My Daily Life Cultivating Immortality and Exorcising Spirits in Chiba

If you don't like it, just scold it! There's no need to row it away!

There is a problem that is too big to be too small. The protagonist's cousin is just a freshman, that is, about 18 years old. However, the author's description always makes me feel that she is a mature woman in her thirties. The contrast is a bit big.

The author is suitable for development. The plot is a bit flawed, but the character description is very detailed. Please be sure not to go astray.

Should I say it or not, once I get into this, I have no desire to read it. It is best to limit the number of female protagonists in this kind of novel to three or four, and you have too many

I feel that the cost of low-level spirit stones is too high. You might as well have + reputation. How many books you sell will have points that can be exchanged for spirit stones. It has the power of incense or the ability to absorb various emotions of readers. It is more reliable than spending money to buy spirit stones. After all, real money is limited, especially if you exchange too much later~

I feel that the setting of the protagonist's immortality system is weird. If it is replaced by nouns such as level 15 x mana 40, etc., It doesn't feel inconsistent at all. There are also abilities, which feel just like playing skills in the game.

Starfish, but some plots are meaningless. It would be better to write more emotional exchanges. Some heroines have no emotional foundation at all. The protagonist should be more proactive 😰

There seems to be no drama in the school, and it is becoming more and more beautiful.

Assuming that the protagonist has not traveled through time, the heroines of the world after the original protagonist jumped into the river and committed suicide (I haven't finished watching yet, so I don't know if there are other heroines). The ending: Teacher (it's not clear whether this is the heroine): Still teaching, there is a high probability that ordinary people will spend their lives, and there is a small probability that they will pay attention to supernatural events out of curiosity. School Ghost Removal Club: Being attacked by the old man of Lingji Club (even if there is no plot, Hong Mao will obviously think of other ways), and the personal maid GG. Police Beauty: There is a small probability of Lingji Society incident gg, a small probability of other supernatural events gg, and a high probability of spending her life as a senior police officer. Innocent Neighbor: There is a high probability that the convenience store will start the youth version of the transformation plot after being deceived by the vice president or by others later. Hot girl from junior high school: There is a medium probability that you will end up with a good-looking passerby due to the initial favorable impression predicted by the zodiac sign, or that the male protagonist is special in cultivating immortals, so you will skip the enrollment event and spend an ordinary life with a passerby. Childhood sweetheart sister (the most miserable heroine): Ending 1: Knowing the death of the original heroine, she lost control and committed suicide. Ending 2.0 (The best ending) The relationship is not in place and because the parents have not yet committed suicide, the ending is single or ordinary (if you get married, I feel there is a high probability that you will be the good guy from the sorority. After all, in the current world line, you always say you have a boyfriend and then give up the pursuit). Ending 2.1 (A high probability event) was stalked by the rich and Yakuza background with a life-threatening female evil spirit behind him. After being repeatedly rejected, the male villain of the sorority forcefully forced him to do something in a certain period of time afterwards (after all, there was a female evil spirit behind him demanding life, which means nothing. What kind of stubble), and then there is a high probability of committing suicide 2.1.1 There is a small probability of being threatened by the parents. After getting tired of playing, the lucky man will be forgotten directly. Then if he is lucky, he can successfully take revenge (for example, when he meets a policewoman) or he will be killed and become an evil spirit. The lucky man can take revenge even if his amulet is gone. 2.1.2 There is a small chance that it is because the parents endured pain throughout their lives, but the good man may take over.

It's okay to slap in the face, and the routine is correct. It just feels good and ends in a numb way.