The Abyss of Eternity

Maybe it's because I haven't seen the back part yet (progress chapter 21). At present, the plot seems a bit messy, and I can't tell who the main characters are (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) ​ If you want to attract new audiences, the author should revise the previous ones first, right? It feels like the heat will be better this way

Overall, this is a book with great potential. The following reflects some of the problems I had while reading: 1. The protagonist seems to have too few characterizations, his personality traits are not distinct, and the sense of inclusion is a bit poor. The dialogue between the characters in the first few chapters is stiff, resulting in poor character differentiation. The situation is better in the later chapters. At the same time, he often "opens his eyes". For example, in Chapter 2, the cold feeling is directly suspected to be related to the notice or the Gaia Research Society. In Chapter 11, the girl directly said that [Angel Eyes] is a small bug just after awakening. In Chapter 27, the speculation of "What if this research itself is a trap?" Seems to have insufficient foreshadowing and details in front of it, so it is a bit abrupt. 2. The world view has not yet been fully developed. There should be contrast between the world before and after the time travel, and the protagonist should also have a short adaptation period. However, after looking at more than 20 pictures, it is still not clear. Even the "global rift" seems to be a term that suddenly appeared in the end of the volume. It is unknown when the catastrophe occurred. In just seven years, the establishment of the Supreme Heavenly Organization has matured. Obviously, the time of time travel is some time before the catastrophe, so the panic of the middle-aged man in Chapter 2 seems a bit unreasonable. At the same time, the blue light screen after time travel appears at the end of the first picture, but there is no plot at all, which is a bit confusing. 3. The time and plot progress are a bit fast. There are only 28 chapters in the first volume, but for a debut novel, it can deliver exciting battle scenes at such a pace, the plot does not collapse, and the narrative rhythm is still maintained at a good level. To sum up, I would like to express my sincere blessings for the future of this work!

Sit back and wait for the college chapter 😍

There are only some cats here. (The second picture is the cat ears with slight adjustments. The third picture is another blush version)

It feels a bit messy. There were too many things in the beginning, and now it feels a bit messy. There are too many things and it seems a bit confusing.

Interested readers can search and listen. They are: The Abyss of Eternal Realm - Destiny The Abyss of Eternal Realm - Him in the Eyes The follow-up AIGC animation is still in preparation, and the production cycle will be relatively long, so please look forward to it. Relevant preview pictures are placed in the book circle. Your support is the driving force for me to move forward.

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I feel like Cheng Xue is a bit like an NPC who has problems pushing Song Qingye forward (?), Song Qingye's first love came here, right? ꜀(^. .^꜀ )꜆੭

Silver Hair is right... But she is twenty years old and no longer a little lolita. I am so disappointed (I was originally going to make a meme but it couldn't be posted on AM. I was undoubtedly angry/crying)