Warhammer: Soul Coin

Overall, it feels like a very good Warhammer fanfic. The eternal chess game between the Golden Big Guy and the Four Chaos Vendors has begun a new chapter, but there are also some poisonous points. First of all, the Chaos forces are currently weak and need to be strengthened (the Emperor's Chosen has arrived, and the Chaos Gods should also create a monkey version of Abaddon or Archaon. However, it can also be explained that the power of Chaos has not yet reacted to the newly opened map). Secondly, the part about the leader of the Cursed Legion is really awkward or not hammer-like. This is really not like the style of the Golden Big Guy. To make a third-rate game system to attract new people? (A smell of Tzeentch) And why is it that the leader of the Cursed Legion comes to greet him and introduces the soul currency like an NPC in a third-rate game? Shouldn't a saint or a living saint give a speech with a strong religious meaning? Shouldn't the protagonist pull into the empire's car? (Furthermore, the official settings of the Cursed Legion are all guesswork, and there are several imprecise ways to add drama to it.) Personally, I feel that Old Man Huang will only make deals with you and will not play games with you. If you write like this, it will only make you look bad. Please correct me if there is anything wrong with my new hammer.

Just reading the introduction, you can tell that the author has very limited knowledge of Warhammer 40k! Let's be clear, when you enter the world of 40k, without the comprehensive strength of the original body, you are just a cannon fodder. Sometimes even the original body is a big cannon fodder! You are not qualified to jump on the chessboard (if you don't have tens of thousands of Space Marines and tens of millions of Astra Militarum to command) Without the strength of the Star God, you can't even think about jumping in front of the four evil gods. You also have to remember to avoid the Necrons, they are professional in beating the Star God! Do you know how powerful Star God is? It's equivalent to the perfectly liberated King Frieza in Dragon Ball! In addition, it also enables a part-time role in technology and physical level creator! This kind of strength can be used as the final boss or the creator god in many fantasy worlds, but it can only barely touch the upper limit of chess pieces in the 4Ok world. The prerequisite is that you have hundreds of colonial star sites and thousands of space main fleets!

It's so funny, it seems like the only enemy of the Empire in the Warhammer 40k galaxy is Chaos. What about the traditional enemy greenskins? Where are the awakened ancient overlords, the Necron? What about the new public enemy of the galaxy, the Tyranids? Is it true that Yun does not exist?

I am also a novice author. What supports the author to persevere in creation when there is no profit? It's so scary 😭

After reading Chapter 14, I really can't stand it anymore. I don't recommend it to Hammer Guy. There are so many poisonous points. First of all, the protagonist is an ordinary person. How dare he look at the emperor's face? The emperor calmly communicated with him so much. You know, the thirteenth brother even said a few words to his father, and he was tortured to death. Secondly, the exchange rate is hard to describe. A chain sword can kill 4 cultists, and a set of power armor can kill 1,000 cultists. Tsk, and the basic setting of this game is to steal souls. I don't know where to start. Is it necessary for the emperor to steal these contaminated souls? How many souls of those loyal Astra Militarum have been taken away by daemons? Is it wrong for the Emperor not to seize these to rob the cultists? Moreover, in order to weaken the power of the Four Gods, it would be better for the Emperor to strike him with a knife. It would take much more. I'm also looking at the leader of the Cursed Legion in the warehouse. Headless Senior, isn't this too leisurely?

Can the author share his creative ideas? Why is it that the Ultramarines team is not as professional as the psykers and they don't speak well? Apart from the large number of people, they also have high discipline. A group of Muggle Space Marines are really not suitable for dealing with the demonic invasion. If you want to write about the Cursed Legion, then write about the Cursed Legion, why should you say Ultramarines? The attack of the Cursed Legion can effectively kill demons. However, ordinary Muggle space warriors can banish demons back to subspace at most. If you want to write a portal, why not teleport a team of Gray Knights who are professional and competent? You can write "Brother Drag is Coming". It is not at all obtrusive. But if you write a team of Ultramarines without a think tank, it feels very abrupt and difficult. The Demon Invasion God's Chosen almost makes the demons incomprehensible.

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