The Heavens Begin from Yihua Palace

I've read Chapter 123, and it's a bit awkward. If I don't accept Tie Lan Xin, why should I write her heart-warming plot? Now I have to push it to Hua Wuque, and I feel unhappy!

Don't have an affair with someone who is not the heroine. It will be very uncomfortable if you don't accept it after you do it. Besides, you can accept one or two, and no one will restrict you, so what are you afraid of?

I think all female protagonists should be written, or they should not be described in depth, otherwise it will make people feel uncomfortable.

There are too many details in this book. If it is inappropriately detailed according to the standards of the book judge, can you tell me what the point of the protagonist going out for nothing is? Curing smallpox, saving a child, curing the locust plague, and convicting at least two cases (scallion pancakes and cows), of course it's okay for the protagonist to do this, but as an author, why do you write these things? It can neither create an image nor advance the plot. You can say that you are writing about daily life, but you have not yet captured the feeling of daily life. There are just a few plots that are meaningless.

I don't want it to be a harem story. The plot of marrying Yao Yue and Lian Xing requires it. If I continue to flirt with women later, I can abandon this book.

In this version, Yao Yue and Yan Nantian are lovers

I just don't understand. We're getting married in just a few months. Why are we going out to hang out? ? Wouldn't it be nice to travel around the world with Yao Yue after getting married? Forget about being promiscuous, he still flirts with girls everywhere. I wonder if Yao Yue is jealous.

I can't even finish Juedai. Most of Juedai are quite good. The later part of writing about Tie Xinlan's love affair with Hua Wuque is very poisonous. Since you don't intend to accept it, don't write about how Tie Xinlan likes the protagonist. This kind of "gifting girls" behavior is very poisonous.

Wonderful story

Wife

Everything else is okay, but now does it have to be a very beautiful male protagonist to write it?

Didn't you say you don't want a harem? I plan to find two in each world, and specialize in sisters.

I thought when you said no harem, you meant that Yaoyue Lianxing would always follow the protagonist.

I have no grievances against you, why do you treat me like a fool?

Ye Erniang can live, I'm convinced

The author declares that he no longer has a harem. Bye bye.

Personally I don't think it's good, it was a waste of 11 bucks for me.

How to say it! The author's description is still okay, but he can't get rid of the old routines and plots. Nowadays, the novels basically follow the plot, so it can be predicted that the results will be very average. It doesn't give people a sense of expectation, because everyone has prepared the plot, and it doesn't give people the feeling of being bright. I hope the author can try to break through the limitations of the plot and write some of his own ideas in the next book.

After going to Tianlong and without Yao Yue Lian Xing, I can't write too much about women. What about Wang Yu, Yan Mu, Wan Qing and Zhong Ling, go where you should go, don't be ambiguous with the protagonist or anything like that.

I think Yao Yue is a beauty control+yandere! 🤫If she knew that the protagonist still liked her sister, she would definitely kill them. But I quite like the heroine written by Gu Long. Please give it a try, author.

The writing is good, and the main character is very normal. He is an ordinary person who has never been in love in his previous life. Although he is handsome and shocking in this life, he does not have any disgusting actions. He is a lsp in his heart but does not want to start a harem. (It is very good. Originally, in our current society, ordinary people who have accepted the equality of men and women should have this kind of mentality when they travel and become the protagonist. They are sultry and talkative. There is nothing wrong with liking beautiful women. But Not sentimental, not the kind of disgusting character who wants to fall in love with a pretty girl. All the female characters in this book are very good, and they all leave a deep impression. It is rare to find a book that can be read. It is not easy. At present, the ones that Dian Niang is chasing are Jun Xiaoyao and the basketball three-point card, plus yours 🙂. Come on, the author, please update more and give me more spiritual food.

Eternal Peerless Twins, I gave up the book after reading the part about Peerless Twins. But I still miss it very much. If the author is not greedy for more, it might be good to only write the Yihua Palace part.

I was wondering why one chapter is so expensive

I wonder if Tie Xinlan and Wuque are together?

Dude, who knows the QQ group number?

I feel that only the part of the peerless two prides is good-looking

When I started practicing cultivation, my handwriting became a little deformed and it didn't look as good as before.

The author's detailed descriptions are spot-on and very immersive. The writing is so good that I was hooked all night long. Come on, author