Manors and Lords

I feel like this drought is too big and I can't handle it.

After returning home once, the book was full of descriptions of how Joey did it, what he did, and what Joey planned to do. There is such strong physical strength and strength, but there is no description of how much he ate, and there is no description of meat at all. We know that the protagonist has stocks, but we don't know how much. Some intellectual errors are understandable, but there are too many bugs. The protagonist has almost achieved something extraordinary. He is 4 meters tall, and one person can carry a piece of pure solid wood that has just been cut down and carry it directly on the roadless mountainous area. I know the author wants to have fun and save trouble, but if you look at the books you have written, they are all documentary novels. It's okay for the protagonist to have a golden finger, but it must comply with basic logic. From spring plowing to summer for three months, there is not much oil and water in heavy physical labor. From an ordinary person who is not very strong, he will soon become Dwayne Johnson. Time is too short. As long as you don't care about these points, the book is really a great book. The author has a promising future!

Manure and plant ash should not be mixed as it will reduce fertility. You can collect compost from branches and leaves and collect plant ash by burning wasteland. Plant seeds can basically squeeze out oil, but the oil content may vary. In the early days, the protagonist's family was considered to be middle peasants, and the two boys would not be allowed to live alone to open up wasteland. The number of people and animals in the protagonist's family would not be enough. It might be better if the setting is that the refugee brothers gather together outside the village

Author, take a good look at what you have written recently. Compare the Robinson-style farming novels at the beginning to the medieval hegemony anecdotes. What you wrote is completely wrong. Last month, there were more than 700 monthly votes. Halfway through this month, it is less than 200. Have you ever reflected on it? Readers are all smart, and readers are connected to you. You treat readers as fools.        ，，，，，，，？

It is said that it is really difficult for ordinary people to stay in the forest. The mosquitoes alone are unbearable, especially in summer. A bag for a few minutes is not a problem. I have experienced camping without any equipment and it was so annoying that I couldn't sleep at night.

In rural areas, raising pigs is a very common way of life, and pig feed is also a matter of great concern to rural pig farmers. Some people believe that human feces can be used as pig feed, so in the process of raising pigs, they feed human feces to pigs. But in fact, pigs are naturally omnivorous and are very good at finding various foods. Human feces contains a large amount of microbial residues and germs. Once eaten by pigs, it can easily cause gastrointestinal diseases or even poisoning. Therefore, it is not recommended to feed human feces as pig feed. Can the author have some common sense? He always writes about feeding pigs with human feces.

It's so rare to see such a practical book at Qidian, thank you.

Is this kind of primitive farming society really reducing the burden on the original large family by spreading out such a large and strong labor force? And you have a younger brother who can do the job right away? And the protagonist is such an awesome person with a golden finger, so the protagonist has traveled through this year and done nothing? Just eat? So his father agreed to separate him, fearing that he would starve to death, and gave him to a younger brother who was basically able to work and two helpers. Generally, poor big families live together because they have more labor so they can do more work together and bring food The protagonist can use traps to catch wild boars, and what the protagonist is doing now can be done together if he lives with the big family, and can even get some logistical support from his sisters. There is no need to go so far to the mountains? It's not like you have irreconcilable conflicts with your original family. If you want to separate, you can live nearby? Now I feel that the protagonist is capable, has become familiar with the world, and plans to leave the original family behind and plan to do it on his own.

There is no extraordinary Middle Ages. If you are not a noble class, you can only eat dirt and build your own territory? To be killed as a pig?

I read the first chapter and then quit to read the comments. Something was wrong. Because it was so difficult to write in the early stage. If you continue to develop logically, with good luck, you can develop into a small village chief in ten or twenty years. Any knight can overwhelm this village. Killing the protagonist is boring. Then I saw your comment and reply saying that you fucked the world. Please, you didn't fuck anything.

I hope there will be more updates for books of the same type as "Mountain Kingdom" (ಡωಡ). You know, because this kind of slow popularity and few updates make the plot seem draggy.

I put it on the bookshelf and took a look. It was full of typos. It looked so annoying. After I finished writing, didn't I know to read it first?

Why not change the name of the work to Jim Layton? The protagonist disappears for dozens of chapters. Author, you really dare. I saw that there was no protagonist at the beginning and I jumped right away. Still want to subscribe?

Your drought is too serious. I don't understand how you want to solve it. If it's too far-fetched, this book will collapse.

The author is directly describing the most simplified version of jungle survival. You don't write about snakes, insects, rats, and ants. These things are the most terrifying things in the jungle. In an era that is not industrialized, if you take a bite, you will face death, disease, and disability.

Not to mention how crazy the snakes, insects, rats, and ants in the virgin forest are, even if you go to stay in the forest in the nearby countryside for one night, you will definitely be bitten by mosquitoes, let alone the primitive jungle? In the early years, my friends and I went to those mountains to look for medicinal materials. There were weeds, jungles, or vines everywhere. The mosquitoes and bugs there seemed to be crazy. Also, you should always be careful of venomous snakes. Some highly venomous snakes will not move even if someone approaches, and will bite you immediately when you pass by. It is so easy to clear the virgin forest. Not to mention ancient times, it was in the 1950s that the virgin forest was cleared. I heard that it was done by burning fire. The same was true in the Great Northern Wilderness back then. The picture below is a jungle, there is no road for you to walk.

How can I describe these pictures? They challenged the system at that time. The protagonist firstly did not have much military strength. Secondly, he did not have much mass base. Thirdly, food could not be said to realize his vision at all. Fourthly, he challenged the whole country with one county (baron territory). As long as the benefited class at that time knew. I don't believe that the protagonist's aura can cover the entire map of Gaia. So now it feels a bit like a big sky to me. I will see if I want to subscribe to the rest.

The protagonist is carrying several tons of wood on his back on a mountain road. There are no details at all. It is difficult to write about things that he does not understand in one stroke. There are all kinds of common sense mistakes. He is said to be a lord, but it is all the protagonist's fault. There is no leadership at all. In the first 20 chapters, there is a process for doing something. Later, as long as you want to do it, prepare, and finish it. What kind of farming article do you write like this? It's a pity that it has such a beginning and setting.

The hegemony collapsed at the beginning. The ratio of military to civilians was completely out of balance. Looking at the pig's feet that were conquering here and there, tens of millions of people and efficient tax collection bureaucrats simply couldn't sustain it.

Poisonous insects, venomous snakes, mosquitoes and beasts, and in the tropics there are also malaria, miasma, drought, and locust parasites. It's scary to think about it. Without medical knowledge, you are looking for death in the forest.

I farmed well and ran to compete for hegemony, but I was so forceful that it was so disgusting that I was wasting my money. I'm looking for a book, like the kind I used to farm, thank you.

The writing in the later period is like Baidu Encyclopedia. The development in the middle period is too fast and completely unreasonable, especially when you become a lord and manage the territory, you start writing nonsense. Agriculture, textiles, and metal processing should be emphasized to expand trade. It can be seen that the author knows nothing about military, sociology and finance. Try to write as little as possible, and don't write details if you want to. It would be too embarrassing.

Either the author didn't use AI to write it, or he used to be a copywriter. This novel is written like a documentary narration.

Medieval Times: I build a manor in the mountains

When I saw the headmaster and the two bars, I really wanted to vomit. The rhythm was wrong. The development was slow in the front, but it went from 300 to 3,000 people in the back. The writing was not good, it felt like it was written by a student!

Come on, author! I recommend the new book "Bian Xia", which is based on the history of the late Northern Song Dynasty. Zhao Zhen, a later generation, traveled to the Jingkang year of the Northern Song Dynasty, and his soul passed through Zhao Zhen, the eighteenth son of Emperor Huizong of Song Dynasty. ! !

There is no highlight at the beginning. Did you copy it from Baidu Encyclopedia?

Author, just stick to this level slowly and slowly, and when it's about 2 million words complete, it will definitely become a popular history book.

Well, the cost of rattan armor is not that low, and it is not easy to repair. I have tried braiding rattan armor. If a hole is poked by a gun, it will fall apart easily. Generally speaking, it is not cost-effective.

The author's other book was okay before chapter 17, but what was written after chapter 17? Not to mention the Taoist knowledge that the protagonist brought out. It can be regarded as Kagome brought it from modern times, but the following chapters 189 and 19 are not coherent at all.