Hong Kong Comprehensive Development Starts with Distribution and Reservoir Guarding

He must be a eunuch. The words written at the beginning are at the level of a third grader, an elementary school student. Any adult does things. Let's just say this way of doing things is dead. You use the childish ideas and rhetoric of a third-rate gangster, or even a low-ranking gangster, to write about a policeman or even a senior inspector. Write a dean. Beyond childishness, there is only childishness left. If not, don't describe it. Exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses. Forced description is just an insult to yourself.

Choose an undercover agent to interview together? If you find out who is missing from the selection, won't you know who is the undercover?

The sentences are not fluent and difficult to understand. The male protagonist is unlikable and brainless

It's 3202 years old, why is there still a plot about the return of the Dragon King that belittles the protagonist? The number one in the police academy doesn't go undercover and just guards the pond. This number one is really worthless.

I've read a few chapters, but the writing is a bit messy and I don't have the desire to read on.

You got A+ in all subjects but never won the Silver Rooster Award? Pheasant Slasher Bobby was watching from the side. No one from other police stations came to investigate, and you still took in your own little brother. You might as well be an undercover agent and join the underworld. It's so classless!

Gather all the protagonists in a broken police station. What the hell is this?

At that time, you could have considered waiting for two years and then finding weapons to kill that yellow shit and the principal's family. Do you really think that bullying people doesn't have to pay the price? It was an era of daring to fight and fight hard, and what was needed was ruthlessness.

Just this job of guarding the pond, if you let it go to future generations, you won't be able to get in even if you don't have any connections.

Not only is it mindless, there are also a lot of typos.

It's not fun to be a eunuch before it's too late. To write about Hong Kong TV dramas, one has to have good writing skills or be a little unexpected. What future is there for someone who still follows the rules completely after being in Hong Kong TV dramas? Personally, I suggest you sit down and watch "Infernal Affairs?" How is it written "I am no longer a human being"? This is the brain circuit of a time traveler. You, a good boy, are not suitable for writing articles. You should think more about working honestly and saving money to buy a house in reality. Don't be as aggrieved in novels as in reality.

It's so embarrassing to pretend to be awesome😅

First of all, there is a problem with the word order, and then there is some contradiction, such as the part about the mad cow: it is described as a single horn at first, and then it is described as like a pair of daggers. The most important point is, he and she, he is used to describe men, and she is used to describe women. Don't give characters androgyny.

What the hell are you writing? It's a waste of time. It's so confusing. This book is done!

I scored 70 points at the beginning, but I can only give 7 points later. It seems that I have given up. There are various low-level writing problems and the sentences are not fluent. It is a pity.

This writing style is really bad, all kinds of words and sentences are all used blindly, the preface does not match the follow-up, why don't you even read it after you finish writing it, your sentence is very distorted, don't you even know it?

To be honest, the author's writing style is the worst I have ever seen. Basically, the first 100,000 words are not fluent, and the punctuation marks are used randomly. If the subject matter was not good, I would have abandoned the book long ago! Fortunately, Chinese characters can be guessed by combining the preceding and following languages. It is estimated that the author is a person with deep-rooted local language and is not used to the use of Chinese.

It's extremely poisonous. I've read a few chapters. The author just wants to win people's heads and serve as a pig's little brother, regardless of whether the plot is reasonable or not, and he messes with people randomly.

The author is not good. There are countless poisonous points. After reading 20 chapters, I may not be able to continue.

It is written like a sequel to Journey to the West.

It was so confusing that I felt dizzy, and I still didn't know what I was looking at.

If I write like this on the street, "I quit the job, will anyone read the bad principal and the dirty letter?"

I haven't read it yet, but as far as the introduction goes, the main character is doing the right thing! When you are an undercover agent, nine out of ten are covered! Even though some of them are alive, they may also be dead. The drug-addicted undercover cop is at least alive. There is only one person in a million who can come back from being undercover and be promoted and make a fortune.