The Peerless Tang Sect: Yi Yu Huan Sheng

I always feel that if Huo Yuhao were replaced by Ying Changyou, the plot would be almost the same.

Little Yakuza: Oops, someone actually wants to kill me in front of me. My tool mother, the Golden Ancient Tree, also knows about it, but I just won't do anything. Come in Shrek and you will be discovered by the Golden Ancient Tree if you don't stay for half a year. With a god-level consciousness, can't he detect you right in front of his eyes?

Well, I just read the introduction. To be honest, the soul beasts on Douluo are all rotten fish and shrimps, which can be controlled by a god. Except for the Silver Dragon King, they have a need to unite.

The routine is too old, it was written ten years ago

Don't be afraid of Ma Xiaotao. The author is just disgusting. I've never seen anyone write about Ma Xiaotao and make her famous.

Author Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor is not the heroine?

Why are there so many heroines? Please author, please take in the Wind Baboon. He was too miserable in the original work 😭😭😭😭😭[fn=1 2]😭😭😭One more is not much, one is not enough😭😭😭😭

Senior Sister

I have never read the original novel of the Douluo series, so I have always had a question. Didn't Wang Dong say that she is the daughter of San Gou? This can also be used as the heroine. Stop being disgusting and slip away.

Hurry up FMD update, teachers should read it

The author, the heroine has Wang Donger, but why is she not seen and how much of the plot is there? Could it be that the avatar is just to deceive people?

Isn't there only one of this auspicious beast in the world? There is a three-eyed ginni, so why is there a unicorn?

I have a small suggestion. In this book, the heroine's spirit is too low, giving people the feeling of a tool and unable to establish her image.

The writing is good. I have watched a lot of Time Travel Douluo. Leng Buding saw an original indigenous protagonist. It is very novel, and the author's writing is good. It does not have the same old-fashioned Star Dou Grilled Fish opening as other peerless ones, but an original new plot opening that is worthy of praise. The plot is smooth and comfortable to watch. Okay, after praising you, let me talk about some flaws that I think. The protagonist starts in the Qilin Sect, but it turns out that the martial spirit is the original martial spirit. Although the setting is to pick it up, but you also set the Qilin martial spirit as if it can be obtained by signing a contract, but it turns out that the two martial arts are not Qilin manifested spirits. There is no use in getting this sect, of course it is no problem for the development of the plot. Secondly, the chapter about the entrance to the class is too rigid. It feels that it does not meet the author's level of context. First, there is something about not wanting to wear school uniforms, and it is hinted that the class teacher is the one in the original work. Teacher Zhou, who likes to expel students, can guess that the ending will be a conflict between the protagonist and Teacher Zhou, and they will be slapped in the face. It feels very abrupt. It was specially written just to slap the face. In fact, if you don't want to wear school uniforms at the beginning, you can describe it as the clothes on your body are the clothes of the original sect. The uniforms were given by the master and they could not give up to express determination and not change the school uniforms. Also, Dean Yan and the others didn't know that Teacher Zhou liked to expel people. He had a bad temper and a bunch of rules. Didn't they foresee that a conflict would break out because the protagonist was so maverick and didn't wear school uniforms? Why must she still be the class teacher? Why can't the protagonist change to Teacher Mu's class, or even change to Teacher Yan's class behind you? It would be better than a teacher-student conflict. When I saw that chapter, I thought she had changed, but there was nothing wrong with the rest of the text. And one last point, is the character Kanna Wangdong introduced by Mao the heroine? Instead, Ma Xiaotao is the female supporting role? Did you write the interaction between the protagonist and Wang Dong?

The author is so awesome, he gets 5,000 updates per day. Come on, author, try to get 10,000 updates per day.

Tell the truth about Time Travel Douluo If you are a human, just take the human route. If you need to hunt soul beasts, then hunt the soul beasts. If you are Dou Yi and follow the route of inheriting the god's mansion or creating your own god's mansion, don't think about unrealistic things like unifying the continent. Look at the forces that want to unify the continent in the original book. Which of the forces that don't start with awesome and coaxing endings will be thrown away for you. , If the timeline is after Tang San became a god, it would be strange to find a god to inherit and not even think about becoming a god by faith. Not to mention the other big Ming and Er Ming that Tang San left in Douluo Continent, his father and mother are the obstacles that cannot be overcome by those who create their own gods, let alone Tang San himself. Why bother? Everyone just can't stand it. Is there any other interest in Tang San's style of doing things or other things? There is no hatred in this family, so why bother looking for trouble for yourself? If you travel through time and become a soul beast, don't worry about Dou Yi or other time periods, just say it obediently, it is best to find some soul beasts with good bloodline to gather together , it's best to run to the sea or other continents. Anyway, don't show up before the God Realm is swept away. Once the God Realm is swept away, quickly become a god. If you can achieve and surpass the God King before the Great God Circle comes back, you can do whatever you want. Otherwise, after the Great God Circle comes back, you will either join or run away and there will be no other choice.

When writing Dou Er, you must use the time and space turbulence brought about by your own time travel or the golden finger to isolate the connection between the God Realm and Douluo. Or maybe the evil and good god-king of the divine world has taken a liking to the protagonist and has a backstage. It happened that these two people wanted to run away. Otherwise, Tang Fozu would be watching and scheming every day to suppress him. Or want to kill you. Even exit in person. Even though I know I won't die. But he couldn't beat Tang San at this time. He was beaten all the time. There is nothing he can do against Tang Shenwang. A bit disgusting. It is best to activate the God King dungeon after becoming a god.

Can the author guarantee completion? 😍

Ice Emperor

Why did you bring so many personal items?

Is Wuhun the world and weather forecast?😆

Let me first ask if this is an Aboriginal text or a time travel text.

I hope the heroines include Gu Yuena, Wang Qiuer and Wang Donger

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