Wizard: This Witcher Is Not Doing His Job Properly

The Witcher you wrote is a very good one. Top five in my opinion. It's a pity that you are too short, and it won't work if a man is too short.

The author is really unrepentant Although I will pay attention to the data after replying in the comment area, the latest character data panel, the ability points are still wrong, I don't know if I pay attention to it. If you don't remember what you wrote, please read forward: Chapter 10's character data clearly states three ability points Chapter 33 also clearly states that destroying space nodes can obtain three ability points. 3+3=6, when the level reaches level 6, add 1 3+3+1=7. Don't just write five points in the past and then remember them as five points. You have already commented that it is wrong and still don't change it (please correct the chapter content). In short, you are speechless.

It is recommended that future readers read this book without opening this chapter! ! ! And I would like to give the author a suggestion: don't change the plot just to please a certain type of readers, just write it according to your own ideas. If you keep doing it over and over again and end up not reading either side, the popularity will only be lower. Qiafan also has skills and can discuss experiences with other authors. Come on, the writing seems to be at a good level so far. Look after you. 😡😡

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} At present, it is a decent system novel with a witcher theme. The protagonist and other characters are well shaped, with no logical flaws or poisonous points, and it is more in line with the original work and the game. 🎉 The entry point is after Trial of Green Grass, which is also a good starting point for readers who have not been exposed to the game. 🎉 Currently, Goldfinger should be based on proficiency and skill levels, which can make people clearly feel the protagonist's strength, straightforward and popular. Disadvantages: The character dialogue does not have the humorous feel of the original work, it is similar to medieval complaints... I personally always think that is the essence of witcher novels and games. 💔 Expectations: Half-elves are a slightly less contradictory point in the world of witchers than Wild Hunt. They can expand the world view very well and arrange main lines that are completely different from other races, such as uprisings... ❤ In short, I am looking forward to it! Come on! Rating: 8/10

It's good to read, but the title of the book is terrible. If I hadn't been a witcher fan, I would have clicked it and rolled my eyes and missed it Is the author really a newbie? Or a trumpet? Do you have any old works to recommend?

Let's popularize the current timeline to avoid misunderstandings by many readers. First of all, the time where the protagonist is now is 1250. At this time, all spellcasters in the north are managed by the Warlock Brotherhood. This is a powerful organization that can be traced back to the landing of humans in this world. In the past, monsters were rampant and warlocks had to rely on warlocks to survive. During this period, the status of warlocks was quite high. The warlock brotherhood was even able to directly appoint royal advisors to each king, and only sent outstanding students to serve. Every king must have a warlock as a consultant. In 1263, when Nilfgaard invaded for the first time, the north would be defeated steadily. It was the warlocks who defeated the southern army at Soden Mountain and were worshiped as heroes by the northerners, with their highest status. This also made the southerners pay attention to spellcasters and use conspiracies against them. It wasn't until the Senni Island incident a few years later that a traitor appeared in the Warlock Brotherhood, which seriously damaged the Warlock Brotherhood. The King of the North believed that the Warlock Brotherhood could not be trusted and turned to the enemy. Only then did the Warlocks' status drop sharply and collectively suppressed this group. The sorceress gathering house later was established to restore the reputation and power of the sorceresses. As for the status of non-human races and demon hunters, it is now a time of peace. Although many people discriminate against them, they are still legal citizens and protected by the law. It wasn't until the first Nilfgaard invasion, when the elves incited the elves to rebel, and allowed many elves to join the Scoia'tael, helping them create chaos in the north and attack humans. This led to all humans hating the Scoia'tael and ostracizing the non-human races. As for the demon hunters, it's just that their role in the story is not glorious, but ordinary people only dare to curse behind their backs. Those who use their lives to fight these super soldiers are just idiots in the countryside, fools incited by the eternal fire. People in the city are not so discriminatory against demon hunters, and most people have never even heard of this legend. Many readers have only played the game. At that time, it was already after the second invasion of Nilfgaard. The status of warlocks, non-human races and demon hunters had dropped a lot, and they were even hated. But in the protagonist's period, the status of these three types of people is not that miserable, and the status of the warlock is even very high and respected.

Why do you emphasize your identity as a sports student all day long? If you are a national defense student, everyone will respect you, but if you are a sports student, I will only say, have you finished settling in? When can you meet me at the top?

That special state of drug addiction that causes permanent physical damage seems pretty rubbish at first glance. Normal people wouldn't choose it, right? Isn't it still in the developmental stage? ? ?

There is a reason for the eight-fold gap 😅 between the two Witcher books of about the same period, one with a monthly subscription of more than 4,000 and the other with a monthly subscription of only more than 500. The strength of the protagonist is forced to be suppressed. The necessity to run the wizarding world is another. The recent plot is also a brain-breaking plot. The first point is that you do not have the ability to reasonably derive the plot. In order to force the choice to follow the plot, your ability is not good. There is nothing wrong with these plots. The second point is that you have to choose a wizard as your base. It doesn't matter if you have "Wizard" in your name. And the third point actually makes me wonder. The protagonist knows that the door opposite is Diablo from the beginning, and the protagonist is a modern person and knows what a bad world the Diablo world is. You can actually let him keep that door. Isn't this protagonist a pure nt? You don't think this is the so-called "foreshadowing", do you? As far as the strength of Darkness is concerned, even ten wizards combined can't beat it. The difference in strength will inevitably lead to you making restrictions on the door. What about "the powerful person behind the door can't get through, and only a part of the consciousness can get through." I can only say hell for this kind of plot.

RT, dead eunuchs, wasting my subscription money, does this count as defrauding consumers? Is there any way to cure these eunuchs?

It looked pretty good at first, but when I saw the basket I had poked out and said, "The sky is falling, there is a tall one to hold it up". Even if the kingdom is full of unscrupulous people, death is not a pity, but because my behavior caused my friend to die because of it, I still looked like it didn't matter, so I can only sweat soybeans.

The protagonist's character has always been focused on personal interests, including safeguarding the people and groups he identifies with. He has a strong personal tendency, and overall he is probably on the good side. There is nothing wrong with that. Harvesting the world of magic beans, wandering around Azeroth, and managing Middle-earth, these behaviors are all in line with the character setting. But from the perspective of the protagonist's plan, it is still based on the wizarding world and the Demon Hunter Order, traveling around the world for development. However, I knew that absorbing magic nodes would leave cracks, and I had also dealt with seals before. When I was invaded by a high-powered demon like Diablo, I suddenly said, "If the sky falls, there will be someone tall to hold it up." What kind of double-standard blame-shifting statement is this? There is no problem if you don't take the initiative to be a savior. Is this a deliberate attempt to disgust readers? The characters are all broken, okay? Everyone who sucks luck will find himself on death row. If the world invades, why don't you think of other people who suffer unreasonable disasters? Even if you hate the entire country, when you save the elves, you only kill the civilians who actively commit evil, not to mention the risk of such a global disaster. Either, describing it as too risky, insufficient, and unable to be remedied in the short term is consistent with the previous character; just being a protagonist without caring about the life and death of others can be considered an evil character; and being inconsistent at the same time. One moment, he pretends that he is not a bad person and is just selfish, and the next moment, he is shy and blames the blame. Who is disgusting with this!

😏 Occupy Yennefer, marry Triss, adopt Cilia, let all the sorceresses go, and don't miss any Shaniweiwei Alice. Well, the vineyard is a bit small, so let's take the Baroness and occupy the palace~

There should be less women. At first I laughed, but now I doubt you can write anything else.

The Lord of the Rings has not been written yet. Middle-earth has main god-level existences such as the creation gods Iru and Valar who are always watching. The Supreme Iru knew it the first moment Wayne entered Middle-earth. Such wanton destruction of Iru's established music would have been obliterated by Iru long ago. Unless Wayne's appearance made Iru interested, it was obvious that Iru's opera was destroyed by Wayne. It's still too floating. You really have to be careful when connecting to Middle-earth, the Dark World, and Warcraft. The hoarfrost in the Wizarding World is not enough to face Hell, the High Sky, and the Burning Legion. Wayne is still too floating. Mirror Master has to put his tail between his legs when he comes to these three worlds, not to mention Wayne is a strengthened demon hunter.

I'm really convinced, the eunuch was said to be a bad actor by the author

Alas, the author, you are afraid that the protagonist's combat power will collapse too quickly, so you have never given him ability points, nor used them to improve skills and upgrade expertise. Even intentionally or unintentionally diluting the system. This is all understandable. But you let him go to Azeroth too early. To be honest, if the protagonist, who is from a low-demon world, goes to Azeroth, you may not be able to defeat any elite monster, and he will die easily. This requires that in addition to being stubborn, you must learn skills to improve your abilities. But your will to suppress the protagonist's fighting power is still there, which makes people feel very depressed.

After Eunuch, the author can finally play Genshin Impact with peace of mind.

I am too lazy to update, and it will be ruined if I don't work hard enough. I will give a bad review for the next book.

Awesome, it turns out that the more trained the Source Warlock is, the worse his ability becomes. The protagonist, a Source Warlock with a little training, is overwhelmed by an untrained Source Warlock.

The writing of these chapters of Cintra is weird, giving the impression that something is going on at the same time, and the operation of the lost world at the end is completely unprepared. The most important thing is that the protagonist is obviously a trained source warlock, but he has been emphasizing the power of Pavetta who relies entirely on instinct. Although the protagonist was knocked unconscious by the last slap, the author wrote too much about it and it seemed very unpleasant.

The main line is not advancing? Piling every day

The previous part is very interesting and exciting, but it started out very interesting when other game equipment was revealed, and then suddenly I started writing the plot of The Lord of the Rings in the middle of writing, and I felt like my brain was going crazy.

If you love playing Genshin Impact so much, just go to the Genshin Impact world and bring your harem to Genshin Impact

🥱 Occasionally insert two chapters to go to another world to get equipment. I can't stand the dozens of chapters. There are more than 200 chapters. Ciri has not been born yet. The main line of the wizarding world has basically not moved. If this continues, the protagonist will be crushed to death with one finger by the time Wild Hunt comes. How can we still play...

It feels like a rare good book in the past two years A rare book that is fully booked Why did it stop?

Ah, I also wrote a witcher fanfic. Do you have any brothers who can support me and make some collections 😭

There is one biggest bug in the wizarding world. Look at whether Chinese history or Western history has not shown extraordinary people, they have been made fools by religion. I don't believe that this can't be done in the wizarding world. Wizards and magicians don't even need to unite. A sect of demon hunters establishes a religion and makes up a place similar to hell. The bad guys will be punished. Good. People can be reincarnated and can persuade others to do good. The living environment of demon hunters and warlocks feels much better. As soon as I watched the Uncle Ying series of movies, I suddenly faced the extraordinary performance. I felt that it was still a bit realistic. The Wizarding World was a bit too extreme and a bit fake. In the Western Middle Ages, religion was used to wash out fools in reality. But in the Wizarding World, if you don't believe it, it's a bit fake.

Chao Gai is a good man, everyone says so. Brother Lin Chong, since you recognize me as your brother, I will take you to the capital and kill Gao Qiu until he bleeds like a river! Fellow Taoist Zhao Ji, since you call me senior, I will give you this red umbrella white stem fleshy Ganoderma lucidum taken from the Yaochi Lake in Yunnan to make elixirs for you. Aguda, since you are willing to die to prove your ambition, then go ahead with peace of mind, your wife, I will support her! Toba Japanese King, since you kneel down and ask for surrender, why don't you surrender your country as soon as possible? Don't you know that Jun's father hasn't swallowed the meat on his lips yet and is very hungry? Haosan, I heard that you have made a fortune selling curry. The girl on her left hand has money on her right hand, and she races gods by the Ganges River. Then double the gold and silver tribute. Camel, the Kunlun slave is so brave that he dares to ask the monitor lizard to take maternity leave. You are not bad at all. You dare to rob silk and green tea. It seems that I want to teach you how to grow cotton on the Red Sea. Why don't the Western barbarians kneel down when they see the miracles of the East? A piece of knee is missing and the legs cannot be bent straight? Then cut it open, crush it, and let me take a look at it for you! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person who likes to smash people to pieces. Chao Gai was sitting on the top of Weiyang, facing the morning sun, bathing in golden light, and welcoming all nations to come to court. Suddenly, a big book that was thousands of miles long fell down overwhelmingly, and the pages were opened to reveal a line of large characters: ... "Water Margin of Destiny" occupied precious land for publicity.

Up to the point where Emhyr kills the protagonist, it was okay and worth killing time, but then it became very humorous. Emhyr lost the protagonist. How could you follow the original plot of The Witcher? I suspect that the author dug too big a hole and ran away. Later, even the plot of Ring of Magic and Darkness came, and the protagonist was not strong enough to touch the background of this world. The pits are getting bigger and bigger, and it is becoming more and more difficult to fill. There is enough for a new world. You can write so many, and you are really not afraid of trouble by writing so many. It can be said that each new world is only a small taste of the original style and charm, and it does not show its power as if it is passing by in a hurry. The power is very one-sided, and the more you look at it, the more negative reviews you get.