Crushing the Martial Way: Starting with Attribute Points and Cultivation

How could a complete stranger to the protagonist, parents, and sister, be killed? And knowing the Tiger Gang wanted to kill his sister, why didn't he strike first? He couldn't win, so he didn't run away, right? Just a map of one town? He can't go anywhere else. A farming family. A martial artist's daily earnings are enough to live on for ten years.

Pushing aside? Your protagonist has always been the one being pushed around by others!

Why does this author seem to enjoy writing about supporting characters' storylines for so many chapters?

The minor climaxes in those 40+ chapters were nauseating. The story of lifespan deprivation and divine retribution was written in a confusing and incomprehensible way. Do you know how many people you've discouraged from reading this?

If you can't handle the relationships between the characters well, don't write so much. In my past life, I was an undercover agent. My pregnant wife was murdered. What? Do you want to reverse time, or what? It describes how your godfather acted like a stranger to you three times because you killed without blinking an eye... How can an eight-year-old girl have so many stories to tell?

This book has been edited, right? The protagonist's father is a veteran, so he's definitely more sensitive to the stability of the country than ordinary people. Now his family is being trampled on and licked to the bone. He asks his son if he wants to learn martial arts. "Are you dreaming?" He says. And then he adds, "Learning martial arts will be very dangerous.

Seriously, what kind of plot is this? Every little thing that happens, they come to the protagonist's house. First, someone came to the protagonist for a marriage of convenience, then a foreign tribe came to trade, and they even went to the protagonist's house for the trade—as if they wanted people to know it was happening! It would be more believable if the protagonist ran into them while practicing swordsmanship, but you're just forcing everything onto the protagonist!

You can just travel directly through time. Everything in your past life is irrelevant. We are all ordinary people: screwdrivers, food delivery workers, construction workers, taxi drivers, office workers working 996, college students. We're not that high-class, nor are we that bitter and resentful.

It's ridiculous that the protagonist is almost dead just from a random Taoist priest using some evil magic. It's laughable. Then a Taoist priest comes along and tries to kill the protagonist, and he dies from a single evil spell. What's the point of cultivation then?

If divine retribution were that simple, the emperor's entire family would have been wiped out long ago.