Concept Game Brawl Question and Answer Inventory Integration

I can't stand this punctuation mark until I finish one chapter.

The paragraphs are confusing, punctuation marks are used indiscriminately, and the reading is not smooth at all

The writing is really average. I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. There are also dialogues with no punctuation. It's really uncomfortable to read. Moreover, the writing of this ranked combat power is not good. It's too uncomfortable.

Chapter 63 is blocked...

Another chapter has been blocked. Forget it, I won't write this novel for now... I'll talk about it later.

The third idea, the duel between black and black, I will not do it for now. I feel that my personal ability is limited. It was originally planned to be a total of five parties. Each side is a 1,000-person Death Flame stand-in for the eight demons. The DC Marvel war is really difficult to write. You can even find off-site assistance. After all, black and white, but I personally feel that I can't do such a grand scene... So the third idea should be "the strongest". Please stay tuned. I will do my best to write this novel as best and most logically!

(I don't know Eunuch, so it will be one chapter a day, and a new book will be updated tomorrow) I regret to tell you that, well, there should not be many people, and the first signing of this book failed. After all, the beginning of this book is really bad, and many book friends will not read the end, but I don't want this book, Eunuch. I have really thought about this idea for a long time, and I also feel that The inventory article should not have a specific protagonist and some other thoughts such as the combat power of each person, what each person will exchange for, etc., But few people actually read it, and most of the comments think it is very bad, but I still won't give up. Even if I only write it for myself, even if I can't sign a contract, I will continue to write this book!

There are many people who use thunder and lightning. I wonder which ones the author wants to write about? Laxus, Misaka Mikoto, Wu Genji's Sun Chaser...

Chapters 1 and 2 are really bad. I had just returned to writing books at that time, and I was either looking for excuses or poor quality. I also hope that book friends can read more of the later chapters. Personally, I still feel that the more I write, the better. Of course, it may be an illusion...