Comprehensive Comic Journey of Konoha No Sky Dragon

First, a summary for new readers that is too long to read (as of Chapter 99): Advantages: The author's writing style tends to describe daily life and more sensitive and subtle emotional descriptions; the setting of this book is quite excellent and eye-catching; the setting of the article is niche but excellent, and it will be a good fan novel if it hits the airwaves Disadvantages: The content is composed of There is a certain amount of water injection in the subject matter and settings; the author's writing style is not refined enough, resulting in a slightly hollow look and feel; although the subject matter selection is interesting, it is too difficult and requires the author to work hard; the selection of settings that are too niche may be a lightning point for some readers Three-paragraph summary: Some shortcomings can be expected in the future, so you can wait and see How to put it, maybe I haven't read many comics-related novels. To be honest, my overall impression of this book is not very good (as of August 31st); first of all, there is the content issue. Compared with the author's previous book, there is less daily content, which may be a good thing, but the rhythm of the plot progression is not grasped. However, in the main line, the content progresses quickly and is empty. When fan fiction describes the content of the original work too much, it is easy to enter the dilemma of "readers who have read the original work will find it similar to the original work and feel watered-down and boring, while readers who have not read the original work will feel confused, feel that the plot span is long, the characters are empty, and they have no idea what the author wants to write." Generally, this situation would be avoided by using a large amount of original content, characters, or content that was changed from the original work due to the protagonist. However, due to the setting of the protagonist, this book has less content in the first two points and can even be said to be weak. As for the latter point, I haven't watched Naruto myself, so I won't comment. It can only be said that it is very difficult, and the future is promising Then there is the writing style. Judging from the previous book, Riko's writing style may be more inclined to softer emotional descriptions. In other aspects, to be honest, it is not outstanding. From my personal evaluation, Riko's writing style is even somewhat lacking in terms of character creation and description of mid-to-high-end battles. Choosing such a theme and setting may not be very suitable for the author's writing style in some aspects. For the author himself, this may be a long and painful learning and improvement process. I express a wait-and-see attitude towards this. I hope Lizi can realize the problem and improve himself. It can only be said that it is very difficult, and the future is promising Then as for the setting, the setting of this book is actually quite interesting. It can be seen that at least the main line of the early comic series should be Yu-Gi-Oh and Naruto. In one sentence, it is "interesting but difficult". I am not familiar with Naruto, so I won't talk about it for now. As for Yu-Gi-Oh!, Yu-Gi-Oh fandom is actually considered to be very difficult in the fandom. Note that the difficulty here does not refer to the difficulty of writing. Once the cards are played, the effects, card names, chains, and operations are put in, a few chapters of a duel are written casually. It is a very good plot with a good number of words. The update on August 19 can also be seen from a certain angle (Le (Of course, it may be that Riko clicked the wrong one and posted an extra chapter), but That's the problem. Such a duel is thousands of words long, and no one wants to read it. Instead of reading the duel you wrote, why don't I play it myself? The protagonist will definitely win anyway, and the most is a blood-locking god or a laser sword against primitive people. This problem has led to the poor performance of most Yu-Gi-Oh fans, and has also caused a large number of Yu-Gi-Oh fans to try to reduce the content of playing cards (games without playing cards). Is the king still called Yu-Gi-Oh?). It is easy to solve this problem by DIYing new cards, but this will lead to a lot of problems, such as the rationality of DIY cards, the difficulty of DIY itself, etc., So I strongly do not recommend this approach. Is there any other way? What does it mean to make this duel meaningful? What is meaningful is that every card, every chain, every blockade and breakthrough, every divine draw and comeback must conform to the character, plot, emotion and state, and even actively develop the plot rather than promote the plot. This is only done in a few books in the dedicated Yu-Gi-Oh fandom. Therefore, Riko's choice of Yu-Gi-Oh playing cards may be a sinkhole. My suggestion here is to write as little as possible and abbreviate it. , Even if you don't write direct card-playing content, you can focus on the card elves, the effects of magic and trap cards in reality, or put some monsters directly into battle in the form of "psychic beasts" and "summoned beasts". It is better to write some card-playing plots that have little meaning and are filled with content. Of course, if Li Zi is confident, she can also try to construct some card-playing plots. If it can be constructed well, the look and feel will indeed be quite good. Not bad. It can only be said that it is very difficult, and the future is promising In the setting of the chat group, another character who knows the plot or content should be regarded as a public highlight similar to "double crossing" in the eyes of many readers. The role and the protagonist rob each other of the limelight, which will make many readers who have a strong sense of substitution feel bored, and it will also be more difficult to grasp the rhythm and control the perspective. Although it is too absolute, there is some truth in it, but if you can control it, it will be a very eye-catching setting point. It can only be said that it is very difficult, and the future is promising In general, judging from the first hundred chapters, there are many problems. The overall difficulty of writing the novel may exceed Riko's own writing ability. The difficulty of controlling the subject matter is very high. Next, Riko may have to choose one. Of course, the best thing is that Riko's writing skills and writing skills will be greatly improved through this book, and she will give readers a satisfactory work. Overall, the future of this work will be a terrible situation with a high upper limit but a low lower limit. For now, I will maintain a slightly pessimistic wait-and-see attitude and will observe the future development of the work. Tentatively, I will write another book review every hundred chapters or so.

Shen Nong Post After reading a few pictures, I was originally looking forward to the Sky Dragon. Later, when I was transformed into a girl, I couldn't accept Sasuke's cross-dressing, or the ingredients were too complicated, so I couldn't accept them all together. Elements, Sky Dragon Girl Transformation, Sasuke Women's Clothing

If you don't like this style, Le Ziwen won't even be considered

The current highlight of this book is that the protagonist uses Sasuke's desire for revenge to seduce him step by step on the road of dressing up as a woman. The author's writing is not dark, and Sasuke's current psychology is getting healthier (bushi) There is a slight drawback in the early stage of physical convenience, but It was still acceptable, but later on, as the strength recovered, it temporarily took on physical form, and crushed enemies that Sasuke could not defeat along the way. Orochimaru (sorrow) Including water in the chat group, and Yu-Gi-Oh playing cards, there are many lines of follow-up development, it depends on how the author writes

It's a bit difficult to read the title of the book. I suggest that the protagonist go through the Wang Family's Sleeping Valley and press all the graves of these ninjas who repeatedly jumped in the cemetery to death.

Should Riko abort Sasuke 😍

The protagonist is a woman in this life and was a woman in her previous life. Osiris Sky Dragon is also genderless, so why bother about whether to get married?

Three Phantom Gods Group Photo

Ababa

The writing style is still the same, with no improvement 🤭

Little Sasuke

Well written but not for me

Protagonist

The main character's personality is a bit like Alicia's

The red one is definitely the sky dragon

Is the protagonist male or female marrying a lily?

You haven't updated for two days! ! !

The author has finished the first two books, but I don't really want to read this one. I have been waiting for the new book. The author usually writes protagonists who are invincible behind the scenes, but I always feel that my sexual interest has begun to change towards men. The author shouldn't be bent! ! !

Start a new book! Please🙏🙏🙏

Very good, here we come

Damn it, I just found out that I was resurrected, and I fell asleep again ヽ(#`Д´)ノ

I don't recommend reading it if you're not a poker player or a fan of Japanese comics, because you can't understand it.

This is no longer the era of Naruto~ Write a comprehensive comic and write about the recent hot topics.

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Come on

Although I don't read novels anymore, I still want to support them.