Blue Dragon Thunder Empire

Come on, I have seen more than 30 chapters so far and they are all very good, especially the depiction of dragons. It's rare to find a good dragon novel, I hope the author can stick to it. In my humble opinion, the only flaw is that the dirty words in the first few paragraphs about the protagonist's psychological activities at the beginning of the first chapter are a bit dissuasive and very inconsistent. Although the protagonist's random thoughts when he is unconscious are well written, it seems very strange and confusing as the beginning. Skipping those two paragraphs instantly improves the perception, including the protagonist's thoughts about the dragon camp and the future, which are very natural. Above.

Chapter 147

Will the young dragon take a family member? Too early

520,000 Words, amazing perseverance.

This is probably a book set based on the endings of "Emperor Dragon" and "The Dragon Who Controls Time". This era background and the setting of the relationship between the metal dragon and the five-color dragon are eye-catching. But this setting also determines that the early stage is too safe and bland. In addition, the writing style is a bit bland (just a lot of simple dialogue descriptions, and then it is written only from the perspective of the two protagonists, with a single vision. It lacks some descriptions of the nature of the scenes), and it looks a bit like a running account, like a diary. I feel like this can be improved, and I hope it will be adopted.

Double wear? Or wear it with your girlfriend?

The author writes well, come on! A little

Does the author have a group? If you don't have a group, can I create one?