I Have Been Fishing for a Long Time

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After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author's wording in many places is not appropriate. Is a fishing rod just a fishing rod? Why add lures? This situation suddenly changes a lot. What does it mean that the sword is dead? You wouldn't write that the sword body was severely damaged, the sword body was broken, the sword spirit was shattered, and it was irreparable. . . . . Many places are really awkward to read

The plot is too contrived. The protagonist is set up as a savior from the very beginning, and the rest of the story is doomed. It's just a show-off and a slap in the face, which is boring.

The time and space type is very contradictory, and it can also bring living creatures. So if I take the self from the last moment and bring it to the present, who is the real me?

From Chapter 2 to Chapter 14, the settings are constantly being updated, the cause of the original body's death, and the role of the golden finger? The truth of history? Old man Ding's soliloquy? Worldview? Cult? The so-called ancient method and modern method? Put it all into three places: the village, the blood river, and the Taoist palace. The dialogue reminds me of the writing in the role-playing games I played as a kid. .

Cultivation is written as playing a game. The protagonist relies on high-end equipment to pretend to be awesome. Cultivation means pretending to be awesome and upgrading. After pretending to be awesome, he will increase his cultivation level. Author, you should submit the book to the game section

If an ant doesn't practice well and does it every day, won't he die?

Idiom Solitaire: Time flies🙂

Where did the plastic bottle come from? I put a jug of old wine in it and served it.

I'm sure the author must have seen the World of Immortality

This book is okay, I have the desire to read it

Why can't I see it

Why are we abandoned and the world is still fine? Because the world is nothing. The world is not worth it. That's all.

Maybe you and I think everything about us is important but actually it's nothing.

For eternity, we are still in the feudal era, haha😊

Recommendation: The golden finger in this book is particularly interesting. The protagonist can use the time fishing rod to fish for various inheritances, treasures, and secrets from the river of time. The protagonist also relies on this golden finger to tell various events and stories. This book is a serious novel about cultivating immortals, but the writing style is light and funny, and the interactions with the supporting characters also reveal a sense of lightness in the seriousness. Book title: "I Fished in the Long River of Time" Author: Xin Ru Piao Miao Status: Serialized (90,000 words) Elements: Serious Cultivation of Immortality, Online IQ, Invincible Flow Recommended Reader Types: Cultivation of Immortality Flow, Invincible Flow, Funny Lovers Highlights of this book: ★The layout of this book is grand, and there are many foreshadowings The writing style of this book is relaxed, but the worldview pattern shown in the book is very grand, and various future-related foreshadowings are also well laid out ★Goldfinger has a novel setting and opens up the world Storyline The golden finger in this book allows the protagonist to fish out various opportunities from the long river of time, and the golden finger can lead to various events and characters to start the story line ★The details of the supporting characters are described in detail This book not only vividly describes the protagonists and villains, but also the various supporting characters. The psychology is also described in detail, making the story logic smoother {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}