My Son-In-Law Is Cultivating Immortality, and My Wife Begs Me to Return Home.

Mutual......................

There is not much nonsense. Anyone who is unfavorable to the pig's feet will be given to him. This is a refreshing article, rather than a general idea of ​​marrying wives, concubines, having children and cultivating immortality. He doesn't talk much and has a very clear mind. In order to avoid future troubles, he sent his brothers to the west neatly as soon as he made a move. The male protagonist Shuang Wenliu's work has a relatively complete world view, and the main and supporting characters have distinct personalities. Although the emotional line is hazy, the emotional conception of "the right person at the wrong time" is well created, and it makes people look forward to the male protagonist being able to have a good relationship with his wife after his ascension. The layout is magnificent, the writing skills are good, the whole plot is full of visuals, and it progresses layer by layer, like a level-breaking game, and the rewards are like drawing blind boxes. The process is endlessly exciting, and the more you watch it, the more addictive it becomes!

For those who like to read system texts, it's too late for you to release the system after seven chapters. For those who don't like to read system texts, you're just trying to trick people into killing them, right?

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If you know what the other person is thinking, what else do you write?

The writing is quite good, but Chapter 64 should not let the system give multiple choice questions. Even if there are only these two choices, the system cannot point them out. The system is just an auxiliary tool to improve strength, and the protagonist is the puppet of the system.

"An old man who traveled back in time picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Nod to see directly] A director graduate from his previous life, accidentally traveled back in time and became an old man who picked up rags. He worked hard in variety shows, worked professionally, begged live, made horror videos to scare people, ate takeaways from Overlord's meals, and made bad movies to earn disgust points to continue his life. Kill decisively in order to survive Later, he traveled through infinite planes and experienced adventures, collected them into movie materials, and returned to reality on the big screen. The audience was scared crazy.

The writing pace is too fast, there is no flavor, there are no emotional scenes, the cultivation level is improved instantly, it is boring to watch.

The levels are too confusing, some are cultivating immortals, and some are soul warriors. Look at the level of writing in that divine novel. Just looking at the levels takes a lot of time. I wonder if you are tired of writing them like this?