My Mecha Can Insert Entries

The content is interesting, and the title sounds like studio trash. Don't know what to think

After reading more than 10 times, I said that this novel is about what it is about. What system, mysterious god, and armor are in the front, and then parents are missing and Plan 8. There is no explanation at all. I can't understand it. I can't understand it.

Come on, the author 😏, sent some AI mecha pictures

What should I say? This is a mecha novel, but neither the title nor the introduction have mecha elements. When I looked at the title alone, I thought it was the kind of article that refers to being invincible. If you change the title and introduction, there must be friends who like mechas to read it.

After reading ten chapters, I still don't understand anything. I'm so tired, so forget it.

My grandson didn't understand it, my son didn't understand it, and I couldn't understand it even more.

The biggest problem with this novel is that the setting is not good and it doesn't feel right. If you want to cheat, you must do it exclusively. Like the master, the cheat belongs to the protagonist alone, and don't let others discover it (if someone discovers the cheat at the beginning, it will lose all the fun)

Why is there a conspiracy behind the scenes? Can't there be a regular passionate mecha story?

I have a question, that is, the author, would you let the protagonist of the novel reach the end, even if the ending, the mortgage has not been paid off? This is cooler than cyberpunk! It's just fantasy realism

Please follow up on the reading, especially the reading on Tuesday, it is very important, please everyone.

So weird, so weird! I still feel that the mysterious world and the real mecha are difficult to connect, and it feels like two separated time and space.

To make myself more active, I revised Chapters 8, 9, and 10 today, especially the character design of the heroine in Chapter 8, which I changed several versions. But it suddenly occurred to me that I could not go into so much detail and flesh out the characters through the subsequent stories. But as of the latest chapter, the heroine has not appeared for 20 chapters. This opportunity can only be grasped in the next few chapters. It feels more difficult to change. After that, the conflict between the male protagonist and the real world is deepened. For example, the evil god has the ability to find him in the real world, and the male protagonist is encouraged. Secondly, the horror of Chen Sheng, the deceitful god, is used to highlight that the modification of the later copy (script) will not be so abrupt. Because the male protagonist broke in, the deceitful god was anxious, and the fox said "the script has been changed again" to add rationality to the later copy. Chapter 10 also changed some logic to make the plot smoother. The next step is to start coding today's chapter, which should be 3,000 words in one update and 6,000 words in two updates a day.

Author Jun, you are really weak in naming and writing an introduction. If you improve these two things, it won't be so bleak. The book is quite good, some suggestions. The first is the name. You can refine the content carefully, or it can be literary and artistic. If it really doesn't work, can you remove the comma? This comma is ridiculous. Then there is the introduction. Your introduction is too heavy. The title of your book is based on a gimmick, so the introduction should also be biased there. As a result, you ended up with a hot-blooded and embarrassing introduction. I couldn't run away. Let's think about it, it's pretty good.

It seemed pretty good at first. The inexplicable disappearance of my parents felt a bit unexpected, and I couldn't stand it any longer. I originally thought it was pretty good if I followed the system's path. Come on, I'll withdraw first.

Quickly change the title of the book. I didn't even want to click on your title, so I checked the book circle.

I saw Chapter 26 and was a little confused. In addition to the protagonist of Plan No. 8, Is that former classmate also selected? Didn't I say at the beginning that those classmates were just for military training? Do we also need to learn professional knowledge together? It was so confusing to read, and it felt weird from the beginning. It felt like the author had a great time writing it, but it was very awkward for the readers.

After reading Chapter 15, I am in a fog. I still don't understand how to use the golden finger. Here comes the No. 8 Project.

I think this book may become a eunuch. When the time comes, I hope some brothers will leave a message for me to see if it is accurate.

Refinement