Naruto: Let the Kunai Fly

Short version: The good cards at the beginning are played sparsely. Content: The game started with a good foundation and got off to a good start. However, the follow-up was still about fighting in the academy, grabbing treasures on the battlefield, and finally almost converting to Konoha. The author felt uncomfortable writing about it, and started to run away. In the end, it ended up with a completely different ending. The normal development is to develop in a low-key manner, cultivate teammates, use Danzo to force teammates away, and then change accounts, let these forces leave Konoha, develop with the new civilization, new ideas, nation-state as the core, and leave a modern civilization system. Then create a body that combines the planet and Otsutsuki, and then use the contradiction between the counterattack of the old forces as the conflict point of the plot, and unfold the friction between the old will of fire that serves the landlords and rights, and the will of fire of communism. The follow-up is the group of like-minded protagonists to unify the continent and start a revolution. The follow-up is the upgrading of the whole people, the evolution of civilization, the upgrading of science and technology, the extraordinary upgrade, the gossamer plot of Otsutsuki, and then the story is completed. The author laid a good foundation in the first ten chapters, but the subsequent plot followed the author's writing, and the original plot and characters of Naruto followed the author's ideas, and the author became the one being manipulated. No wonder the comment section said that he hired a ghostwriter. To be honest, this book can be cut unless it is overhauled.

It's not like you can't live without Konoha

In fan fiction, there is no such mindless passion here It feels like writing a book quietly, unlike some fast-paced or crazy ones, the plot is well controlled and very comfortable Come on, author

I have fully subscribed and read the latest chapter. I have tried it. Next, I will give you a summary of my personal views on this book. Advantages: Relaxed and humorous, not abusive, strong, no knife. The style is also very novel, so I won't spoil it here. The time point is: the Second Ninja War. During this period, it was not very popular. I personally think it is quite good-looking. The Sannin of Konoha also became the protagonists, Matt Dai and Maruxing Kosuke. It's quite interesting. Disadvantages: The author wrote a plot around chapter 130 that I personally don't feel is very good. It makes people think it is turning into a studio novel. But the circle came back later, and it was still acceptable. But the author's biggest shortcoming: slow updates! Short! It's really annoying. If you really have nothing to read, you can give this book a try. Half-step to the peak level of food and grass.

If you understand correctly after reading the introduction, is the protagonist being penetrated? 🐶

Full order for refinement, Now I have caught up to the latest chapter, which reveals the true identity of Gaia, but I feel that the progress is too fast now, and it is a bit unreasonable that the ability as a planet is related to human emotions: You are a planet, brother! It's not a collective body of human consciousness! What does human emotion have to do with you? Only quality and energy are related, right? In addition, the protagonist has shown extraordinary power and is now one of the few people standing at the top. Has the author considered the next plot direction? I hope the author can connect the plots well and not have the situation in other novels where the protagonist is overpowered and forced to wait for Naruto to be born before awkwardly and disharmoniously squeezing in. The author wrote this book with his own flavor. He hopes that he can continue to work hard and not forcefully copy the plot and text of the original work just to make up for the plot and word count! Come on, author💪I'm optimistic about you😲

The main character who doesn't know the plot is not interesting. The author's idea of ​​letting the main character not know the plot is just to follow the plot. After all, he doesn't know anything. Let's break it up.

The settings in the back are all wrong. The power of the Star Soul is actually linked to people's emotions. You are Gaia, not Alaya. And only the earth can provide energy. The sky and the ocean are not yours to control, right? The entire Star Soul is actually stronger than Orochi. The Orochi's regional will is stronger than this.

After seeing Chapter 130, send forcing the original plot? There was a lot of foreshadowing, and I thought the protagonist was going to save Kushina. Then directly study the Uzumaki bloodline, and as a result, you laid a lot of groundwork and said, it would be okay without Gaia Minato strengthening the relationship with the Jinchūriki. Either you don't do that, or you just open it... ANBU leaves two clues, and the protagonist is like an idiot thinking that people are testing you... It's funny, you have been here for seven years, and those who want to test have already finished testing. You really have to force the original plot, right? Originally, after seeing the opening like rescuing the rope tree, I expected you to save White Fang, Nohara Rin, Obito, etc. Later. After all, he was already on the line with Black Zetsu. As a result, Kushina forced her here and it was probably the same later in the original plot. She could die but could not be saved. So why do I need you as the protagonist? You yourself are the biggest variable in the plot, and you have to worry about it. Just because the protagonist doesn't know the plot doesn't mean that the author and readers don't know. Do you think it's funny to have such a mentality? The hero saving the beauty is an old cliché, but it is better than your direct and forced restoration of the plot. Moreover, the fourth generation is completely suppressed by the protagonist in this book. Why do you still force the original plot?

In this case, the author knows the original plot, the readers know the original plot, but the protagonist does not know the original plot. It is thankless and the fun of derivative fan fiction is gone.

In the latest chapter, it seems that it is more likely that the time traveler is captured by the planet and has part of his memory washed away and then released to cause trouble, or that the time traveler creates a fake clone to cause trouble. Either way, it is just a bad job.

I have read more than a dozen chapters, but they have nothing to do with the introduction. The protagonist is no different from a native. It's almost like a native has a system

This 100% answer to kunai is too open. Dozens of shadow clones keep throwing kunai, making the opponent stay in one position. The main body keeps firing fireballs and water dragons, and even Madara is killed directly. There is no plot conflict.

It looks disgusting. I feel aggrieved even if I assume the role of the protagonist. I might as well just leave.

I think this needs to be changed. The higher the probability of acquiring skills becomes, the higher the favorability and hatred 🙂, the greater the mood swings.

Fuck, I can't bear it! I have no problem with Kushina giving Little Sun, but you can't play with my mentality like this, right? First there is a third generation who intends to give it to the protagonist, but then the protagonist deliberately refuses to take the move and lets Little Sun cut off his beard! Do you think such a bad way of writing is really good? This is not just about persuading people to quit! This mud horse is messing with me! I don't have any problem with you having a single female lead, even Naruto and Fumi! But you can't mess with my mentality like this! Mud horse!

How can I put it, there are really many people having fun now. I often find it quite funny. In the past, when people had no food to eat, they could still raise their ideals and beliefs. Now at least I have food to eat, but I think these are ridiculous things. But, the world is spinning and rising, and things that seem ridiculous now may become clear in a few years. Maybe I won't let myself believe anything until I'm no longer full. Who knows?

I don't understand the main character's way of thinking, he looks like a loyal dog. A foreigner is neither despicable nor shameless

You can watch it before reincarnation, and answer questions after reincarnation. I stayed up late to see three points of blood loss wasting my time and money. Basically, the plot after reincarnation can be skipped, especially the life story of the protagonist. If you don't live, you have to complete the whole life. It's 7 minutes before reincarnation and 1 minute after reincarnation.

Naruto has been finished for many years, and I have watched basically all types of Naruto. There is no big problem with the author's writing of this book, it just feels too bland. The more I read, the more I want to jump to another chapter, just like eating a bowl of clear soup noodles and really want to find some shredded pork. I still prefer to quickly transition the protagonist's growth history instead of sticking to the elementary school period. I want to see a fire hero who has a strong protagonist or has the ability to stand alone and make various arrangements to become a six-level or surpass the Naruto universe. That is, I want to see a high-quality behind-the-scenes protagonist.

Writing fan fiction where the main character loses his memory and doesn't know the plot is generally cool. After all, everyone who reads fan fiction knows a rough plot. If you write the protagonist and don't know the plot, it's difficult to get into it. After all, everything is awkward and not disturbing enough. Generally, you can't last more than a few chapters.

It would be great if we could really write about letting kunai fly. The protagonist learns from the Six Paths, and then goes to major countries to fish in troubled waters and provoke wars, then ends the ninja era, and finally ends the ( ) rule and opens a new unknown era, but is counterattacked by the ( ) class in the middle and then continues decades of struggle to truly extinguish the seeds of...

I was listening to the book, and when I heard the protagonist sparring with Minato and taking out the chili noodles... The water in my mouth spurted out...

None of the donkeys in the production team dare to rest like you

To sum up, the protagonist tried his best to become a dog in Konoha, and he was very happy!

When Senju Hashirama said that I would kill anyone who dared to attack the village, even my close friends and relatives, and ended Uchiha Madara with a sword, we should all understand: that day, the first Hokage killed Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara.

It's really cool to win the title of Sannin, it's okay. There's nothing major wrong with it so far, and I'm looking forward to the next development of the story.

The writing is neither fish nor fowl, without a sense of the overall situation. I just dig holes and fill them in wherever I think of it. The performance and power of ninjutsu are completely chaotic and one-sided.

It's been fine up until now, and I'm quite happy to watch it. Then I couldn't stand it anymore. The golden finger given was too big, and the protagonist's golden finger was inconsistent with the logic of his actions, making him look stupid. It should be said that the designed plots are all designed for Goldfinger who is not that strong. So there is a huge mismatch. If Goldfinger wasn't set so big, the plot would have flowed smoothly.

Update soon! Bored, I want to see Konoha flowing with blood!