King Ember's Journey to Teyvat

Let me explain in advance that the following are only personal opinions and are not intended to be disrespectful or disrespectful. It's pretty good, but you may be a little uncomfortable with it in the first few chapters. The author's description of the protagonist's battle in the early stage is a bit too simple, and it seems that the protagonist is very powerful and actually has good senses (although it is indeed weak because he burned himself as firewood in the magic circle). But starting from the middle period (referring to the middle period of more than 800,000 words now), the depiction of the protagonist's strength is much better, at least from the Liyue chapter, at least above Zhongli (but he will be exhausted for a short while after the output). As for the plot, the protagonist is a very cheerful character. The phrase "whatever you think about comes out comes out" fits the senses the protagonist gives me - surprisingly, it's to my liking. Advantage 1: It is very joyful. The cheerful character of the protagonist always makes me have the illusion of watching a husky wandering into a different world, but it is not the kind of extreme nonsense (that is, the kind of director Leng next door), but a very relaxing and happy feeling. Advantage 2: After the protagonist entered Teyvat, some more dark soul/magic circle characters came one after another, and a considerable part of them came to chase their husbands. Although from the perspective of the protagonist, he did not express clear feelings of love between men and women towards them. (He even rejected Lani after taking the ring!) But from the perspective of the audience, it still has a strong Shura field-like fun and joy. At the same time, the plot of some other characters, such as Mengt, after the courtiers came to Teyvat is also very interesting. Poisonous Point 1: In the early stage (around the early to mid-term of Mondstadt), the description of the interaction between some female characters and the protagonist is somewhat acceptable. It seems that the protagonist wants to be a humanoid m-drug, but that does not happen later. Everyone in the book basically has a kind of aesthetic feeling that their painting style is gradually getting biased. Poison Point 2: The overall progress of the book is a bit too fast, often one long story after another. Although the overall style is very joyful and it is not too tiring to read, it always gives me a feeling that time is accelerating. Appropriately adding some detailed descriptions/environmental descriptions in the plot will improve the overall reading experience. ps: I hope there will be a similar protagonist in the future, but in a story that travels back to the civilization before the collapse, I feel that the protagonist and Alicia would be very fun together ()

This book is only suitable for players who have never been exposed to soul rings. It is very awkward for soul scholars to read. There are many contents about soul rings in it that are wrong. For example, the nature of black souls and the Deep Sea Age. The Deep Sea Age is the era after the light soul is extinguished. It is not caused by the dark soul. There are also three generations of protagonists who do not have black souls. The blood of the dark soul obtained by killing Gale at the end has been painted for the eldest lady, as well as the abyss. The abyss is the collection of human nature, and the abyss is the precipitation of human nature. It has nothing to do with the deep sea. The second-generation boss Andier said that the dark soul is the essence of human beings, so the abyss is the dark soul in a sense.

Let's get rid of the poison. If you don't like reading about combat power, give it up now. This book is crazy about combat power. Keep on pressuring the combat power. It will kill all the casual guys. If you hit a lady, your skills will be weak immediately. It's hard to fight a thunder general. You suppress the combat power too hard. If you are awesome when you first come, you will be weak in the future. Whoever likes to watch it will read it.

Let me just say one thing, the skills of Black Soul are the skills of killing gods! The martial arts to kill gods, the techniques to avoid attacks, and the use of regular spells, incantations and prayers. After clearing the Ashes of Black Soul, even if there is no First Fire and no matter how weak it is, he is still the Morax without the elemental power during the Demon God War. Real surface T0 martial arts, equipped with equipment and props without the ability to fly, you have to lie down shivering, and you have passed the magic ring... TM What is this? I unilaterally do not admit that these things are undead and ashes, that's too much! If I admit it, I feel sorry for the Black Soul, Huanli Shage family and other gods and people!

It's okay, it's an ember, not one of those disgusting fakes.

At the beginning of Teyvat, did changing to the sun burn out your brain, or did falling and falling damage your brain? Maybe it was foreshadowing, so I wrote it like this.

The sense of immersion is very poor. Sometimes he is a world-destroying villain, sometimes he is a calm veteran warrior, and sometimes he is pure 2b. It feels like he is watching a lunatic who escaped from a mental hospital.

The plot of Xumi Desert is so convoluted, I feel tired

I just feel like the pressure is too strong. Do you think Ember can't beat General Thunder? Everything else is good, but you are really tough on combat power, I almost want to give up.

Weirdly, Ember has turned into a nonsensical loser At least it's not the Ember design that I like. There are too many other designs Killing through a world, killing several gods, Ember with such a high level of skill can write so low for you

To be honest, Teyvat may not be as vibrant as it appears. Although it may not be as painful as the Ring of Magic world, the underlying settings may not be much better.

Will people who like Dark Souls like to play Genshin Impact?

This book's combat power is very confusing What's the concept? It turns out that the protagonist in the book can beat the God of Thunder and listen to people's words, but he is beaten by ordinary people who can't use several elements of Xumi.

It's really well written. Although I haven't played Dark Souls Circle, I have heard of it. I once read a book about Lord Elden Crossing Teyvat. The writing was like shit. At first I thought your book was the same as him, but it turned out that it was much better than that one.

Too low😅

Illusion? The writing style gave me the feeling of an old father taking care of a child, with tears in his eyes, little girl, there was nothing I could do about her. It also has the feel of an early novel written by Dou Po, and even has a bit of Japanese light novel genes mixed in. It can only be said to be very strange.

Immortals have no sense of taste. To be honest, eating sunset fruits makes me feel like a person who has successfully recovered from cancer and is going outside to look at the dirt on the ground and just pick it up and eat it.

Pure rubbish, I would rather not have it than insult my library

Cute pinch

Although the protagonist is a bit crazy, you can see between the lines how happy the protagonist is from a desperate world to a vibrant Teyvat 😁

Before meeting the first girl, everything was fine, no matter the writing or everything, but after meeting me, I felt emmmmm. Also, the further you go, the more you will find that some of Genshin Impact's characters are not right and weird.

How to say it? Both Hara and Soul's circles are terrible, but the original circle is even worse, and Hara's world view is not suitable for writing fan fiction. It is recommended to write Star Iron. The environment is better, the world view is large enough, the combat power level is relatively vague, and the combat power is not easy to collapse.

At first, everyone thought that Yuan's worldview was very small, with only one planet. I watched helplessly as Yuan's worldview continued to expand to a very outrageous level. Generally speaking, the world will be briefly introduced at the beginning of the game to form a rough framework, and it will basically not go beyond that (unless there is a second game),,, but the original is different. He did not explain it clearly from the beginning, and the information was too fragmented, with pieces here and there. Complex things are more difficult to understand (╬▔ Dis▔) and most of them are in the form of fairy tales (named witches) In the children's book of the New Abyss, it has reached the level of the universe, implying a disaster that will destroy the universe... What else can be said, Teyvat is really a chapter! So it's not suitable to write fanfics. From the beginning of Phaneus, Tianli, Four Shadows, and Seven Gods to the Witch Coven, Dragon King, Five Sinners, Forbidden Knowledge, and False Sky... These many things have backstabbed many fan authors.

Please be sure to finish it. The author's growth is visible to the naked eye.

If you write your next book, you can focus on this advantage.

I took a look at the comments section and it was very noisy. It was a ghost kid and it was the original p. Alas, how could there be so many things in Bloodborne Soul III in the past? After the magic ring became popular, all kinds of new words really opened my eyes.

The author is writing a new book. Please give me a shout.

It's been almost a year, why are you still not dead?

This ember is too lively, at least from the front, and has inexplicable interactions with the characters. It is not suitable for those who want to watch Soul Brothers.

Have you ever played Honkai Impact 3 and read the novel where the characters like to play videos of Kevin and Otto?