Love After Renting

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"} [Use your handsome appearance to make beautiful girls excited] [Design a date that makes beautiful girls immersed] [Let them fall in love with you] [Become the perfect Tokyo handsome guy] [Content]: The male protagonist is an inspirational young man from the countryside who was born in a poor family. One day, a software called Rent-a-Boyfriend appeared on his mobile phone. It turns out that becoming a rental boyfriend can not only make money, but also win the favor of rich women and beautiful girls. [Book title]: Falling in love after renting [Author]: Hoshino Tsukili [Tags]: love, daily life, campus, Japanese, light novel [Status]: 28,000 words in series [Recommendation index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Evaluation]: ★This is a very everyday novel. As a light novel, it is quite qualified. The author's writing style is delicate and the plot is cleverly conceived. Most parts are very comfortable to read and make people want to read on. ★The plot is a bit exciting. Scenarios such as the first meeting between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, the meeting with the female protagonist's parents, and the battle of wits and courage with the female protagonist's suitor are all very interesting. [Author] The author has already completed a work before. He is not a newcomer and has experience in the field of light novels. It can be seen that the results of each book are better than the previous one, and you can look forward to this one as well. [Plot Speculation] ★Currently, we have written about the confrontation between the male protagonist and the female protagonist's suitor, which is a very interesting plot. I hope this pretending to be more advanced and not fall into the cliché. ★ I am not sure yet whether it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. There is only one female protagonist at the moment, but I think there is a high probability that it will be multiple female protagonists. [Disadvantages] At present, I feel that some of the plots are a bit cliche. The story of borrowing flowers to offer gifts to Buddhas was intended to be fun, but it was a little awkward. I feel that if I were the heroine, I would be disgusted with such cleverness. After all, the heroine's family is so rich that she doesn't appreciate such gifts. Picture: Sweet love~

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} Looking at the name, you can think that it is related to renting, just like the phenomenon of renting girlfriends that was more popular in society in the past few years because of the need to solve family problems. This book is about changing the soup without changing the medicine. It is developed with the theme of rent-a-boyfriend. It proceeds in a daily manner, with a natural connection between the set and the scenes. The inner portrayal of the characters and the description of the details are in place. Even if there are intrigues and smokeless struggles, the author will use clever language to exaggerate the atmosphere and make people immersed in the scene. Gong Ying, the freshman tyrant, is studying in a foreign country. In order to reduce the burden on his family, he works part-time and studies. He is handsome, honest and warm-hearted, and is well liked by those around him. One day, he found that his cell phone was poisoned and could not be removed by a rental software. After trying it out, he realized that this was a way to make money, so he took his first order and became the rental boyfriend of a young lady from a big family. Although it is the first time for both of them to use this software and communicate for the first time, fortunately, the smart people do things simply and quickly, and act according to the situation. Whether it is a high-ranking person in power or a banquet participant with his own hidden agenda, Amamiya Hotaru is flexible and can successfully complete the task. Especially the contest with the young master Fujii Sho and his crooked reasoning are all unexpected. I really want to praise him: Excellent! It's really high! It turns out that the charm of language can still be used in this way. When you rent a boyfriend, you will have some behavioral contact. The more you understand, the more your heart will be touched. As subsequent tasks are arranged one after another, how long will it take for Amamiya Hotaru to realize her dream? Will he fall in love with the drama and have an emotional entanglement with the renter? After all, the identity of those employing people is not simple either. Mei Yi, Shiina Kaori, Hoshikawa Misora... Each has his own merits, Chiba Junichi is a different passionate young man... Do these people have the shadow of the friends around us in life?

[Recommendation]: "Can I meet a beautiful girl by renting out my house?" "Can I still win the favor of a rich woman?" "Please let me bear this kind of suffering!" The author's writing style is online, the writing style is humorous in daily life, the connection and arrangement of the plot are reasonable, and the logic is self-consistent. Although the plot has some routines, the author's skills allow the male protagonist to always perform some eye-catching operations in the confrontation with the female protagonist's parents and suitors. The plot is interesting enough, and if the details were handled better, it would be extremely excellent. According to the setting, this is supposed to be a harem with multiple heroines. I hope that each heroine has her own characteristics and will not be too stereotyped. ————Dividing Line———— Work: "Love after Rent" Type: Light Novel Tags: Shura Field, Daily Life, Healing, Relaxation Status: 42,000 words (signed) Recommendation Index: ★★★ ————Dividing Line———— [Plot Summary]: The male protagonist came to Tokyo from the countryside to attend university. In order to supplement his life, he is thinking about where to work. A software called "Rent-a-Boyfriend" appeared on my mobile phone. Can I make money by renting myself out to rich women or young ladies? Since then, the male protagonist has started his rental journey. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

Yue Li has made great progress. Although the plot of Chapter 8 seems to be a replica of a classic plot of urban Shuangwen, at least it can be seen that the plot has been understood and conceived, which made me quite emotional. At least it's much better than the previous episode. But I also hope that you won't write an urban romance novel disguised as a light novel about campus love. . Although your current traffic and collection are quite good, I still want to try my best to conceive and construct a plot. At least you know how to learn from it, which is good. I was really impressed by Shibetsu Sanri. I don't know if you messed it up, so you just wrote it according to the routine. But I still hope that you will not forget your original intention, but I don't know what your original intention is when writing. Maybe you started watching too many anime and light novels and wanted to write, or maybe you wanted to make money later because of life problems, or you had the purpose of making money in the first place. But I still hope you can write every book well, happy. This is how it is done from the reader's perspective. Of course, from the perspective of an author, I might think so: don't mess with it, I want to make money, contribute collections, follow-up readings, recommendation tickets, monthly passes, etc. I want to make money. In short, I hope you can write every book well. After all, sometimes if you write a book well, you will earn the money you want to make. If this offends you, please don't have the same understanding as me.

Personally, I think it would be better if the male protagonist is not too proactive. He focuses on the process of making money to support the family and slowly develops a relationship with the female protagonists. I think it would be more interesting.

[Recommendation]: The arrogant and indifferent eldest lady is like a girl from the Edo period, who loves reading but is weak. The girl next door has a cheerful and lively personality. Although she is a bit frivolous, she is surprisingly cute. The class beauty with a gentle personality is very good at taking care of other people's emotions. No matter who she is with, the atmosphere is always good. Of these three, which one is your true destiny? If it were you, which one would you choose? [Rating]: ★★★☆☆ [Subject]: Light novel - Daily love [Book title]: Love after renting [Author]: Hoshino Yuki [Status]: Serialized (on the shelves) [Evaluation of the work]: I am not sure whether the author is a bad name, but since it was put on the shelves, the same chapter names have been appearing, which is indeed a bit disappointing. Moreover, the same chapter names can easily cause visual fatigue. Not only that, since it was put on the shelves, the main plot has developed slowly, and the heroine has only appeared a few times. This is extremely fatal in romance novels. Coupled with the watering down of chapters, I am afraid that many people will abandon the book. As a Japanese romance novel, the author's writing style is very similar to a Japanese novel. But from the plot point of view, the author is better at writing poetry and haiku. Compared with this, the writing style is slightly insufficient and cannot control the haiku written by the author. Although this book has been somewhat disappointing recently, it is generally worth recommending. This book describes a beautiful story and the complete youth of a group of boys and girls. Although it is somewhat illusory, it is also something that people can't help but look forward to. The galloping wind of youth is more precious than gold. Recommended Group: Readers who like daily romance genre. (ps: The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.) {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Lung Terminator"}

I thought of a game, "Love? I borrowed it"

It's brotherly love again that helps people pursue the heroine.

[Recommendation]: A rental girlfriend turns into a rental boyfriend in an instant. The protagonist is an all-round boyfriend with a high degree of education and high IQ. He graduated from the Law Department of the University of Tokyo and ranked second in the communication exam. He is famous all over the world. The heroine is from Waseda University, and her family is very rich. This pair can be said to be a well-matched pair, a talented man and a good-looking woman. In terms of casting, it's much better than Rent-a-Girlfriend. [Rating]: ★★★☆☆ [Subject matter]: Light novel - love romance [Book title]: Love before renting [Author]: Hoshino Tsukiri [Status]: Serialization [Evaluation of the work]: The author has good writing style, strong word processing ability, the plot setting is also very novel, the rhythm is smooth, and the protagonist setting is also very successful. It is a very good novel. Although the author borrowed the routine of "Rental Girlfriend", he did not copy the plot of the series. Instead, he used it to develop new stories, design new characters and new themes. In terms of growth, I think this book is not as good as "Rental Girlfriend"; but in other aspects, whether it is the love story or the settings, writing style and routines of the male and female protagonists, I think they are better than "Rental Girlfriend". It can also be said that the author has a good imagination. It can be seen from the author's pen name and many details in the article that the author is a two-dimensional enthusiast and has a good understanding of many aspects of Japan. Before writing this book, he must have put a lot of effort into it. Most of this book was written out of love. I admire the author for this. But the author is not good at writing characters. Although the character design is very good, many plots will have characters and settings collapse. The author did not notice it. I hope the author can think about the characters and feel them carefully, which will definitely improve a lot of creativity. Generally speaking, this book is a very good book for love and romance. There is not too much industrial flavor in the book, and it will feel very sweet later on. [Recommended groups]: Fans of "Rental Girlfriend", love lovers, readers of light novels. (ps: The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.) {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

I really like this book, especially the character Haruka. In fact, at first I felt that Haruka always gave me a bitch feeling and I don't know why, but the more I read, the more I like this character. It feels very vivid.

Generally speaking, hotaru is a girl's name

Each chapter begins with the title and title of the book. Is it because the word count is wrong or is it wrong? I thought I was reading this book on a pirated website.

It's very good. It can be seen that I wrote it very carefully, although the results are not very satisfactory. Come on, you will succeed

It's not about the abundance of beauties, it's about the finesse. The only thing in my heart is true love. When I saw the front, I was anxious. Hero and hero, what are you waiting for? Take action when it's time to take action.

I want to see Chiba being tortured to the point of leaving home, hahahaha 😆

How about, I will be the first to support you

After reading about a hundred chapters, there are too many characters... Although the plot of the diving club is well written, it has nothing to do with the rental. After more than ten chapters, the plot of Mei Yi is cut off. In a series, there are a lot of diving club members from different universities and relatives and friends back home. It is a bit baffling 😥

Finished with flowers. However, I have been very busy recently and have not been able to follow it. I am sorry that I have only read the first ten or twenty chapters, which is probably the part about the diving department. But there are a lot of things happening recently that I can't watch anymore. When I have free time, I will read it slowly. I am also looking forward to the next book, but please forgive me for not being able to follow it from the beginning. But I will continue to follow your next book and leave footprints in every chapter. At the same time, when I finish reading, I will leave you a copy of my own evaluation.

So cute. 😍😍😍

The beginning is a classic plot of pretending to be a young lady's boyfriend to pass the test. I guess I'm tired of watching this type of plot too much. I really can't stand it... This theme may be good, let the latecomers come and appreciate it.

Today's No. 1

First

When I saw the introduction to this book, I immediately thought of the episode "Listen to Dad"

What is the role of Kirino Sakura in this plot I don't understand

The characters of Haruka who likes a little tea and Mei who works silently are quite distinct, but the ending plot is still a bit unsatisfactory. Good work, author.