I Choose the Rebellious Overlord Flower, Bai Yueguang, Why Are You Crying?

Isn't it a love drama? How did it become a commercial drama?

It starts well, but the writing is sloppy at the end. How do you say it? You say it is a novel about entertainment, but it doesn't look good. You say it is a system novel, and the system is of no use. You say it is a romance novel, and the male and female protagonists do not give people the feeling of being in love. You say it is a business novel, and it does not write anything commercial. You say it is fantasy, but it is not thorough enough and does not even have a general system. There is nothing entertaining about entertainment. What should I say? Throw in more things, but don't stuff everything, it will look different. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is pitiful, and they don't look like a couple. You can count the time the male and female protagonists spend together in the first hundred chapters. There is no emotional conflict between the male and female protagonists, it is more like a show. It is said that the female protagonist likes the male protagonist very much, but the author does not show it. After reading chapter 140, the interest is getting lower and lower. There is no point that can catch the eye. The plot is too out of the ordinary. One moment, he is in military training and the next moment, he is going to the film and television city. The male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are also ordinary. After the first time the female protagonist was kidnapped, the male protagonist still acted like a fool. He must have the awareness of precautions he should have. He seemed not to worry about anything. He did not write about the maturity of the male protagonist's rebirth. In terms of plot, the male protagonist seemed to have no clear purpose. The mark, it seems like there are four years to do what you should do to become the chief, but what is the male protagonist doing? Hanging out? There is no sense of urgency. The old lady of the Guo family will make a sense of presence from time to time. The one with the least presence is the cheap master of the male protagonist. If you don't mention it, I will almost forget that this person exists. You have to decide the direction of what you want to write. In the end, I feel that I can't write it anymore and I feel that I have spent 18 yuan in vain.

What are you writing about? Love or not, business or not, fantasy or not...

The beginning was quite interesting, but the whitewash of Li Xianxian instantly lost its focus. In her previous life, she hung up on the male protagonist and ruined her family. Now she is still entangled with her after her rebirth? I don't know what the author thinks

It's awesome that this novel requires money.

Excuse me, is this a cross-over? The first part is a romance drama, but the second part is a fantasy drama and I can't get out. It's really weird.

Hey😣I originally came here for love, but started to cultivate immortality

Author, do you know what I'm thinking now? If you dare to disclose your address, I will definitely send you 10,000 kilograms of blades. I'm so angry. I saw the rise and stopped updating. I saw the rise. There is no next chapter. I really want to kill you.

I can't stand it anymore, what are the next few chapters about?

Are there any fees for more than 20 chapters? ? ?

The timeline written in the previous article is 2006, why did it suddenly jump to 2016?

This is what I spend my money on, you can easily lose me

Write this sentence like this? How did you learn this language?

A few people came from Douyin 😰

Author, why don't you quickly pick up the new book? Also, don't charge so early, otherwise it will dissuade many book friends.

I know that writing novels is very hard for you, and sometimes you have to stay up late to update for us, but you should also pay attention to your health, and if you are not dead, update as soon as possible! 😡😡😡

What the hell, the heroine has been tied up for too long, right?

The protagonist is disgusting. He is self-righteous and the one he loves has no fear. Such a protagonist is really unacceptable.

Come on, come on, the male and female protagonists are so sweet to me

Can you update it faster? It's so painful to watch!

When can it be updated? It's better to update a thousand chapters