to change, I would not change. Even if I am hated by my mother, I will not change my surname. Otherwise, I will not be able to afford myself. If my mother does not agree, she insists on letting me change my surname. I can only cut off the flesh and bones like Nezha to repay my mother. If I am forgiven, my revenge is a joke.

The quality was great before Chapter 160, but it changed after joining the Noumenon Sect but still keeping Shrek. It was fine when I first stayed, but then it became a piece of shit.

I couldn't stand it when I saw the author's name. Do you really like Dou 2? No wonder you will lick Tang Sect's hidden weapons after reading the comments

Ma Xiaotao is really a good gun stand, I recommend collecting it 😁

It seemed okay at first, but after a hundred chapters it started to feel disgusting. I had a writing competition. I couldn't finish seventy or eighty chapters. I wrote almost five hundred chapters, and the main plot was not developed at all. It was all about the author venting his emotions. It's okay to complain about the original work, but writing three or four chapters in such a long and long manner is really speechless. If your writing skills are not good, don't open so many branch lines. , It's the abyss, it's the world of gods, it's the dragon clan, it's crazy water word count, basically the content of each chapter is a conversation between two people talking about some of the author's own concepts, just follow Dou Er's content and write a cool article, isn't it the end of it? I like to be original and write a fanfic, I'm really speechless, reading this book just makes me feel disgusted by spending money.

This book is pretty good, the protagonist is a fun-loving person, and there are many jokes in the book. I don't deny that some jokes make the plot more lively and interesting, but too many jokes can also affect the reader's perception. I probably read over 300 chapters, and then I couldn't stand it anymore. The plots of the previous chapters are basically based on the original work, but with the addition of strange fire and Yao Lao's plot. It's not very amazing, but it's watchable. Three hundred chapters later, after Mr. Mu died and Mr. Xuan succeeded to the throne, the author wanted to write his own plot, but it collapsed. After the destruction of Old Man Xuan, Mr. Mr. Xuan received an order from Tang San (a setting added later) to control Huo Yuhao (similar to brainwashing). As a result, Mr. Xuan directly labeled Huo Yuhao as an evil soul master, and then he was wanted across the continent. This is outrageous. Since it was written in your book that you want Huo Yuhao (brainwashed) to be the master of the Poseidon Pavilion, you ended up labeling Huo Yuhao an evil soul master. Isn't this a contradiction? You can also let the evil soul master be the master of the Poseidon Pavilion. Can the Douluo Three Kingdoms recognize it? Also, the author said from the beginning that he would end the Shrek story and run to the sun and the moon, but what was the result? From the beginning to chapter 300, the protagonist doesn't run away. What do you want to do? Every few chapters, I emphasize that the protagonist needs to run away, but it ends up being dragged out to over 300 chapters. There is also the fact that the book contains a lot of complaints about one fight, two fights, three fights, and even four fights. Originally, this was not a big problem, but the author even took out two or three chapters of the plot alone, and wrote nothing else about it. The most outrageous thing is that he had already mentioned this complaint in the previous chapters, but ended up using it again unchanged, which is simply outrageous. There is also the part about running Shrek. To sum up, it is probably because the protagonist wants to leave from the beginning, but the author is reluctant to let go of the plot of the original work, so he created an ontology, allowing the protagonist to be in Shrek but cut off from Shrek. In the process, Mr. Mu has been easing the plot between the protagonist and Shrek, and Mr. Xuan's love Kuang is a fun-loving person and wants the protagonist to stay with Shrek, so he comes up with some unreliable ideas, but as far as these are concerned, Mr. Then when Mr. Mu died, the plot became abstract. Mr. Xuan, who was originally designed by everyone, directly transformed into an evil soul master, and then killed the protagonist. The conflict between the protagonist and Shrek intensified instantly. The most terrible thing was that there was no foreshadowing, not even a hint. The only patch was made by the author later - Tang San wanted Mr. In addition, the protagonist's outlook on life is also quite bizarre. Sometimes it is decent, and sometimes it is twisted. For example, you have a grudge against the White Tiger Duke to steal items from the Star Luo auction, and this turns out to be the reason for you to rob the Star Luo auction. Let's not talk about whether the White Tiger Duchess in the original book belongs to the Xu family of Star Luo or the Zhu family. In your own description of Star Luo Emperor Xu Jiawei, he obviously does not trust the White Tiger Duke and has no feelings for the White Tiger Duchess. As a result, you directly defaulted to the Star Luo royal family as the enemy on the side of the White Tiger Duke, and then robbed the auction item of 500 million gold soul coins. You said that if you set the protagonist to be like Fang Yuan at the beginning, you would have robbed it. After all, I had no expectations for you, but you saved the opponent on the playing field, showed your kindness, and then robbed the auction item... I am completely confused by your character design. Author of Chapter 300, you were so arrogant when you first started writing your own plot. You have to abstract the whole thing, right? Why do you feel like you are too excited to write but can't get your head around it? ?

🐶Eunuch, give me back my starting coins

This book belongs to the kind of interesting original plot written in the early stage that completely collapses in the later stage. Although Huo Yuhao vs Dai Yuhao and the follow-up Qiankun Qinggu (tj but with some ideas) are the highlights in the later stage, the book collapsed from the moment of running the sun and moon. After Run Sun and Moon, it is filled with a large number of original plots and many original characters. Then the plot of the protagonist involving the struggle for imperial power of the Sun and Moon and finding a blacksmith to punish rape and eliminate evil is very embarrassing and boring, especially in the later stage when he becomes a god and still compresses his strength to act like a pig. In terms of emotional scenes, Ning Tian and Wu Feng were teammates in the early days. Fortunately, Ning Tian asked why Wu Feng was on the wrong team? Although it is home base, it has no presence. Dong took the initiative to confess but was basically disconnected in the later stage. Qiu showed up to help the Red King but continued to be disconnected (a new chapter was released at the end); then it was Taozi who took the initiative (it's interesting to be more than a friend). Orange had ideas about the protagonist's power, and Ling followed the protagonist to the sun and the moon... And then it disappeared... The problem in the later stage is that there is a long and boring description of forging the soul guide of the mecha, and then complaining about the original story and playing the game, but there is no highlight at all, and the Huodai duel and Qingqing Valley are a bit of a gimmick. Unfortunately, the thunder is loud and the rain is small.