The Player Is Right

Sigh 😮‍💨 Mistakes newcomers make How can a character who interacted with the first chapter die within the first 10 chapters... There are too many words describing the supporting characters in the first chapter, and the protagonist's personality is not outstanding. On the contrary, the supporting characters are impressive. Before the reader has even taken the role of the protagonist, the supporting character worth watching dies The plot is suddenly separated, the sense of substitution is gone, and it is difficult to pick up later. At the same time, I think the plot is very messy, the characters are scattered and very unfocused. The camera does not follow the protagonist

Xiancao, if we maintain this level, we will be able to order over 10,000 by the time it is put on the shelves.

It is a time-travel novel with a game-like world view that is worth reading. The writing and prose are very good. At present, it seems that the world view is well established and the logic is rigorous. The protagonist's cheat (system) is not that powerful. The problem now is that there are too few words. The climax of the first volume ends with a bit of unfinished content.

No one has written a review, so I will write it here. I personally recommend this book. 1. I was attracted by the two reports after writing the first volume. The protagonist and villain's IQ is online, not an intelligence-degrading article. Although the presence or absence of these two chapters does not hinder the development of the plot and does not affect the reading, but with these two chapters, I feel that the villain in the novel is not mentally retarded. 2. Everything about the bottom layer of the worldview is directly explained to you by the "scientific logic" of that world. The system also explains the origin to you. You don't have to worry about guessing for a long time. The rest is the logical world in the Zhengerba Jing experience book. 3. Maybe it's because of the new author. He doesn't break chapters like other authors. The end of each chapter is a complete narrative. It feels like reading an early novel, and it feels very interesting while reading. With the rise of many broken chapters in novels, when reviewing the progress of small books, I will look forward to the next chapter every day at first. Later, as time goes by, I will start to read the book directly, save some to read, and then I will read it to death. If the time is a little far away, I will forget the previous content and abandon it without wanting to follow up. There are no obvious chapters in this book so far, and it feels good to read.

Too long not to read version: The writing is very good, even if it is not on the shelves, it is considered a funeral for the eunuch. It depends on your character. There is nothing else to say. Everyone has his own ambitions. Although it only shows a corner of the fantasy world, it is fascinating enough. Come on, I hope you will finish this book one day Indignant version: Knowing that you are a new author, why can't you accept that there are few readers at the beginning? Do you want to become a great god and reach the sky in one step without even finishing a hundred chapters or a single book? If you keep writing so well, you will naturally get more readers If you say that you are forced to make a living and can't wait, you can accept it. You feel that no one is criticizing you and your heart is broken. I really can't bear it. I have read many new authors writing books. They write very well but cut it after less than 100 chapters and feel that no one will read it. The good ones will make a statement, and the bad ones will disappear immediately. I don't know why you are all so anxious, you can't wait to publish one chapter and it will go viral It's really annoying that a good book has been cut, so I'll give you a few words. If I come back and start a new book in the future, I will still support it (provided that I really want to finish a book)

Although, why should the protagonist be written as a waste?

Absolutely, absolutely. Clear action goals, a complete worldview, rigorous logic, and excellent character creation. After watching the latest chapter in one go, the biggest problem I found is that it is too short now.

Let me translate it. The characters who appear in the first volume are too high-profile and the tone is too high, and it cannot be edited later.

Strange setting, not to mention the fact that the church has been hiding the truth for two hundred years, which can only exist in conspiracy theories, I don't understand why there is a drama where the church blocks the truth and then the protagonist lets the truth return to the world, and also sets the church as the villain. Even the simplest battle between good and evil in the Amber style basically collapsed in the later stage, you 🤫

I just finished cutting and started daily detoxification. It's hard to

Now that I'm gone, new authors will have to take their time reading books, and they might become eunuchs.

There aren't many Amber Streams, but they are well written. It's really misleading to be ignorant. Come on, author!

I strongly recommend Eunuch, 6. It seems that I won't recommend this position in the future.

It's too shabby. I discovered this book yesterday. It's one of the few new books that I could read in one sitting. I stayed up late to read it. As a result, I posted a chapter about eunuchs today 🙂

Rather than telling the player what he said is right, this article would rather call the protagonist what he said is right.

Go make a deal with someone else? You can't just write books and do publicity. Don't be anxious. I'm afraid you won't be able to survive without money.

Give me an outline at the end The end of the outline is also good. . Satisfy my curiosity

Alas, it's a pity. Just after the climax, the main plot was also formed, and it was cut when it was over. ╯╰

What a great book, but it's a pity that the author is not confident

It's very interesting. I don't regret reading this book. The pace is very comfortable. I just hope that I will have the chance to read this author's book next time.

What does amber flow mean?

The writing is really good, the setting is rich in imagination and research, the characters have different flavors but they are all charming. The famous scenes include "We are reconciled" and the sprouts born in the ashes. When can the author come back and reset the book? This is probably the most regrettable eunuch book in my heart.