All Heavens: Starting from the Holy Son of Butian Sect

Will you get closer to Jiang Hengyu's LSP character? Don't ask why, he can refine equipment like the Goddess Furnace

Has Goddess Stove been released? Why are there only two female protagonists? Do you understand the value of I Have a Friend?

After reading the introduction, I have no desire to read on. Does the author know what Taoism is? Even if there is a Taoism between brothers, it will end in a life-and-death struggle. That is a denial of your Tao. There is a Taoism between Jietian and Butian, and there is never the possibility of unity.

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. The author's thinking and logic are also strange. Combat power is only combat power and has nothing to do with anything else? ? So the protagonist of this book is just an ordinary person with fighting power?

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I don't know what I'm writing, but it looks boring.

To be honest, this book is really bland, and the writing on enlightenment and combat is not very good. The protagonist's personality is a bit uncomfortable and not suitable for cultivating immortals. I feel that it is suitable for urban daily novels, and there is no decisiveness or strong heart. Except for a little pre-travel talent and plot control, there is nothing interesting. In the end, it felt like the author didn't know enough about the original work. 😅😅😅

There are so many that write perfect fan fiction, but there are very few that are not disturbing to read. . They all say not to steal Shi Hao's wife, and I agree with this. There are so many female supporting characters in the perfect world, and even Tianxian Academy has a list of top ten beauties. I am speechless if I have to fight Shi Hao for my wife. There are also some people who always talk about robbing Liu Shen and being ruthless. It's really fucking speechless. Some people are not in the same era. I don't know what's going on in my head. Can Liu Shen be snatched by a weakling? Everyone is offering sacrifices to the ancestors of the Immortal King.

I feel that there is a problem with the author's writing. Is the perfect Supreme too strong? I feel that the strongest among them is the Heaven-shading Tianzun level. How can they touch the porcelain true immortal? Even the residual immortals may only have Wang Changsheng and Meng Tianzheng who have touched the Heavenly Emperor level combat power. They can barely compete with the true immortals with a handful of immortal weapons.

The fantasy novel has the feel of an urban daily novel

Yue Chan

The protagonist is too indecisive and has no clear goals for anything he does. He just comes up with his ideas and doesn't plan them. This is not because he is afraid of trouble, but because he thinks there is less trouble and it is not a big deal.

Author, what you wrote is so boring. I really have no desire to read it. Do something boring. For example, in Perfect Fear of Shi Hao, the protagonist must have higher achievements than him, otherwise the protagonist would be exposed to these things.

It's not bad, but it always feels awkward to look at, and it doesn't have that kind of charming charm. The author compares the descriptions of Perfection and Zhetianzhong to know that whether it is appearance, training or fighting, he is not as strong as Chen Dong.

Also, there is a Hammer Temple in the Wilderness, and I even ran into it when it was ruined. Did you write about Liao Zhai Xia Xia before? Haven't you come to your senses yet?

I'm speechless. It's understandable that Kunpengfa said no. The protagonist said that he didn't even want to give up the complete grass-character sword technique because it would be troublesome. After all, he didn't even want the inheritance of the Immortal King of Six Paths of Reincarnation because he was afraid of trouble! To the back! Are you still thinking that it would be troublesome to accept the Golden Crow Goddess as a maid? ! There is a butcher's karma! Isn't this troublesome?

I laughed, I must have failed at writing. If you don't listen to the advice of experts, you will suffer the consequences in front of you.

The protagonist is always struggling with the butterfly effect. He doesn't even try to take advantage of some of the benefits. It's too alienating.

He couldn't distinguish the priorities and gave Shi Hao ruthless benefits.

I finally know why I haven't read this perfect fanfic, because when I was looking for a book before, the first chapter of the Lord got lost and I was put off...

Add some finesse

The author didn't even understand the original work, so he just wrote it as a fanfic, mixed with all kinds of private stuff. The trilogy is the entire world view, and it was written by you into the world. The universe is not even a speck of dust in front of the trilogy's worldview. The universe is just a small part of a big world, and the big world is just a grain of sand in the world, and the fairyland is only the strongest interface in the world. Then the superior of all the heavens and worlds is God, and then there is the Sea of ​​Sacrifice. Each wave in the Sea of ​​Sacrifice represents a piece of the heavens and all the worlds. There is also the Sea of ​​Time above the Sea of ​​Sacrifice, and the Sea of ​​Sacrifice is just a grain of sand in front of the Sea of ​​Time.

There's no dialogue, it's like telling a story

What's the protagonist's mentality? He doesn't look like he's practicing cultivation at all, he's just like a little kid

Let me ask you, who is willing to watch someone who has said he is not a eunuch, but finally had it cut off this year?

You cultivate the origin and true spirit, so what are the origin and true spirit? You keep explaining that you seem to have said nothing. You were born in the upper world and the rules of the lower world were completed, and then you have also cultivated the laws of this life to the limit. Why are you so weak in terms of combat power? You write too many things that have nothing to do with the main plot, which makes people upset.

Tell a joke, the Venerable got lost in the lower world because of the rain, and can't fly without spiritual consciousness? Liu Shen was seriously injured because of the original solution to the rotten street in the first part? After being seriously injured, he was seriously injured by the rules of the lower world because he escaped to the lower world? Poor writing can be said to be a novice, poor logic can be said to be unfamiliar, and you just come to write a fanfic without even reading the original work? Why are you so tough-mouthed?

The idea of ​​describing the protagonist is so long-winded that I can't stand it at all.

Evaluation: Even when I was breathing, I was afraid that if I took one more breath of oxygen, the protagonist of the original work would take one less breath. But I still have to follow the route of Yuan's original work.

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You cultivate the origin and true spirit, so what are the origin and true spirit? You keep explaining that you seem to have said nothing. You were born in the upper realm and the rules of the lower realm have been completed, and then the laws of this world have been cultivated to the limit. Why are you so weak in terms of combat power? You write too many things that have nothing to do with the main plot, which makes people upset. The logic is simply messed up. It seems that the upper part cannot be connected to the lower part, and there is a lot of foreshadowing every time. What is the foreshadowing? This is not a problem of water, it is better than a verbal essay. At least the logic is smooth.