I, the Little Fire Dragon, Am Roaming the Heavens

It's better not to write the attributes. This is an infinite flow. Can you give me an ABC for the attributes? This cannot be quantified at all. Otherwise, how many emperors would there be? How many saints are there?

After reading Chapter 20, it feels a bit cliche to be honest. Judging from the title, what I want to see is the collision between Pokémon skills and different systems. As a result, the protagonist can really become a ninja beast by wearing Naruto? I only know how to use chakra... Let's not talk about those who can't learn it. Charmander, is it difficult for you to learn some debuffs such as screams? These still don't count move machines and genetics

Good guy, if you are a woman, you have to sign a contract. Although I understand as a man, I really can't get excited if you do this. I thought you were going to write about a hot-blooded plot and battle flow, until I saw the hint of a harem. What can I say, I personally don't like it very much.

Why does the protagonist go to Naruto World? A Charmander goes to Ninja Academy? What to study there? Apart from the Will of Fire and basic disciplines, the only ninjutsu the Ninja Academy can teach seems to be chakra extraction and three-body jutsu, so why is the protagonist running away? Didn't you say you want to become stronger in the Naruto world? I went to collect the so-called amazing points, but I didn't see the protagonist using these things to add points. Zhutianliu mainly focused on the collision of diversity. After you became Hokage, some of the special skills of Pokémon have not been used.

Author, your protagonist's name is the talking monkey🐒?

Charmander, this Charmander seems to know only Ninjutsu...

I don't know why the protagonist wants to go into Naruto's world. Is it just because you want a master to be a girl? Do you have to play like this? I don't see the need to travel to Naruto's world at all.

Charizard is so handsome

The elf world is so safe and cannot develop well, so we have to travel to other worlds.

I don't understand why you are going to Hokage. Hokage is not very friendly to beasts and you don't have a backstage.

The protagonist doesn't seem to have a systematic development at the speed of light. It feels like the author is looking for Naruto to write it. ()

You might as well just write about yourself. What the hell did you write about Pokémon?

Can this book have a different cover? Feel so ugly

Is there something wrong with the protagonist in this article, the author? Isn't he in the body of an animal? Why do you write so much that it feels like you are turning into a human body and fighting? It's so uncomfortable to read!

I think this book looks very strange. It looks like a human with the skill of Charmander. Forget it about Naruto. Death feels that the logic of the writing is a bit unreasonable. You don't need to transform, because you are a human who time-traveled into Charmander. According to logic, your essence is your soul, and you should be a human. No need to change. And if it changes, why won't those big guys notice? Moreover, Xu should have a reaction when he enters the world of the God of Death. Why is there no reaction at all? Logically, it feels a bit strange, and I personally can't accept it.

Why did you stop updating? You stopped updating just after it was released.

Personally, I feel that the God of Death is not very good, so I should go there as soon as possible.

There are good and bad reviews, and the instructions are pretty good Only good reviews, the book is absolutely ugly and extremely toxic Only bad reviews, run away My comments have been deleted and permanently banned all year round

Question: Why don't you write anymore? Answer: It's normal to be criticized when writing a book. The author has mood swings but he persists. He is afraid that he will suddenly realize that some of the core content of the book that readers said is right after reading the comments. The author later figured out how to make the book better, and then he felt very uncomfortable because the tone was set at the beginning and could not be changed... Q: What is the reason for the suspension of updates on the shelves? Answer: The author spent hundreds of hours writing this book, and each chapter basically took at least an hour to write. The author wanted to write something different, and I believe everyone can see some novel designs when reading this book. For this reason, it is too painful to realize that this book can actually be better but cannot be changed. I want to sort out my thoughts and see if I can write better in the future. I wrote that on the one hand, listing it on the shelves is to give myself an explanation, and on the other hand, it is also to allow book friends who invest to get a return. For example, a book friend downstairs earned some starting coins. To be honest, the author is more heartbroken and uncomfortable than the readers when the book stops. All the previous free chapters also have the author's hard work. It's a pity that it's about to be profitable, but I really can't stand it and keep writing it when the book can be better. Now the author is reading a lot. Recently, he is reading "The Grand Chess Game" by Brzezinski. He wants to improve his personal ideological realm and strive to write more powerful and smooth works in the future.

The so-called protagonist is just taking off a piece of Charmander's skin and putting it on himself.

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