Become a God in One Test

Although it is very watery, it can make people watch it patiently🤓

It doesn't matter if it's poisonous in the front. But when I saw that I wanted to bring Qing Qing and his younger brother together, I stopped subscribing. I don't know if it will succeed in the future. Qing Qing obviously likes you, but you want to give it to your younger brother. There are standards for helping your younger brother, and you are not Voldemort.

I can't stand the poison I made a mistake once when I was seventeen or eighteen years old, but I still can't stand the temptation at the age of thirty-one. Chapter 7: If you sleep with a drunk woman, I will sue you for it. From then on, my son was bullied even worse and couldn't hold his head up in school. My son doesn't know how to teach, he indulges and indulges, and he can't control himself. Dear book friends, you should take a warning from the protagonist, and be careful at an age when you are incapable of being a father.

Has the author ever considered a new way of writing? You write two books at the same time, one written from the perspective of the protagonist and one written from the perspective of the son, comparing each other. I think this method has great potential.

On the first point, without a household registration, how can you go to school? It's true that if a child is born at the age of 17, the household registration can only be with the mother.

This little brother is of no use. Without the main character, it would be pure trash. Deleting it would have no impact on the book at all, and it would also cut out a lot of nonsense plots.

How should I put it? The author probably has no experience in the life of the lower class people, but he writes about the life of the lower class people. It is very similar to the one about why not eat minced meat. A person whose income from running a motorcycle is unstable and can earn dozens of dollars a day will be willing to eat barbecue, and eat it often? You are single and raising a son. Your mother is still in poor health and your brother is not married yet. You are running motorcycles outside and you can save money by eating alone. You even go to barbecue and the money you earn is not enough for you.

I would like to ask, how come a person with a height of 175cm is said to be tall? Now the national average height of the post-00 generation is over 175. The average height in the north is generally over 177, and even in Shandong it is over 180. Those who are 175 are not qualified and are third-class disabled.

There are many female characters in this novel. What kind of policewoman, what kind of beautiful teacher, oh, these are all old clichés, so don't keep writing about them. I'm a little tired of looking at them.

After reading the first 8 chapters, to be honest, the author's descriptions were very real, because the male protagonist made me sick and vomited. This kind of nausea is due to the author's precise grasp of the character and behavior of this type of people. In just eight chapters, the protagonist's character traits such as indulgence, irresponsibility, greed, lust, neglect, bravery, and tireless hard work are melted into the gloomy social background, making people feel like they want to vomit and cry. It's too disgusting, because everything in the novel is ubiquitous in reality and cannot be exaggerated. This is why I only read eight chapters before commenting.

As good as the writing in the first twenty chapters is, the writing in the later chapters is bad. From the first twenty chapters, you can see that the author's writing is not bad. Maybe you were inspired to write in such detail, so the more you write, the more interesting it becomes. But readers simply don't want to read such a running account. If you write novels for entertainment, then just pretend I didn't say this. But if you write novels to make money, you should think carefully about how to write it. You urge your son to change, have you changed yourself? In addition to the stock news provided by the system, have you ever thought about making yourself stronger? Take a walk here and there every day, care about this, care about that, Holy Mother, no need! You are writing a novel, so just talk about the shortcomings of your parents occasionally. If you talk too much, you will get annoying! Also, building villas in rural areas is very expensive. A larger one really costs millions or more. And can you marry a wife even if you have a rural villa? Don't be naive, rural villas can only be used for your parents to live in in their old age. If the protagonist and his brother want to get a wife, they should find a way to buy a house and a car in a big city, and then have a better job!

There are quite a few minor points, and the writing is very streamlined. I can't skip many chapters while reading it. The author must be a novice.

The writing style is okay, but the writing is like a running account. Dad, the protagonist and role are not well written. Everything is waiting for his son to become a dragon. It is too weak.

I'm speechless. If I had known that the cheat was going to be exposed, why would I have seen Chapter 203? It was a waste of my time. Subscribe.

The journal is quite well written, 🙂

I hope the author cherishes his book. The latest few chapters are copied and pasted to fill in the knowledge of securities, and it is illogical to buy a house for his younger brother without dividing the family. The author's book is quite thoughtful, and the writing is also in line with some people's opinions. I just hope that it will be a snack. One or two black spots are okay, but if you write more, you may lose readers. If you write carefully, you may slowly start to subscribe.

If you have a running account, please hurry up.

The subject matter is good, but your writing style is really awkward, especially the dialogue between father and son.

Chapter 200 is indeed a threshold. The explanation of deceiving family members to buy medicine abroad does not make sense at all. Unless this medicine is really available, someone else will have gastric cancer (for example, the woman's relative) 🤫

I read 6 chapters. In one chapter, I saw the teacher's clothes and thought she was a slut. In one chapter, I drove a motorcycle to make money and delivered it to the door. While rejecting it, I wrote that the woman was cheated on by her boyfriend, so she slept with the protagonist to get revenge on her boyfriend. After sleeping, the protagonist said that it was the woman who forced her to do it, and she didn't blame herself.

Everything else is still watchable, but for the weight-loss plot, please ask the author to ask a fitness coach. A child weighing 200 kilograms would kill someone if he walked up to five kilometers or ten kilometers...

I suggest you write a book about your daily life with your son. You can only touch on business matters in one sentence and don't write them down in detail.

I typed a lot of words and then deleted them. A thousand words are worth two words. It is a good book. It cannot be regarded as a good online article (it is difficult to agree with everyone), but it is indeed a book with a soul.

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