Douluo's Bones Dragon

Is the protagonist really used to being treated like a dog? You tell others all the good things, and after only knowing each other for a few days, you hand over all-round methods to improve your physical fitness, including the secret control of distractions taught by the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. What on earth are you writing about, author?

I wanted to check out the settings at first, but I was persuaded to back out when I saw that the function of whale gum was mentioned casually. I'm afraid I'm not a fool. This kind of secret is kept secret even in the sect, so I told some people from the big families and taught them how to use it. You don't have to do this if you want to cause trouble. Do you think people from the Qibao Glazed Sect are not worthy of using it? Or do you mean that people from other sects are more reliable than yourself? I still feel that the people in Wuhun Palace are all fools, and I can't find any information about it. I feel that the enemies are not strong enough yet and I need to strengthen the enemies. Dissuaded, persuaded to retreat

I originally thought that Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong and the like in the original work were already strong enough and had their elbows turned outwards, but I didn't expect that fan fiction could be even more outrageous. As expected, everything can be encountered in Douluo Continent.

Giving Qin Ming whale glue and then telling Yu Xiaogang and the others about it later was purely an act of swindling the enemy.

In the original work, Ning Rongrong taught Tang Sansan mind control for the purpose of trading hidden weapons. You, the protagonist, taught the secrets of the sect to others without any benefit. You will die when you think that Ning is the leader of the sect.

To be honest, you can't even stand this introduction.

Is this how the secret of whale gum was revealed? There is no mention of the level of physical training, only in terms of intensity. You can fight at any level without using soul power. If you can't beat the great soul master without using soul power, then it's all in vain. You don't think that physical training is just a simple running, just add some weights😬 Physical training, the first party It should be speed, lightness of body, body control, second explosive power, third strength, and physical strength. You haven't written anything down, even using rubbish soul skills and soul power and not practicing soul attack skills. You have the nerve to say that you are a time traveler, but you are nothing.

With such a good background, there is no need to lower your level. You have also absorbed soul rings for 100,000 years. You can just make him a 15-year-old Soul Emperor. As for the crappy competition in the original book, there is no need to participate in it yourself. Apart from pretending, it's useless. Can't you really just cultivate a few soul kings for the sake of soul bones and let them fight on your behalf? 🤫

The protagonist is nicknamed the Wealth-Giving Boy, but others have been poisoned and died.

The protagonist is getting more disgusting than Tang San now...

Interestingly, I guess it is like this. Master Yu Xiaogang discovered that whale sharks can improve physical fitness and absorb soul rings beyond levels, benefiting soul masters across the continent. No matter what you say, I will watch you.

It's so poisonous, and the main character is simply a good person. Tell others any cultivation secrets

Free is the most expensive. I agree. The author must not put it on the shelves and keep updating for free.

🙂 With this introduction, I almost read the entire book.

Why are you always thinking about your whale glue? It's really embarrassing to get this thing as a gift when you confess your love.

It's too bland and doesn't seem to have any feeling at all. When you win over other people, shouldn't you be giving some benefits after being together for a while and getting to know each other really well? You gave away your distraction control within two days of knowing each other? Moreover, it is inexplicable that the relationship between the protagonist and the female character is so good. In the chapter about the immortal ancient dragon, the relationship between Ye and Ye suddenly got better. I just scratched my head. Isn't it just a team? Why do they act like a lifesaver? Do I still need to thank them?

It's a bit outrageous. The three level 89 Soul Douluo of the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Sect is really outrageous. If this is the case, can the four titled Douluo in the Soul Hunting Operation defeat the Sword Bones amplified by the Seven Treasure Glazed Tile Pagoda plus three peak Soul Douluo? Fan fiction can include original characters but don't make it too outrageous. The backstage of Tianshui Academy is also outrageous. If there was one, it would have to be destroyed by the backstage of Wuhun Palace. How could it be passed down to ten thousand years later?

This book should not directly adopt the slave clan. After reading the original work, you will know how devoted Tai Tan is to Tang Hao. Unless Titan was beaten to death at home on a dark and stormy night. Then the right to speak in the clan was controlled by the branch. Only in this way can there be drama. The other three tribes are fine. Especially the Po clan and the Yu clan🔨🔨

After reading more than 20 chapters, I always felt that it was mediocre. I was still wondering at first. The subject matter should be similar to Lingzhu Divine Sword, so it shouldn't be boring. But after flipping through the table of contents, I found out the reason: the author's writing ability is good. Yes, but the priority is not clear and the logic is not strong. The purpose of reading fan fiction is to see the awakening of the martial soul, the upgrade and fight, the acquisition of soul rings, and the slap in the face of the protagonist group. The second is the power struggle, and the last is love. But you have reversed the priority. Let's talk about awakening the martial soul, upgrading and fighting, and obtaining soul rings. Earlier, you skipped the time of awakening the martial soul and obtaining the first two soul rings. Then you should at least spend more time explaining the protagonist's martial soul compared to his grandfather Gu Rong's martial soul. What are the advantages? (Otherwise, just by inheriting the ancient dragon martial spirit, no matter how much the protagonist practices and adds a good soul ring, he will only be a little more powerful than the ancient banyan. If he can stand up to the sky, he can reach the ultimate Douluo. Although you can get a dragon king inheritance later, the original work will be a few chapters later. There is indeed a part, but it seems far-fetched to me. You have to understand that you are writing fan fiction. You wrote that the protagonist's luck is better than that of Tang San, so why do you still want to steal Tang San's chance?); As for the protagonist's soul ring, the first three souls The rings (I only read the first few) are all very perfunctory. The first spirit ring didn't mention any soul beasts that exploded. The second one just used the formula of the Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear. The third one used the one his grandfather used before😤😤. Come on, this guy is the protagonist! It's someone who has read the script! If you don't have any special choice or explanation for your soul ring, why do you look down on Yu Xiaogang! Then, in terms of power struggles, if you can write about the vertical and horizontal fights between sects, that will be a good bonus. If you can't write, then you can just follow the original plot. Finally, let's talk about romance. You spent a lot of space and a lot of pen and ink on this point, which is putting the cart before the horse. Moreover, some characters who should not have deep contact with each other in the early stage (I'm talking about Xue Qinghe, he usually stays in the palace, occasionally goes to Ning Fengzhi, and meets the protagonist a few times at most), but you just spent a lot of pen and ink to forcefully explain it, get them together, and make them look very familiar. How? You can't have a harem without getting it together, right? Since you now want to make the protagonist and Qian Renxue very familiar, why did you omit the previous plot? Now it's very far-fetched, and the relationship between the characters has no logic at all. Rubbish!

When the protagonist shared the method with his teammates earlier, he had a feeling of "becoming a god or a benevolent person". It can be said to be the arrogance or self-confidence of the time traveler. After all, if you don't become a god, you won't be able to save most of your things, so it doesn't matter, and it doesn't matter if you become a god.