Naruto: Let the Kunai Fly

I have fully subscribed and read the latest chapter. I have tried it. Next, I will give you a summary of my personal views on this book. Advantages: Relaxed and humorous, not abusive, strong, no knife. The style is also very novel, so I won't spoil it here. The time point is: the Second Ninja War. During this period, it was not very popular. I personally think it is quite good-looking. The Sannin of Konoha also became the protagonists, Matt Dai and Maruxing Kosuke. It's quite interesting. Disadvantages: The author wrote a plot around chapter 130 that I personally don't feel is very good. It makes people think it is turning into a studio novel. But the circle came back later, and it was still acceptable. But the author's biggest shortcoming: slow updates! Short! It's really annoying. If you really have nothing to read, you can give this book a try. Half-step to the peak level of food and grass.

If you understand correctly after reading the introduction, is the protagonist being penetrated? 🐶

Full order for refinement, Now I have caught up to the latest chapter, which reveals the true identity of Gaia, but I feel that the progress is too fast now, and it is a bit unreasonable that the ability as a planet is related to human emotions: You are a planet, brother! It's not a collective body of human consciousness! What does human emotion have to do with you? Only quality and energy are related, right? In addition, the protagonist has shown extraordinary power and is now one of the few people standing at the top. Has the author considered the next plot direction? I hope the author can connect the plots well and not have the situation in other novels where the protagonist is overpowered and forced to wait for Naruto to be born before awkwardly and disharmoniously squeezing in. The author wrote this book with his own flavor. He hopes that he can continue to work hard and not forcefully copy the plot and text of the original work just to make up for the plot and word count! Come on, author💪I'm optimistic about you😲

The main character who doesn't know the plot is not interesting. The author's idea of ​​letting the main character not know the plot is just to follow the plot. After all, he doesn't know anything. Let's break it up.

The settings in the back are all wrong. The power of the Star Soul is actually linked to people's emotions. You are Gaia, not Alaya. And only the earth can provide energy. The sky and the ocean are not yours to control, right? The entire Star Soul is actually stronger than Orochi. The Orochi's regional will is stronger than this.

In the latest chapter, it seems that it is more likely that the time traveler is captured by the planet and has part of his memory washed away and then released to cause trouble, or that the time traveler creates a fake clone to cause trouble. Either way, it is just a bad job.

In this case, the author knows the original plot, the readers know the original plot, but the protagonist does not know the original plot. It is thankless and the fun of derivative fan fiction is gone.

After seeing Chapter 130, send forcing the original plot? There was a lot of foreshadowing, and I thought the protagonist was going to save Kushina. Then directly study the Uzumaki bloodline, and as a result, you laid a lot of groundwork and said, it would be okay without Gaia Minato strengthening the relationship with the Jinchūriki. Either you don't do that, or you just open it... ANBU leaves two clues, and the protagonist is like an idiot thinking that people are testing you... It's funny, you have been here for seven years, and those who want to test have already finished testing. You really have to force the original plot, right? Originally, after seeing the opening like rescuing the rope tree, I expected you to save White Fang, Nohara Rin, Obito, etc. Later. After all, he was already on the line with Black Zetsu. As a result, Kushina forced her here and it was probably the same later in the original plot. She could die but could not be saved. So why do I need you as the protagonist? You yourself are the biggest variable in the plot, and you have to worry about it. Just because the protagonist doesn't know the plot doesn't mean that the author and readers don't know. Do you think it's funny to have such a mentality? The hero saving the beauty is an old cliché, but it is better than your direct and forced restoration of the plot. Moreover, the fourth generation is completely suppressed by the protagonist in this book. Why do you still force the original plot?

Short version: The good cards at the beginning are played sparsely. Content: The game started with a good foundation and got off to a good start. However, the follow-up was still about fighting in the academy, grabbing treasures on the battlefield, and finally almost converting to Konoha. The author felt uncomfortable writing about it, and started to run away. In the end, it ended up with a completely different ending. The normal development is to develop in a low-key manner, cultivate teammates, use Danzo to force teammates away, and then change accounts, let these forces leave Konoha, develop with the new civilization, new ideas, nation-state as the core, and leave a modern civilization system. Then create a body that combines the planet and Otsutsuki, and then use the contradiction between the counterattack of the old forces as the conflict point of the plot, and unfold the friction between the old will of fire that serves the landlords and rights, and the will of fire of communism. The follow-up is the group of like-minded protagonists to unify the continent and start a revolution. The follow-up is the upgrading of the whole people, the evolution of civilization, the upgrading of science and technology, the extraordinary upgrade, the gossamer plot of Otsutsuki, and then the story is completed. The author laid a good foundation in the first ten chapters, but the subsequent plot followed the author's writing, and the original plot and characters of Naruto followed the author's ideas, and the author became the one being manipulated. No wonder the comment section said that he hired a ghostwriter. To be honest, this book can be cut unless it is overhauled.

This 100% answer to kunai is too open. Dozens of shadow clones keep throwing kunai, making the opponent stay in one position. The main body keeps firing fireballs and water dragons, and even Madara is killed directly. There is no plot conflict.