Modifying Cause and Effect Starts from Liaozhai Weirdness

This book puts Taishan Empress in the demon clan. I wonder where the author got the material from? .

After reading the latest chapter, I want to understand why the whole text gives people a dry feeling. Firstly, you lack a part of the description of the artistic conception of cultivating immortals. You are writing a spiritual novel, even if it is less, there should be some. Secondly, the character description is a bit rough and could be highlighted in detail through clothing and the like. People are complicated and your writing is too one-sided. Of course it is undeniable that this novel is still very good, but it is not perfect.

The story is very strong, each story is very exciting, and I have a strong desire to read it. The training system and background setting feel relatively weak, but it doesn't matter, the story is still important.

I just learned Taoism last night, and today I dare to slay demons. Even the Urban Dragon King has to practice for several days. He is very powerful.

Do you have to repeat the words "inside the small mirror" every time? Can't you write a title and write a new one below? This is too watery.

A little demon who is not ranked can see the cause and effect line of God Taishan on your body. I am really 6 in Japan. If you say that everyone is powerful, it is normal. After all, they are all on the same level. How can a little demon who is not ranked in the class see the cause and effect of great power? There is no need for Ye Fan in Zhe Tian to go through so many things. Why are people so embarrassed when they see the cause and effect line of the Great Emperor? When the author writes these things, please be more thoughtful.

It's very innovative, but the sword goes off the rails, and the protagonist feels like a weak character.

Don't tell me that the main character will have to waste his efforts and rebuild again later. If it were written like that, I would just run. Originally, it was uncomfortable to play in the high-level field with a low level of cultivation, and then there was no need to read it.

Have you agreed on this book with your neighbor?

Liaozhai original text Yan Chixia is invincible, she can kill anyone with one sword instantly

A magic weapon from the past? Does that mean that Goldfinger originally existed in the time and space that the protagonist traveled through?

Just delete comments and posts that are too offensive, otherwise they will easily scare away new readers.

Which is greater, the status of the scholar in Liaozhai or the status of the wandering Taoist priest?

No, how come you can play the main character in the middle? What does it mean to not have a protagonist for three consecutive chapters?

I think it looks pretty, right? Why are there so few people? Except that the front part is a little bit poisonous, the author's writing in the back becomes more and more fairy-like in my heart.