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It's written as if it's for children. It's so embarrassing to watch. The protagonist is also very embarrassed.

Cut the red eyes, I haven't heard the name of the flower, April is your lie. You can write about Inuyasha, but no one seems to have written about it.

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By the way, does the protagonist live in Japan? Many people around him have Japanese names.

The author's daily writing about the main world is surprisingly good! Usually this kind of novel has the protagonist in the main world suffering from hysteria~

My own strength was obtained by taking drugs. Put aside this episode of mocking people who honestly develop bloodline power, why not eat minced meat

Daily life is the essence, but the arrogance and bad taste of the protagonist in the later stage are really enough to make people speechless (simply stated) It's not that I don't want to play because I have the ability, but that such a person seems uninteresting.

Ever since I wrote about Dou Po, I didn't want to subscribe to even one chapter, and I couldn't even read it.

Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?

Idiot primary school student literature

It's very white, so it looks awkward, haha

A large group of people are scolding, and the scolding is incomprehensible (as if recommended to the wrong group of people), try the poison yourself

It's boring to feel invincible when there is no opponent, but when there is an opponent, he hesitates and feels that the scope of the impact is too large and dare not take action😅

After reading the introduction and a few chapters, I felt that this should be the kind of story without a female protagonist where all the group members are paired up by the protagonist, but the protagonist is still single.

A self-righteous superman

This combat power system just made me laugh, especially the protagonist of Dou Po Chapter thought it was troublesome to travel, so he went to capture the Amethyst Lion King. Later, when he went to the Soul Palace, the protagonist said something about Daluo Tian, ​​Daluo Jinxian, and said that he had become a Daluo Jinxian at the age of ten. Then he learned a lot of immortal sutras and advanced moves in novels such as Transformation of Freedom, but it turned out that it was troublesome to travel. Good guy, he boasts so much that he can't even shrink to an inch and teleport in space, right? 🤔

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist's speech in several copies is very childish. He wants to be a fun-loving person but can't express his enthusiasm. If he can't make people happy, he is very vulgar and childish 😰😰

Why do chat groups write about Japanese comics? This is cultural invasion. In today's society, if you can't say you can't write about it, you may not be able to think about it in the future. . .

I think the author's subject matter and writing are okay, but you should really read the comments from readers. Many common-sense mistakes are made wrong. Since you are a cloud viewer and are too lazy to understand the original work, the readers have raised them for you. You can just change them after taking a look. It is not related to your plot. It is indeed a real mistake.

"Human Immortal" (×) "Licking Dog Turtle" (✔)

The writing was okay at the beginning, but after more than 200 chapters, it has become very watery. Book friends who fall into this trap should be careful.

The writing is so messy. When I saw the title, I had no idea of ​​reading it.

I didn't expect that even those who have never read the original work can understand it, with almost no barriers. This author has taken a broader path, and this world is the best one I have ever written among all the infinite streams. It has the flavor of a light novel, I love it! Everyone can enter!

The daily writing is pretty good. I might try writing daily light novels in my next book.

The world of Altais is like this

Damn it, your book is not a joke? I feel like a three-year-old child is capable of carrying mountains. Do you want to be so insulting to people's IQ?

Brother, hold on, update, why have you been waiting all day?

Don't be fooled, author. I've always been a prostitute for nothing, so I paid to read your book. Please be more diligent.

Chao Gai is a good man, everyone says so. Brother Lin Chong, since you recognize me as your brother, I will take you to the capital and kill Gao Qiu until he bleeds like a river! Fellow Taoist Zhao Ji, since you call me senior, I will give you this red umbrella white stem fleshy Ganoderma lucidum taken from the Yaochi Lake in Yunnan to make elixirs for you. Aguda, since you are willing to die to prove your ambition, then go ahead with peace of mind, your wife, I will support her! Toba Japanese King, since you kneel down and ask for surrender, why don't you surrender your country as soon as possible? Don't you know that Jun's father hasn't swallowed the meat on his lips yet and is very hungry? Haosan, I heard that you have made a fortune selling curry. The girl on her left hand has money on her right hand, and she races gods by the Ganges River. Then double the gold and silver tribute. Why don't the Western barbarians kneel down when they see the miracles of the East? A piece of knee is missing and the legs cannot be bent straight? Then cut it open, crush it, and let me take a look at it for you! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person who likes to smash people to pieces. Chao Gai was sitting on the top of Weiyang, facing the morning sun, bathing in golden light, and welcoming all nations to come to court. Suddenly, a big book that was thousands of miles long fell down overwhelmingly, and the pages were opened to reveal a line of large characters: ... "Water Margin of Destiny" occupied precious land for publicity.

Why are there so few in daily life? What did you get me for during our last date with Hui Hui? I let out a sharp roar when I saw it!