With All the Skills from the Underworld, Do You Think the Martial Spirit Is Too Weak?

There are not many people now, so I suggest you change the introduction. Who is good? Look at the Six Martial Spirits. Your Martial Spirit has six forms. The different skills of each form are a great way to open up your imagination. Aren't the Six Martial Spirits just pure poison?

How should I put it? It's understandable that the main character's child's behavior is childish, but the operation of the soul calling mom was okay in the past. There would have been many such things, but now this is a very discouraging point, and how many fandoms are there in Douluo now? There have been too many written about the harem heroine, especially Zhu Zhuqing. I hope the author will take it easy and ask one last question? Who has this heroine chosen? Or who(s)?

The characters are so dark, why doesn't the ten-thousand-year-old soul beast have a brain?

The second half of the introduction is more attractive, and the conspiracy theory is okay. It's not too insulting to the IQ. The rest of it is not that good. It's very hard to pretend to be young just after pretending to be old. If you don't have a harem, take advantage or not, it's not interesting to write so badly. How can you make Tang San alive? But you have dozens of chapters and you are still playing house. You have laid the foundation for the conspiracy theory in vain. Wasn't the introduction written in vain? Where is the underworld? Why don't you go read Xixi Dog's underworld novel? It just opened a new feature called "Don't expel me", it seems to be called this, "Look how people manage to live in the underworld, otherwise it won't be worthy of your profile and conspiracy theory. Also, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't force it. Not everyone can master the traffic password!" It's as if someone else had written it. The writing style of the conspiracy is completely out of touch with the emotional scum. The character is not a defense, it's just distorted.